GioRocket

GioRocket,
I think it's going pretty well so far. I think he should meet Sparky soon though, maybe not catch him right away but at least see him.

But all in all, do what you feel is best.

No problem, it was a fun read! There have been some times I've been off these forums for months at a time, so I'm not worried about it.

As for the next section, maybe message a mod about it if you can't find a good cut-off point? Or just find the best cut-off points you can, I guess. I can't really be more specific without seeing it.

Good luck!

GioRocket, No problem! It's a really good story!

I didn't want to bump the thread, but your Team Rocket story was good, and this is coming from someone who didn't really watch the show after the Orange Islands. I enjoyed reading it, if you ever come back to the forums I hope you continue it!