RE: The Eye (please read. Right now short but good quality.)
It seems very good so far. I can't wait until the next part. Just try to make your chapters a little longer. You don't have to make them humungous, but just don't make it tiny.
RE: Star Art-Pokemon Art.( Updated 1/1/10 2 New Drawings Rapidash and Primeape!)
I really like them. I like the Primeape better, though. But the Rapidash is still good.