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You can find my main characters to have this trait, as much of the story is out of their control for quite some time. Many characters in fantasy stories will have it to an extent and will not gain power for a while. The main difference between the generic kind and mine is that they prefer to...

How was year one? XD

Stubborn and/or arrogant despite being aware of their actual situation in reality. Often reliant on others if need be though some of my main characters might do it a bit reluctantly. Development of the character generally doesn't start until pretty late in the fiction. It makes for a rather...

Nice! I'm doing pretty well myself. Just found the time to get back around these forums.

RE: Outlet (Chapter Four) Yo. It's been a while. In fact, I think the last fanfic I've read of yours before this was The Price of Revenge, which was - what - back in 2011? ... Yeah, let's just move on before I feel really old. Because there's four chapters at the posting of this critique, it's...

Before I answer an of that, you're doing fine, right? Right? =w=

Anyone with decent disjoint hitbox or good range (not counting projectiles) will be on my list of considerations, as it's practically the characters I played in the earlier games. Greninja seems to be one of them, especially with those reaching aerials. Of course, I'd have to try out the...

Haiz! ^^/

The hell are you?

Is that Utsuho Reiuji? That is a surprisingly cute portrayal of Okuu. Anyhow, I really stopped by to ask you if you're still continuing Outlet and wanted a critique on it. I'd do Turtwig's fic, but yours is shorter and likely to be easier to read through first.

The graphic design of the units were rather lackluster (I know it's a handheld system, but units looked disappointingly polygonal). Music was fair, I'll give you that. Really, my biggest issue was the change of the influence with commanders. I really loved the old system, and the change kind of...

You're welcome.

Essentially what Athena said. Besides, you could argue about the over-representation of FE however you like, but I'm fairly certain more people in Smash Brothers community would recognize Robin than those who'd know Little Mac. Franchise representation is obviously going to be skewed and quite...

Basically, it's fine, but I still wanted to point out what you've done with the mood swing in the story.

I wouldn't call it unrealistic, but the event itself downplayed the Aron Ryan had received as his gift. So overall, the starting chapter was a tad bipolar in the sense that the bright mood was suddenly ruined, but it's still realistic.

In his defense, you were mercilessly laughing at his opinion, and he's only defending his point. In terms of popularity, Pokemon has had a huge head start from its long-established franchise, but Fire Emblem Awakening has sold over a million copies globally (the total sales for the latest two...

In the meantime, I have no reason to leave. I departed before only because I no longer had the time. Now I do. :P

Nice, nice. :D So how has PokeBeach been going so far? Anything really special that I missed during my hiatus?

Overall, quite well. Life sure enjoyed taking me places, even though I was fine where I was to begin with. You?

Many thanks, fellow staff alumni! :D