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--------------------------------------------------- Chapter IV: A Forgetful Farewell, Shedding Of a Humanity ---------------------------------------------------- “You will be taken back to your home and given two days to get your affairs in order. After which you will return to me.”...

--------------------------------------------------- III: An Extended explanation, Avoidance of a Mortality ---------------------------------------------------- "Now, if everyone did last night's assignment this question should not strain your feeble little minds: of all the Pokémon species...

RE: Evolution Of Fable --------------------------------------------------- II. An Unsettling hatching, Rediscovery of a self. ---------------------------------------------------- The worm. Choking... gagging my breath. Feasting upon my soul with eyes of blood red ruby. Its skin, snow...

An extra note to Pokebeach forums: This my my baby fic, I have been working on it for three years now. It is the fic I am best known for, and I hope to find new readership here who will enjoy reading it as much as I do writing it :) 'Realistic family photo' AKA 'If We Were Pure' art...

Hmmm..The framework of your story is there but it could becom even better if you fleshed it out with more detail, right now you are doing more telling had showing, for example: "He went into the room and destroyed everything in sight." Show us how he did that, make the reader feel as if...

Your writing style is very choppy and could use a lot of work. Remember, a fanfic is a story and trying to put in epic poem format when it is not written as such does nothing but draw away readers. Decide on a format and pacing, ether the long flow of narrative or the measured meter of a poem...

RE: Official Newbie Topic Hi you guys :)! You may know me from all the other forums I am a member of, I focus mainly on fanfic writing and play the the pokemon video games, as well as watching the anime. I'm a girl and live in Cali :)