Writing A Time for Darkness

LordDarkrai

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This will at first sound a lot like PMD2 but I have the whole storyline figured out and it is actually way different.
Prologue
A horrible gray fog clung to the cold cobblestone path as a dark figure moved quickly like a shadow across it. It looked around nervously then quickly slipped through a wall.

“Greetings Lord Darkrai,” it said in a feminine voice kneeling before a seventeen foot tall black dragon-like creature whose blue eyes seemed to be able to pierce through ones soul.

“Greetings Mismagius,” it said in an ancient whispery voice. “I assume the plan is coming into play? Will I have to stay in this Lugia’s body for long?”

Mismagius nodded “Yes, Arbok, Hypno, and Absol are hiding the time gears while Rhyperior and Aggron are destroying the temporal tower, and Dusknoir is making a name for himself as an explorer, just as you planned. And no you will not have use for Lugia's body much longer.” Mismagius smiled.

“Good” it said menacingly, “now for your new assignment.” Darkrai almost laughed. “You will capture the legendary pokemon, and infect them, understood”

Mismagius nodded, “Yes I understand, but what if I can’t-“

Darkrai cut her off “You will succeed, failure is not an option.” Darkrai said simply.

Mismagius nodded again, she knew what would happen if she failed, Darkrai would kill her or worse. “Yes.”

“Good, then you are dismissed,” Darkrai said coldly. As the ghostly form left the room Darkrai smiled. “It won’t be long now, even if Suicune stands in my way. What can he do? Soon I will be restored to my former power!” A horrible cackle rang through the corridor.
 
Interesting.
A horrible gray fog clung to the cold cobblestone path as a shadowy figure moved quickly like a shadow across it. It looked around nervously then quickly slipped through a wall.
Poor word choice, vary it a little.
“Good, then you are dismissed,” Darkrai said coldly. As the ghostly form left the room Darkrai smiled. “It won’t be long now, even if Suicune stands in my way. What can he do? Soon I will be restored to my former power!” A horrible cackle rang through the corridor.
Fixed in bold.

Short but a good plot.
 
um.......
ya! Suicune is the wind pokemon.
of course.
If there's a black fog, Suicune can use Defog ( in Diamond and Pearl ).
but anyway.
u can't see Suicune in D and P version.
 
Actually it can, see theres these things called the mystery part and the secret stone slab that enable you to find legendaries, thus Suicune would be on the 29th floor of the final maze, and plus this is set in-between the 1st and second games, so...

And also Suicune could use defog, but he doesen't know the dungeon Darkrai is in. which is a problem later on.
 
Sorry it's late (and short) heres Chapter 1. Narrated by Grovyle!

Chapter 1 (Grovyle)

A drop of dew fell from the tree it began it’s descent first with ease, but slowly very slowly it was stopping, until it’s progress suddenly stopped in midair, all had become silent, the light of the sun was no more.

At least that was how I imagined it, everyone did, it was the beginning of a time of Darkness that was now at it’s peak. I hated it and that was why Ryuu, my human partner, and best friend, and I were walking through the gloomy grey forest. If it could be called that, the trees were all dead, their naked branches reaching up into the mist that loomed overhead like a storm-cloud.

I could tell Ryuu hated it too, his bright blue eyes were cast downward, his shoulders slumped to his thin waist.

On the other hand Celebi was looking cheery as always, her piercing green eyes glistening with excitement. She had reason to be cheerful, if our plan worked this forest would soon be beautiful and green again, as I had imagined it. And Suicune would be able to free all those who were infected. Those whose wills were twisted to the evil power of Darkrai and whose eyes glowed blue, giving off an Aura of false security.

We stopped to rest in a clearing, we were almost there, and no one who would mean them any harm was around. I looked over at Ryuu, and instantly knew the boy was tired, he didn’t have half as much stamina as Celebi or myself. But then I realized with a start that I was tired too. My muscles ached from slashing all the dead branches in our way. I lied down, and without knowing it fell into a deep slumber.

When I awoke I immediately questioned Celebi as to how much time I had slept. “Oh, just about six hours, Ryuu woke up a couple minutes ago.”

This scared me six hours was too long, for all I knew Dusknoir, or Mismagius could be within shouting distance. “We have to go,” I said to nobody in particular. So we did, and made fairly productively, Ryuu hit his head on a branch once, and Celebi and I had a couple bruises and burn marks, the bruises mostly from the many varieties of Rock types, and the burn marks from the young Vulpix inhabiting the area.

And it wasn’t long before we reached our destination, a portal leading to the past. A sudden wave of terror entered me. It didn’t look like I had expected it, a swirling distorted area in space. It looked like… a void. Where nothing could survive, I thought about Ryuu, he had been my only friend before I entered the order. Even if just he were to not make it, well the truth was without Ryuu I wouldn’t really know what to do, he wasn’t just a friend but the abilities he had… not only was he capable of purification, but he had another ability, one that’s power and purpose were beyond my comprehension.

But I knew that if the world as it was were in the past where they were about to journey too, that sacrifices had to be made, they all knew that. So grimly, he hurled himself into the portal.

It wasn’t as bad as I had imagined it. I could feel hmy partner’s presences around him, and it was so… exhilarating, it was like flying without limits, I could go anywhere I wanted in the flow. It was barely apparent in my mind that I should probably stay with the others. I lost Ryuu’s presence for a second so he zoomed back. Then so suddenly that it made his whole body jerk in pain, I was out of the portal. Light flooded into view and I was momentarily blinded. I could just barely make out the form of Celebi in fron of me. Then as my vision adjusted, I saw the sun for the very first time. Inside me a mixture of happiness that I could see it, and sadness that nobody that I knew would ever see it again. I looked around me and saw that Celebi was about to go back through the portal. “Bye friend!” she said gleefully and sped through the disappearing portal.

As I watched her go I realized with a start that one key thing was missing. Ryuu. In all my excitement I had forgotten him, I looked around but saw nothing just specks of sunlight darting across the emerald grass. I looked around at the trees, the sun, and the bird Pokémon, and I sullenly walked in the direction of salvation, feeling terrible that Ryuu would never be able to see any of this. Which made the beauty of it vanish, leaving a coat of sadness on my shoulders. But something inside me todl me that I would see him again. So I got to work.

Feel free to Critisize (Constructively), And/Or rate!
 
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