Another one of the many songs i've been writing for a while. If anyone can catch the story this song is referencing to, you get a cookie. Here's a hint, The title is shakespeare, but the song isn't.
Fathers' song she sang
Atop her highest balcony
As the sky advanced to twilight
He stood and appealed to she
"Come down with me fade with me
Baby, you are constrained no more."
She said "So daring and devious but
With you I could never live in peace"
Oh the day that she will cave
At night so swift "I'm here
I'm waiting, I'm slaving, for you
I'd burn in hell and face
The man in your dreams
And yet you burn me alive"
With poise, and power, and wit
The lies so daftly he spit
Forked and rancid, oh she screamed
"Who is the being that I see,
Is this what you will always be?
Oh father, father I was wrong
He appeared so perfect outside"
Cruel world I thought I had known
Oh the day that she will cave
At night so swift "I'm here
I'm waiting, I'm slaving, for you
I'd burn in hell and face
The man in your dreams
And yet you burn me alive"
"Oh why what have I done to you
Will I ever be free again?"
"Right now" he said with a smile
"Follow me down, you're coming with me.
To hell we both decend.
You won't deny me now"
The words that she never said
Seal them into their place
And here, again, I burn
For you, my love, I burn.
Oh the day that she will cave
At night so swift "I'm here
I'm waiting, I'm slaving, for you
I'd burn in hell and face
The man in your dreams
And yet you burn me alive"
Oh the day that she will cave
At night so swift "I'm here
I'm waiting, I'm slaving, for you
I'd burn in hell and face
The man in your dreams
And yet you burn me alive.
And once again I burn
For you, my love, I burn."
I hope hell didn't get censored too much, i used it like 8 times. :3 Anyways, I'd like to hear opinions, I want to hear what you guys think it's about, and yeah. Thanks.
Fathers' song she sang
Atop her highest balcony
As the sky advanced to twilight
He stood and appealed to she
"Come down with me fade with me
Baby, you are constrained no more."
She said "So daring and devious but
With you I could never live in peace"
Oh the day that she will cave
At night so swift "I'm here
I'm waiting, I'm slaving, for you
I'd burn in hell and face
The man in your dreams
And yet you burn me alive"
With poise, and power, and wit
The lies so daftly he spit
Forked and rancid, oh she screamed
"Who is the being that I see,
Is this what you will always be?
Oh father, father I was wrong
He appeared so perfect outside"
Cruel world I thought I had known
Oh the day that she will cave
At night so swift "I'm here
I'm waiting, I'm slaving, for you
I'd burn in hell and face
The man in your dreams
And yet you burn me alive"
"Oh why what have I done to you
Will I ever be free again?"
"Right now" he said with a smile
"Follow me down, you're coming with me.
To hell we both decend.
You won't deny me now"
The words that she never said
Seal them into their place
And here, again, I burn
For you, my love, I burn.
Oh the day that she will cave
At night so swift "I'm here
I'm waiting, I'm slaving, for you
I'd burn in hell and face
The man in your dreams
And yet you burn me alive"
Oh the day that she will cave
At night so swift "I'm here
I'm waiting, I'm slaving, for you
I'd burn in hell and face
The man in your dreams
And yet you burn me alive.
And once again I burn
For you, my love, I burn."
I hope hell didn't get censored too much, i used it like 8 times. :3 Anyways, I'd like to hear opinions, I want to hear what you guys think it's about, and yeah. Thanks.
