Writing Angela, a godess of physic power

HolyMackerel

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Okay, I wrote this for english, but it turned out pretty good, so I posted it here.







I knew this was going to be strange.
Ballistic, even.
But I didn't know how hard it was going to be.
To leave.
To let go.



“But Lord!” I yelped.
“Angel, this is final, if I abandon this dimension for you, the Universe will be in destruction. And you know I can't do that.” My dad replied.
This is how hard it is to be the daughter of the Ruler of the Universe. My dad has to go and stop a dimension from destruction, and I have to visit Earth while hes gone. I am Angela, Angel for short. I am called by humans sometimes Athena (Greek), Mary (Christian),
Yolkai Estan (Navajo), Aataentsic (Iroquois), Benten (Buddhist), Feng-Po (China), Hathor (Egypt), Hanna Hanna (Hittite), Ix Chel (Maya), Kali (Hindu), Macha (Ireland), and Mbaba Mwana Waresa (Zulu).
Yes, I am a goddess. What is my power? Basically anything Physic. I can read minds, turn invisible, physic forcefields, and much, much more. My dad just doesn't trust me to control the Universe for a short week. My dad is basically called a lot of names, I can't count them all. I am 1400 tears old, he should let me by now, but nope, my portal will be ready for me in 3 hours, and I have to pack.
I come out of the portal, ready to go, I look like a normal fourteen year-old girl, except I have the power, and immortality of a goddess, just in case some idiot decides to attack me. I have everything ready, I decided to visit San Fransisco, since it was my favorite place on Earth, since I was in a subway station, I pulled out my green card, and walked inside. I looked at all of the places I could possibly visit. I decided to visit the San Fransisco Academy of Art. I love to make art, Dad even let me build Madagascar, ALL BY MYSELF. I walked in the train, and it was quite full, even though it was summer. I took a seat by a boy with brown curly hair and glasses. He was a bit taller then me, but he looked my age, and none to dangerous. He was very shy at first, but eventually he broke the ice.
“Hey, I'm Mathew, whats your name?” the boy asked.
“Angela, Angel for short.”
“Nice to meet you, have you lost your parents?” Mathew asked.
“No, there on a business trip, and the room in a hotel that was reserved for me, has been taken since I was late.”
“Oh...thats too bad....”Mathew said “Hey! I know, you can stay with my sister at the Academy of Art! If you don't trust me, heres is both of our Ids.”He handed me two cards, and the both were real, and as I read his mind, I didn't read any danger, he was safe, and what he was doing was part of his job, he had a homeless center, he was MEANT to help me.
“Okay, these look good, hey isn't this the stop?” I asked.
“Yup, come on, follow me.”Mathew said as he grabbed my hand and led out of the train and through the streets of San Fransisco. Eventually we reached the Academy of Art, and we walked inside.
We first signed into a reception desk, and then we rode the elevator to the third floor, we walked out, to see a hallway with three doors, Mathew led me to the middle door. I saw a bigger, female version of Mathew, and she was all alone, concentrating on the BEAUTIFUL sculpture she was making. We watched her for a while, but then, she realized that she wasn't alone.
“Hello Mathew, who's your friend? Does she need to go to the HC?”The woman asked.
“No, she's not homeless, her hotel just let her down, and you need a room mate.” Mathew explained.
“Well, lets see.” she said as she guided herself away from the sculpture. “How old are you?” she asked.
“I am fourteen.” I answered.
“Okay, do you admire, or make art?”She asked.
“Both.”I answered
“Good, are you a neat freak?” she asked.
“Nope, not at all.” I replied
“Good, I am Grace, and you are my niece, visiting from Oklahoma, and you are welcome to stay in my dorm with me.”
“Thanks, I appreciate your help.” I praised.
“No problem, now Mathew, show her around the campus while I wash myself and start dinner.”Grace ordered.
“Okay.”Mathew said as we started getting up. We walked out of the building. Mathew led me around the campus, but eventually we were tired, and we walked back to the dorm and ate. I went to bed early, because I was “tired” from walking around the campus, but really, gods and goddesses don't sleep. I sneaked outside, I thought that if I calmed my mind, I could see a vision, but I had to take off the charm that was blocking my powers first. I rested it on the table, and calmed my mind. I saw my charm, fall slowly to the ground, and break in half. I couldn't understand it, and I struggled the whole night about it, you could say I was restless, but I don't sleep.
Morning came, and I was confused as ever about the vision. Grace left to continue her sculpture, so me and Mathew were left around to do pretty much anything, as long as it was safe. We were in Grace's dorm and we started talking about art.
“So, do you make art?” Mathew asked.
“Yes, but right now I want to make a trip to breakfast.” I said. Mathew laughed,and we walked to Starbucks, while I enjoyed my hot chocolate with a blue berry muffin, and Mathew enjoyed a cinnamon roll with a Coke.
“What kind of art do you make?” I asked.
“I design houses.”he answered
“Cool, can I see?” I asked. Mathew answered by handing me several designs of his.
“These are good!” I exclaimed.
“Thank you, do you have some of you work?” He asked.
My thoughts were “Of course, just go to Madagascar.”, but I said, yes, and handed him some of my pastel paintings. He looked at them, and then said they were good, and we finished our food and walked outside.
That's when it happened.
The Earth violently shook beneath us, the charm hanging around my neck fell, and crashed against the ground, and broke in half. I became horrified as I realized that my vision had come true, and it was to late for me to stop it. People were crashing to the ground, some at wrong angles, causing bones to break. The Earth was torn apart, and when all damage could possibly be done, the Earth stopped its violent shake. Mathew and I were fine, compared to many others. Some people were seriously hurt.
“Are you okay?” I asked in worry to Mathew.
“Fine, are you?” He asked as he started to get up.
“Good. We need to see if your sister is okay.” I said.
We walked around in silence, afraid that if we opened our mouths, we burst out bawling. The god that caused earthquakes, except for the fact of where he lived. He's going to have some explaining to do. We finally reached the building where Grace left to. As I walked inside, I knew that if any sudden danger came to us, I would use my powers, this time, there was no charm stopping me. We took the stairs, because the electricity was out, the building looked like it was about to crumple. We finally got to Grace's floor, and as I opened the door to her room, the roof crumpled on top of us.
I knew what I had to do.
I saved Mathews life by setting out a forcefield, and Mathew gaped at me in shock.
“I'm sorry.” I said. Mathew just gaped at me, in shock. I could have left, right there, made him think it was a hallucination, stopped him from knowing who I really am. But I couldn't let Grace die. I walked inside. Grace's chest was being crushed by the sculpture, I pushed it off of her but the weight of the sculpture caused the ground to creak around me. I slowly stood back up, but before I knew it, I was crashing down, falling floor by floor, losing Grace an Matt out of my sight. My immortality only made me look young forever. Tears came out of my eyes as I realized that I was going to die.








“Angela, Angel, wake for your father.” a voice said. I arose out of my bed, in wonder if it was all a dream.
“You...saved me didn't you? You must have used the emergency portal.” I said to my father.
“Only for you.” He said as he gave me a smile. Sure, I was greatly happy that I was alive, but I wondered about Matt and Grace, no, let me rephrase that. I worried, about Matt and Grace. Eventually, the question had to come out.
“Father, are my friends okay?” I asked with worry.
“What? The humans you mean? You were only there two days, there fine-”
“Where is he?” I asked.
“Whom?”
“The god of Earthquakes....Kun-Ra.” I answered.
“Angel...you shouldn't do that.”
“I wish to only converse with him.” I lied.
“As you wish..” My Father reluctantly said as he opened the portal. I went through, to reach a cave.
“Why, hello Angel what a SUPRISE to see you.” the sneaky voice said.
“You know why I'm here Kun-Ra, the humans didn't deserve that, and I was endangered by you, and was almost killed.”
“Well, those useless humans deserved it, YOU just happened to be in the way. You don't really care for them, do you? I'm mean, soon enough, we should just destroy their whole entire race.” Kun-Ra said, with an evil grin escaping his lips.
“Those are useless humans, you say?” I said as I clenched my fists
“If those are useless, then you are worthless. All you do is create pain and suffering, and for no good reason. Those people are ANYTHING but useless. In fact, they are three times as useful as you!” I said, as my anger dramatically increased.
“I will not be spoken to in such a tone!” Kun-Ra said as he raised his fists. I knew there was going to be a fight. And I was ready. I flashed invisible, causing him to miss his punches. He made the ground shake and toss, and boulders crashed. But I was too fast for them. I put small forcefields around my hands, using them like boxing gloves against Kun-Ra, until the point where he was begging for mercy.
“Please,” Kun-Ra begged “Please, please, stop.” I stopped, and looked him in the eye.
“You have the power to re-start this, and make it better. You will brainwipe, everyone everywhere, except for me and you. I'm going to start this trip all over again, and YOU aren't going to mess it up. Understand?” I ordered. Kun-Ra frantically nodded.
“You will follow those orders, tonight.” I said as I walked away, knowing that he was going to obey me.

I found Mathews location on earth, and made a portal, and took it. Mathew was too concentrated on his sister to see me. I looked at Grace. She was very pale, and was barely breathing. Grace must have been to heavy to take the down the stairs safely, I guessed.
“Mathew?” I called. Mathew turned around to look at me, with a blank, sorrowful face, it only lightened up a little when he saw I was alive.
“I...can try to heal her, you know, kind of like what I did earlier.” I offered. Mathew only nodded, and scooted away from his sister. I walked to her, and sat beside her. I placed my hands on her heart, and I started using the sacred chants I learned from my father. White light glowed from me, and I stayed calm as I waited for Grace to heal. When I was about to give up, Grace suddenly, sat up, gasping for air. I was overjoyed, and so was Mathew, but Grace was tired, she wasn't even supposed to be alive now. We laid her down outside, since now we could carry down stairs. I would have laid down as well, but Mathew looked anything but tired. There was a long pause, I didn't know what to say. Evening was coming, and soon, this was all going to be out of existence.
“How..did you do it?” Mathew asked slowly.
“I am a goddess, I came hear in disguise, I didn't realize that this was all going to happen. I am sorry.”
“Is it okay if I ask questions?” Mathew asked.
“Yes.”I said, knowing that he was going to forget it in a few hours anyway.
“Okay, so what do you usually look like?”
I answered by changing to my favorite form, Atremis.
“Wow.” Mathew said, almost scared.
“Mathew, I will be leaving soon.” I said as the sun reached the horizon.
“Will you ever be back?” Mathew asked.
“Of course,but you won't remember me.”
“Thats fine, as long as you promise to meet me.”
“Yes, I'll miss you, for now.” I said, as I opened my portal, and watched to world rewind itself back home.


I smiled as I opened the portal to the familiar subway station. I pulled out my green card, and picked out the train that I did last time. Mathew sat in the third seat back, reading a book. I smiled at the fact that this was going to start all over. As the train started, Mathew put down his book, it looked like he just finished.
“Was it a good book?” I asked.
“Yes, actually it was.” He said with a grin “My name is Mathew, whats yours?”
I grinned.
“My name is Alexis, you can call me Lexi, for short.” I said, as I held out my hand. Mathew shook it, with a grin of the sun.
 
Hey good job Gwyn!
Great read!
Normallly I wouldn't like that sort of stuff but that wasn't bad at all.
 
Thanks, while I finished it, I realized that it was 5 pages, one more than my teacher asked, but hey, thats more work for him!
:D
 
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