Thanks for the suggestion, IA.
I did spend some time working on the tail and when I had it curled in front, it definitely looked a lot more natural. My own cat tends to sit with his tail off to the side like that, but I guess I just couldn't capture it right.
Anyway, here's finished Umbreon!
Umbreon was originally going to be a spiritual successor to the derpy-legged Espeon, but I couldn't get the pose to work and somehow ended up with this instead. For the first time, I used a slightly new lining technique, where I only used the thicker marker for the major body parts and did the face and accents (in this case, the rings) in a thinner pen. While this did require more clean-up of those thin line sections, I think overall it worked really well and stopped those detailed bits from losing too much detail. You can see the just-scanned lines version here for a better shot of how that looked on paper
Anyway, here's finished Umbreon!

Umbreon was originally going to be a spiritual successor to the derpy-legged Espeon, but I couldn't get the pose to work and somehow ended up with this instead. For the first time, I used a slightly new lining technique, where I only used the thicker marker for the major body parts and did the face and accents (in this case, the rings) in a thinner pen. While this did require more clean-up of those thin line sections, I think overall it worked really well and stopped those detailed bits from losing too much detail. You can see the just-scanned lines version here for a better shot of how that looked on paper