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Negative Zero

Negative Zero

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Prologue:

It was 20 years after Ang defeated the Fire Lord and died with him. My mother Katara married Zuko since Ang died. They grew liking each other. I was born crying in my mother's arm. "Katara we found the identety of the new Avatar!" One of the villagers shouted. "Who is it!" Katara shouted. "It's your son Davis!" The Villager shouted again. I was in my mother's arms not knowing I was the new Avatar.

If you wanna be a character here is the form.

Name:
What Nation:
Are you a bender:
If your not a bender do you have a skill:
 
Ok bulbasaur your in.

Chapter 1

I was 13 year old boy doing my chores. All I did was catch some fish with a little Water Bending, then I left where the fortresses to check up on our defenses, then I would care for the fish that needed lots of help they were sick to be exact, but one day i was called into the house early by my Mom, Katara and my Dad, Zuko. "Wat is it Mom and Dad you called me in early. I haven't finished my chores yet!" I complained. "We thought it was time to tell you the news that will change your destiny." Katara said softly like she was about to cry. Zuko held Katara tight trying to comfort her. "There There Katara hold your self together." Zuko whispered. Katara stopped crying trying to hold it in. Her tears were overflowing with sadness and happiness. Dad kept holding her tight. "You are the new Avatar." Katara said softly. Then I froze starring at them like they were mad men. "Are you serious." I said.
They were nodding there heads slowly. Mom started to cry again crying till she could cry no more. "Were already in peace an harmony." I complained. "Nope I was checking around the Fire Nation but they seem to b under command of another leader." Dad explained. "That can't be right!" I shouted. "Some of the Fire Nation is still loyal to me." Zuko started. "That's good." I interrupted. "When you were born I was infromed you were the avatar. Then I inspected you to see if you had any scars and it turned out you did. It was the Ancient Water Symbol." Mom interrupted. Then I froze staring at my parents while my Mom swelled up with tears crying and Dad holding her tight.
~End of Chapter~
 
Yay! An Avatar fan fic! I love avatar!

Name: Kiolu
What Nation: Earth
Are you a bender: Yes, Earth bender
If your not a bender do you have a skill: A Bender, but is skilled with his scimitar.
 
Name: Kit
What Nation: Earth
Are you a bender: Heck yea! Earthbending's only the coolest.
If your not a bender do you have a skill: Can also bend metal, mother is Toph, he too is blind.

Avatar pwns. I love it.
 
I like this.
Name: Peter
What Nation: Earth
Are you a bender: Yep. Earth bending and Metal bending.
If you are not a bender do you have a skill: I can play guitar, metal songs.
 
Chapter 2

I was in my room waiting for the day to end since no one wanted to play with me. "I wish Sozu was here." I said. Sozu was my Best Friend he had to move to the Northern Tribe, we write now and then, but it would be nice to see him again. Then Mom came in and said "I know it's hard but you'll get use to it and the others will to." "How Can they when I ever go outside everyone keep bowing down to me! I can't live like I'm an evil tyrant or something!" I shouted. "Well your going to start your Fire Bending Training!" Mom shouted. "Mom I don't want to be the Avatar!" I shouted even louder this time. " It's your destiny!" Mom shouted.
"Do you think anyone asked me if I wanted to be the Avatar NO!!" I screamed. The whole house shook and everyone outside covered their heads. "Your starting Fire Bending Training in a hour by your favorite fishing spot be thee." Mom said calmly and walked away.

~End of Chapter~

Sorry if there was no action

Oh Silver that was my 1st time
 
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