Eh, it probably would get censored when going into English translation, but that's not going to stop me! ^_^It looks so good! Now this is a good fake. That second attack name though sounds a bit wrong As if it isn't meant for children's eyes...
Eh, it probably would get censored when going into English translation, but that's not going to stop me! ^_^It looks so good! Now this is a good fake. That second attack name though sounds a bit wrong As if it isn't meant for children's eyes...
Hmm ... the colors are a little busy imo. It might be tied together better if you put some kind of effect of the same reddish color on the far left, around where the foresty thing is now?Yeah, uh, I agree the effects are a bit dodgy, hence the development hell. I may go back and take a look at it with that all in mind. The idea with the red lights was to match with the eyes; any ideas how to tweak it so they work a bit better? Or would you say its a bit too busy with all the colours?
Perhaps sparkles, or GlowBalls, or a wind-like effect like on the Noivern BKT theme deck wallpaper? A lot of the XY wallpapers have really cool effects ready to be cut out and used.The green forest stuff was basically a 'quick, I need to put something there'. Any ideas on what I could replace it with?
Nah, all the critique is good, especially for things like effects. I'm not particularly good at coordinating colours and effects well at the moment. (I need to go back to my Uxie-EX for this very reason.)How about removing the green and changing all the cyan effects with magenta?
FAKE EDIT: basically what jabber said.
To be honest, I'm hardly the best person to give advice about the official mega style; in my opinion, it's far too garish and the color tends to go all over the place, without harmony; those letters alone are enough, but they add those effects, ugh. So take this suggestion with a lot of salt, since harmony might not be what you need here.
Nah, all the critique is good, especially for things like effects. I'm not particularly good at coordinating colours and effects well at the moment. (I need to go back to my Uxie-EX for this very reason.)
I'll see about changing the cyan to magenta. It could change the problem with the red flashes that Jabber pointed out.