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Bonsly

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Ok I decided to start my own fanfic so here it goes.

It's basiclly just about a boy named Levi and his journies in Sinnoh.





CHAPTER 1: New Beginnings!


It was early in the morning when Levi's alarm clock woke him up. It was about 3:00 in the morning when Levi was all ready to go get his starter pokemon from Prof. Rowan. While his mom was still asleep, he went downstairs, ate breakfeast, and left a note on the door for his mom, saying that he would be back in a few hours. He had to get an early start if he was to make to Sandgem town in time to get his starter pokemon. He grabbed his bike, and zoomed off. But as he rode on he thought to himself "Did I forget something?" and as he rode on he realized that he had forgotten to bring the directions to get to Sandgem Town with him. It was too late for him to turn back now, so he stopped at the first house he saw. "Hello?" Levi called out as he banged on the door. After a few minutes an elderly man stepped out onto the porch. "Are you out of your mind young man?! It's only 5:30 in the morning!" The old man said. "I need to get to Sandgem town as soon as possible. It's very urgent!" Levi replied. The man gave him a strange look, and replied "Young man, you are in Sandgem Town." Levi looked as the man point to a sign the said Sandgem Town. The old man then closed the door, and Levi went to a cafe that was already open across the street and stayed there until 7:00 AM. Levi arrived at Prof. Rowan's lab at 7:05 AM, and walked in. A man at a desk looked up at Levi, and they both looked at eachother and at the same time said "You?!" The man sitting at the desk was the man that Levi had met earlier that morning. "Are you Prof. Rowan?" Levi asked. The man replied "I certainly am. What brings you here?" "I came for my starter pokemon." Levi said. Levi then handed him a card that he had. Prof. Rowan studied the card, and then replied "I'm sorry to say this but your one day late. However one have one pokemon left. No one wanted it because it won't obey a single thing you tell it." "I'll take it." Levi said. Prof. Rowan then pulled out a pokeball from his desk, along with a leash. He then said to Levi "Here, you will need this." He handed Levi the leash and pokeball, with five other pokeballs. Levi then walked outside, wondering what pokemon was inside the pokeball he had recieved. As he through the pokeball, a Piplup came out of it. He quickly put the leash on it and tied the other end to his wrist. "Hi there little guy" Levi said. The Piplup turned around and started to use Peck on Levi. Levi started to scream for help when Prof. Rowan came outside. Prof. Rowan, let out a laugh, grabbed Piplup's pokeball and returned Piplup back inside of it. Levi got up, dusted himself off, and thanked Rowan for his help. "It's no problem. Here, I forgot to give you these." He then handed Levi a pokedex and a poketech. Levi thanked him again and headed back off to Twinleaf town. As he rode along he nearly ran into a boy running from something. "What's the matter?" Levi asked him. The boy didn't answer and continued to run. It hadn't even been a minute when Levi ran into a flock of angry Starly. They charged right into Levi knocked him off his bike, but he had left Piplups pokeball in the basket. And as he was fell to the ground, Piplup was released from the pokeball. Piplup again started to use Peck on Levi, until he saw the Starly headed after Levi. Piplup then jumped up and started to attack the Starly, only until the surrounded him and started to attack him. Levi saw this and jumped over the Starly and landed on top of Piplup. Piplup squaqued a little but was protected by Levi's body. Holding onto his head, Levi screamed at Piplup "Get out of here!" But Piplup did nothing. Levi screamed it at him again, but this time Piplup stood up, and started to use Whirlpool to save him and Levi. But the Starly would not leave or even move for that matter. Piplup tried it again and again but the Starly would just not move. Finally Levi grabbed a stick and through it up in the air and the Starly went after it. Levi screamed at Piplup again "Go on get out of here!" But this time, Piplup started to turn completely blue. After a few seconds the stick landed next to Piplup and the Starly can swooping down, and just right before they hit him, Piplup let loose a huge Whirlpool attack. It sent all of the Starly flying away. Piplup then walked over to Levi, and held out his hand. Levi (who was on the ground) grabbed it as Piplup helped him up. Levi grabbed him and put him in his basket but Piplup jumped ontop if his head. Levi then got on his bike and rode home. As he opened the door he saw his mom, Anneand her Eevee, waiting for him. "So I see you got a Piplup." Said his mom as Levi put Piplup on the ground. Immediately Piplup started to explore. The first thing he found was leftover berries in the fridge. He grabbed them and started to eat them. "So Levi, where are you going next?" His mom asked him. "Jublife City." Levi replied. After about an hour Levi found Piplup and started to head out to complete his dream, to become the champion of Sinnoh. As he started to leave his mom yelled out "Be careful honey!" "I will mom!" Levi replied. He rode on to Jublife city, but as he a strange man was watching him from a shadow. Levi thought he saw something move, but it was probablly nothing.





Well that's the end of Chapter 1. Please let me know what you think of it, and if you think I need to improve on anything please let me know. Chapter 2 will be up a bit later.





EDIT: Here is Chapter 2: CHAPTER 2: Abra, Kadabra, Alakazam!!!



Riding on to Jublife City, Levi passed up Sandgem Town, rode on through Route 202, and finally came up to Jublife City. It was in the evening when Levi and Piplup got there. He wanted to stop by the training school but when he got there a sign on the door said "Closed" so Levi decided to rest for the rest of the night. In the morning he went over to the school (which was now open) but there was no one there but the Janitor.

"Where is everybody?" Levi asked. The Janitor looked up and said "Class field trip, Route 203."

Levi headed over to Route 203 and when he got there he saw a large group of people standing around in a circle. As he got closer he saw an Abra next to a lady (probablly the teacher) talking to the children sitting in a circle. Levi decided to join them. "Can Abra teleport anywhere?" Asked one of the children. "Yes they certainly can." The teacher replied. The teacher then looked over at Levi and said "Are you a new student?" She asked. Levi replied to her "Yes, but only for today."

"Alright then, will you join us in our project? We are having a contest."

"Sure." Replied Levi.

"Ok class, each of you will recieve a pokeball, and the first one to find and catch an Abra, will get to battle me and my Abra, and if you beat me, you will win this thunder stone, and will get to keep their Abra." The teacher said. She then began to pass out pokeballs to each of the kids. Soon they were all off trying find an Abra. It had been about 2 hours when they were called back for a lunch break. When eating an Abra appeared on the table and all at once every kid threw their pokeball, but the Abra had teleported away.

"There it is over there!" One kid shouted. "I've got it!" Another kid said.

Finally it appeared right infront of Piplup. Piplup squaked and used Peck on it. The abra then fainted and Levi through his pokeball first. The pokeball shook a few times and then stopped. "I caught one! I caught one!" Levi shouted. He showed all of the kids and the teacher.

"Well I guess we will have a battle." She said.

About five minutes later they were both ready.

"This will be a one vs one match. Each person will only use one pokemon." The judge said. "Let the battle begin!"

"Abra, come on out!" Levi shouted. The teachers Abra was already on the battlefield. "Abra use Confusion!" Shouted the teacher! "Dodge it Abra!" Shouted out Levi.

Levi had forgotten that a move like Confusion could not be dodged and his Abra was hit. Right after the attack the teachers Abra started to evolve!

"Finally!" The teacher said. After it had evolved Levi pulled out his pokedex.

"Kadabra, the Psi pokemon. If one is nearby, an eerie shadow appears on TV screens. Seeing the shadow is said to bring bad luck." The pokedex said. "Alright then!" Levi said.

"Abra use Confusion!" Levi commanded. Kadabra was hit but it didnt do much damage.

"Kadabra, use Psycho Cut!" The teacher said.

"Use Reflect!" Levi demanded! Abra then put a small square infront of himself and the attack bounced back and hit Kadabra! Now Abra use Confusion again! Shouted out Levi.

Abra used Confusion and it did critical damage!

"Kadabra use Psychic!" the Teacher shouted out! "Abra use Reflect!" But this time Reflect didn't work and Abra was knocked down! Abra tried to get up, but fainted.

"It was a good battle the teacher said."

"But I didn't last very long." Levi Replied.

"You still did your best and that's what matters most. Remember that." The teacher told him.

Just then a man jumped from a tree, grabbed Kadabra, and ran off with it. He ran behind a building, and then was lifted up by a baloon shaped like a Meowth! "Who are you?" Shouted out the teacher!

"I'm Jesse, and i'm James!" Said a man and women.

"And i'm Meowth!" Soon a Meowth climbed up.

"Together we are team rocket!" They all said at the same time.

"Come back here!" Cried out the teacher!

"Hahaha! We would never do that, we need this Kadabra!" They replied.

Levi then commaned Abra to attack the baloon. But nothing happened.

"Your attacks have no affect on our baloon!" Team Rocket cried out.

Just then they all heard a voice say "Pikachu, use Thunderbolt!"

A Pikachu then jumped up and shocked Team Rocket, but there baloon was still damaged. Team Rocket laughed some more until the teacher told her Kadabra to use Psychic! But as it did, it started to glow, and when it stopped, it had evolved into Alakazam! Then the teacher, Levi, and the mysterious boy, said to their pokemon "Pikachu use Thunder!"

"Piplup, Abra, use Whirlpool and Confusion!" "Alakazam use Psychic!" Team Rocket was then blown away screaming "We are blasting off again!" But Alakazam was still falling! "Abra Teleport Alakazam down here!" Levi Shouted! Abra did just that and Alakazam was safe. The strange boy then walked up to Leviand said

"Hi my name is Ash."

But the teacher interupted and said "Thanks for your help, both of you." She then went inside, and when she came out she gave Ash, the thunderstone, and Levi an egg. She thanked them again and went on with her class.

Ash then told Levi "Well, I need to go now. Bye Levi."

Levi replied to him "Me too, good luck."

They both then headed in different directions. Levi was now headed toward Oreburgh city, wondering what pokemon was inside of the egg.


Well there is Chapter 2. Hope you enjoy it.




EDIT: Chapter 3, enjoy: Chapter 3: Legend of the Earth Box!! Team Galactic!!



Levi was only on the outskirts of Oreburgh City when he had heard the bad news of a sandstorm coming. He was no where near a house, or pokemon center, so he had to stop at the first cave he found. A few minutes later a nasty sandstorm started to brew up.

"It looks like we will just have to wait it out." Levi said to Piplup and Abra.

"I have a flashlight, so we might aswell explore around." Levi than got up, and headed toward to back of the cave with Piplup and Abra following. It wasn't long before he saw another light!

"Hello?" Levi Shouted out.

But no one answered. He walked on until the light was closer, but it looked as if the light kept moving back.

"Hello? Is anyone there?" Levi shouted. But still no answer. Finally some one shouted back

"Hello? Who's there?"

Levi ran toward the light and saw a man, he clothes were dusty and he had a hard hat with a flashlight on top of it, digging around in the ground and walls.

"Why didn't you answer when I called out?" Levi asked.

The man looked up and said "I didn't answer because they say these caves are cursed. So I didn't know who, or what you were."

"Really?" Levi eagerly asked.

"No." The man replied. He than began to laugh a little, but went back to digging.

"What are you doing in here anyways?" The man asked Levi.

"Theres a sandstorm, and I had nowhere else to go but here." Replied Levi


The man looked up again and said "Well, that explains everythin. By the way, my name is Roark, and i'm the gym leader of Oreburgh City."

"Your the gym leader? That's awsome. Actually I came to challenge you." Levi told him.


"Well i'll tell you what, after that sandstorm clears up we can have a battle." Roark replied.


But about 2 hours later, the sandstorm was stronger than ever.

"This isn't right, something has to be wrong." Roark said to himself.

Just then they heard some voices further back in the cave.

"Lets go check that out" Roark said.

As they got closer and closer they could hear what the voices were saying.

"I just don't believe we found the box." A strong, and deep voice said.

"Saturn will be delighted." A female voice said.

Just then a little phone rang and they answered it.


"Good work. Keep up the sandstorm until you ecscape. You have your orders, no go!"

The two people hung up the phone and started to move. Levi turned around but Roark was not there! He was following the two people.

"Roark, what are you doing?" Levi asked.

"Shhh! We can't let them take that box! With it they have the power to control the earth, they can cause sandstorms, earthquakes, rock slides, and more! They are Team Galatic and we have to stop them at all costs!" Roark said.

They both then started to run to catch up with the two grunts. They followed them them until they saw on opening.

"Cranidos come on out!" Roark said. He threw a pokeball and a Cranidos came out.

"Cranidos get that box!" Roark told him. Cranidos charged and hit them from behind! The flew outside and box flew up in the air. Roark ran, caught it, and then said

"Cranidos, use Headbutt on the rocks above to block up the opening!" Cranidos did just that and they were safe from the two Galactic grunts.
Levi took the box and held it. It was much heavier than what he expected. It had a very strange design on on it, not like anything he had seen before. And it looked old, very old.

Roark sat down next to Levi and studdied the box.

"What is it?" Levi asked.

"A man told me a legend once, he said that there were four boxes, created by Arceus. Each box came from space, and landed on the Earth, and each box, controls different things, the first box, as you know, controls the dirt of the earth, it can cause sand storms, earthquakes, rock slides, and other things. The second one, can control the waters of the earth. the third, controls the skies and wheather, and the winds, of the earth. And the last one, can control time, and space. I thought the old man that told me this was just crazy, but now I know it's real. My guess is, those people want all four of them, to control the world. And i'm going to hide this one so no one will ever find it again. But we must hurry because it won't be long before they find a way in here."
Replied Roark.


So they both began digging far down into the ground. Then after it was burried, they dug in other spots so it would look like they dug everywhere.

"Well that's it. We have hidden it for good. Thanks for the help Levi."

Just then the rocks covering one of the entrances to the cave, blew up! The two grunts walked inside and said

"Where is it?"

"You'll neve find it!"

Roark screamed at them." They then pulled out a gun, shot a net and trapped Roark. Then they grabbed Levi, hopped in a Helicopter and flew off. Levi, had somehow been knocked unconscious, and when he awoke he was outside of an old mine, hanging upside down along with Piplup and Abra, but where was his egg?!

"Where is it?" One of the grunts asked him.

"I'm not telling you." Levi replied.

The other grunt walked up with Levi's egg in her arms.

"If you want it to live, then you better start talking." She said.

"Ok, ok." Said Levi. But he knew better than that.

"Abra, use Teleport and get the egg! Piplup use Whirlpool!" Shouted out Levi!

Abra teleported from the where he was and got the egg, and Piplup used Whirlpool to knock down the grunts.

"Ariados, Zubat, come on out!" The male grunt shouted out!

"Piplup use Peck on Ariados, Abra use Confusion on Zubat!" Levi commanded! They both attacked, but Zubat was conused and began to attack Ariados!

"Now Piplup, finish them off with Whirlpool!" Levi said.

It sent both pokemon flying but before they hit they ground they were returned to their pokeball's.

"You haven't seen the last of us!" The grunts told Levi.

They then ran off and Levi saw them get in a helicopter a fly off. Just then, Cranidos busted a whole through the old mine and Roark followed out with him.

"Are they gone?" He asked.

"Yeah, they are." Replied Levi.

Roark then reached into his pocket and said

"Well are you ready for your gym battle? It will be three on three."

"But I only have two pokemon right now." Levi told him.

"Well alright, it will be one vs one."

They then backed up and prepared for the battle!

"Okay Cranidos are you ready?" Said Roark. Cranidos shook his head and hopped infront of Roark.

"Piplup let's do this and just give it your best shot!" Levi said. Piplup jumped infront of Levi and said

"Piplup Piplup!!!"

"Ok Piplup use Pound!" Levi shouted out!

"Cranidos, use Zen Headbutt!" Roark commanded.

The two pokemon charged and when they hit, dust flew everywhere!
Neither trainer could see anything or what had happened.




Well that's chapter 3. Enjoy. Chapter 4 will be up a bit later.
 
Ok, chapter 2 is now up. Chapter 3 won't be up until tommorow my time because I live in Japan.
 
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