Cinnamin's Drawing Station
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Well, I have no place to speak on the anatomy when it comes to non-humans, but I can talk about humans.
You draw the face very well. Everything is nicely expressed with the eyes, mouth, and nose, and the story can easily be told besides the lines not being as clean as usual.
However, there could be some improvements with the body. Her waist and shoulders are twisted in an odd and slightly unnatural way. Unfortunately this is a very fragile ratio, which many artists struggle with. The hands are okay, but again twisted, and the shape of the fingers could be studied more.
Overall, you draw everything well, it just ends up being the wrong size. Don't ever feel down about your talent though, I like your work very much, but like all things I see, there are things that can be improved.
Umm...so I hope all my nitpicking wasn't annoying, I like your work, and I hope to see more.
You draw the face very well. Everything is nicely expressed with the eyes, mouth, and nose, and the story can easily be told besides the lines not being as clean as usual.
However, there could be some improvements with the body. Her waist and shoulders are twisted in an odd and slightly unnatural way. Unfortunately this is a very fragile ratio, which many artists struggle with. The hands are okay, but again twisted, and the shape of the fingers could be studied more.
Overall, you draw everything well, it just ends up being the wrong size. Don't ever feel down about your talent though, I like your work very much, but like all things I see, there are things that can be improved.
Umm...so I hope all my nitpicking wasn't annoying, I like your work, and I hope to see more.
Thanks! Thanks so much on the tips, don't worry about nitpicking, it's really useful as I really want to grow and improve as an artist! I did notice how the fingers were, when I was drawing this I was having a lot of difficulty just getting them in a good position! I think I just left them like that due to me being fed up with the hands Or maybe I'm just a lazy bum Thank you, to everybody!
I like! Anime is something everyone wants to do and I particularly like how you do the eyes and faces! Porportions on the arms and legs will take practice, but thats ok. When I first picked up drawing I liked to check out anime books at libraries and also bought manga books from halfprice books! Understanding extrenal animal and female anatomy really helped me out a lot whether looking at real pictures or animated examples. High Polymer erasers will help eliminate those stubborn deep pencil lines that wont go away! Would love to see you animate something Do you do any more forms of art at the moment?
Do you do any more forms of art at the moment?I don't do many different art forms, I'm not sure why though.