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Finished Convicted 3 - (Murder/Mystery Roleplaying Game)
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So... Is this today? Sorry Vom, I'm probably giving you a headache, I'm not that patient. :/
I used to be too patient, to the point of passivitiy and indifference, and then I went mad and decided that being far less patient is better.
Confirmed? Not really.
Trust me, being patient is better. Impatience leads only to disappointment.
I know
I just can't be patient, I can't sit still, I always have to be doing.. SOMETHING. [No ADHD either]
Guys, can't you just be patient? >.>
Patience has its rewards after all >.>
Patience has its rewards after all >.>
I bet you all thought this was Chapter 1
Anyways, if you're patient enough, I'll be able to wrap the chapter up in an hour or 2, so please stand by.
Sorry if you thought this was the update, I couldn't resist xD
Anyways, if you're patient enough, I'll be able to wrap the chapter up in an hour or 2, so please stand by.
Sorry if you thought this was the update, I couldn't resist xD
You're such a Troll, Vom.Guys, can't you just be patient? >.>
Patience has its rewards after all >.>
I bet you all thought this was Chapter 1
Anyways, if you're patient enough, I'll be able to wrap the chapter up in an hour or 2, so please stand by.
Sorry if you thought this was the update, I couldn't resist xD
I know
Sorry for the little joke earlier guys, I seriously couldn't resist Dx
Here is the actual Chapter 1 (not all characters have appeared yet, and I didn't want to make this too long):
Chapter 1
He was finally here. After over 10 hours of traveling by sea, he was finally at the train station that would take him to his destiny. Memories of his many past explorations and companions flew through his mind, and nostalgia took over his mind for a few minutes.
Being here didn’t bring him only good memories, though. This conference on Delta Species Pokémon he was going to attend reminded him of how he didn’t lead the first expedition to Holon, the home region of these particular species. It reminded him of all those years spent doing research and travelling, all leading to the discovery of Delta Species by someone else, someone who clearly hadn’t even done any research on the Delta Species, someone who lead the expedition only because he had good contacts.
But he had a plan. At the conference, he would show everyone his research and expose the unworthy ‘discoverer’ of Delta Species. And afterwards…he would look for the Vileplume who caused all of his problems.
‘All because of that stupid flower,’ he thought. ‘If that Vileplume hadn’t poisoned me, I would be already in the conference, and I’d be probably practicing my speech.’
Truth is, after all these years, Empoleon still hates Vileplume for poisoning him before the expedition, which caused him to be unable to lead it and therefore he wasn’t given any credit for the discovery of Delta Species.
However, Vileplume didn’t poison him on purpose. Empoleon went to see her to get vaccinated against Pokérus, a disease whose effects were mostly unknown at that time, but she warned him that there was a high chance of the vaccine having undesirable side effects because he was a Water type. Nevertheless, the proud Pokémon decided to get the vaccine anyway, and his pride costed him the official discovery of Delta Species. Of course, he would never see it that way, so he is waiting for the day he can have his revenge.
On his way to the train, he crossed a Meowstic who seemed to be in a hurry, a waiter in a train.
“Hey! Yes, you, the cat. Which train is the one going to the Delta Species conference? It’s supposed to leave in about 15 minutes.”
“Um, uh, hi, sir,” the Mewostic timidly replied. “The train number 16, if my memory doesn’t fail me. I think you should, uh, hurry up. Just like me, I have to give a report to the boss.”
With these words, Mewostic ran off and went into the train with the number 16. And so Empoleon, without the slightest doubt, entered the train and took a seat.
Ugh, where did the train go this time? Is it really that hard to always stop at the same stop? There’s no need to change it every time... thinks Seir the Houndoom, a porter who has worked in the same train for several years. The problem he always had with it, though, is that the train’s driver always stops at a different stop for some reason.
Suddenly, a familiar voice brought him back to Earth.
“Seir, is that you?”
“Tails? Dude, it’s been a while! How’re you doing?”
Tails was said train’s driver, an adamant Electivire Seir had worked with for many years now.
“Good, man, real good. Why are you here?”
“Well, I’m obviously looking for your train, which you obviously didn’t stop at the same stop as last time.”
“Yeah, sorry about that. I just can’t help it, it feels weird if I don’t do that. Anyways, the train’s this way.”
And so Electivire guided his co-worker to the train, and made him sit next to an Empoleon and a very angry-looking Togepi.
“Now you just wait here. One of the employees has to give me a report of a certain situation, I’ll be right back.”
And so Electivire left and waited for Mewostic to report the results of the mission he had been given.
“Say, Egg, would you do me a favor?” asked Seir.
“Who are you calling Egg, you fire-breathing abomination?”
“Chill out, man, it was just a question. Will you or will you not?”
“If the favor is killing you, I’d be glad. Otherwise, mind your own business. I-”
“Dude, you owe me a favor. One that doesn’t involve killing me. Or any killing, really. See Lil, that Lilligant over there?”
“The flower with the cupcakes?”
“Yes. I want you to go and ask her for some, and bring them to me.”
“Why would I listen to you? You’ve done nothing for me.”
“Nothing that you know, that is. Now go and get me those cupcakes.”
Not far from there, was a Gallade named Aquamarine. He was reading a book, sitting right next to a door. Upon turning a page, he dropped a letter.
‘Dear Aquamarine,
You don’t know me, and I don’t know you. But I believe I have some information about your lost love…Amber. If you want to know what happened to her, meet me in train number 16, the one going to the Delta Species conference.
Every time he read the letter, his heart hurt a bit. It was long ago, fact, but he hadn’t yet completely recovered from finding Amber’s – his Amber’s- house burnt down, and all of her family- no. Whenever he remembered the scene…he couldn’t afford to weaken now. Not now, that he is so close to finally finding out what happened.
Because he would figure out what happened, no matter the cost…
“I’m sorry, boss, but I’m afraid your journal has been, uh, damaged.”
“What do you mean?”
“I found it…burning to ashes.”
“WHAT?!?!?!?!? That rotten, obnoxious, filthy, diseased plant! How dare that pestilent flower!” Electivire screamed loudly, alerting the whole train of the presence of Vileplume.
The same Vileplume that had poisoned Empoleon. And that had turned down Seir. And that was somehow involved with Togepi. And that ruined the lives of so many people. And, of course, that held the key to Amber’s whereabouts…
Death(s): No one! (yet!)
Accused: No one! (yet!)
Here is the actual Chapter 1 (not all characters have appeared yet, and I didn't want to make this too long):
Chapter 1
He was finally here. After over 10 hours of traveling by sea, he was finally at the train station that would take him to his destiny. Memories of his many past explorations and companions flew through his mind, and nostalgia took over his mind for a few minutes.
Being here didn’t bring him only good memories, though. This conference on Delta Species Pokémon he was going to attend reminded him of how he didn’t lead the first expedition to Holon, the home region of these particular species. It reminded him of all those years spent doing research and travelling, all leading to the discovery of Delta Species by someone else, someone who clearly hadn’t even done any research on the Delta Species, someone who lead the expedition only because he had good contacts.
But he had a plan. At the conference, he would show everyone his research and expose the unworthy ‘discoverer’ of Delta Species. And afterwards…he would look for the Vileplume who caused all of his problems.
‘All because of that stupid flower,’ he thought. ‘If that Vileplume hadn’t poisoned me, I would be already in the conference, and I’d be probably practicing my speech.’
Truth is, after all these years, Empoleon still hates Vileplume for poisoning him before the expedition, which caused him to be unable to lead it and therefore he wasn’t given any credit for the discovery of Delta Species.
However, Vileplume didn’t poison him on purpose. Empoleon went to see her to get vaccinated against Pokérus, a disease whose effects were mostly unknown at that time, but she warned him that there was a high chance of the vaccine having undesirable side effects because he was a Water type. Nevertheless, the proud Pokémon decided to get the vaccine anyway, and his pride costed him the official discovery of Delta Species. Of course, he would never see it that way, so he is waiting for the day he can have his revenge.
On his way to the train, he crossed a Meowstic who seemed to be in a hurry, a waiter in a train.
“Hey! Yes, you, the cat. Which train is the one going to the Delta Species conference? It’s supposed to leave in about 15 minutes.”
“Um, uh, hi, sir,” the Mewostic timidly replied. “The train number 16, if my memory doesn’t fail me. I think you should, uh, hurry up. Just like me, I have to give a report to the boss.”
With these words, Mewostic ran off and went into the train with the number 16. And so Empoleon, without the slightest doubt, entered the train and took a seat.
Ugh, where did the train go this time? Is it really that hard to always stop at the same stop? There’s no need to change it every time... thinks Seir the Houndoom, a porter who has worked in the same train for several years. The problem he always had with it, though, is that the train’s driver always stops at a different stop for some reason.
Suddenly, a familiar voice brought him back to Earth.
“Seir, is that you?”
“Tails? Dude, it’s been a while! How’re you doing?”
Tails was said train’s driver, an adamant Electivire Seir had worked with for many years now.
“Good, man, real good. Why are you here?”
“Well, I’m obviously looking for your train, which you obviously didn’t stop at the same stop as last time.”
“Yeah, sorry about that. I just can’t help it, it feels weird if I don’t do that. Anyways, the train’s this way.”
And so Electivire guided his co-worker to the train, and made him sit next to an Empoleon and a very angry-looking Togepi.
“Now you just wait here. One of the employees has to give me a report of a certain situation, I’ll be right back.”
And so Electivire left and waited for Mewostic to report the results of the mission he had been given.
“Say, Egg, would you do me a favor?” asked Seir.
“Who are you calling Egg, you fire-breathing abomination?”
“Chill out, man, it was just a question. Will you or will you not?”
“If the favor is killing you, I’d be glad. Otherwise, mind your own business. I-”
“Dude, you owe me a favor. One that doesn’t involve killing me. Or any killing, really. See Lil, that Lilligant over there?”
“The flower with the cupcakes?”
“Yes. I want you to go and ask her for some, and bring them to me.”
“Why would I listen to you? You’ve done nothing for me.”
“Nothing that you know, that is. Now go and get me those cupcakes.”
Not far from there, was a Gallade named Aquamarine. He was reading a book, sitting right next to a door. Upon turning a page, he dropped a letter.
‘Dear Aquamarine,
You don’t know me, and I don’t know you. But I believe I have some information about your lost love…Amber. If you want to know what happened to her, meet me in train number 16, the one going to the Delta Species conference.
Vileplume’
Every time he read the letter, his heart hurt a bit. It was long ago, fact, but he hadn’t yet completely recovered from finding Amber’s – his Amber’s- house burnt down, and all of her family- no. Whenever he remembered the scene…he couldn’t afford to weaken now. Not now, that he is so close to finally finding out what happened.
Because he would figure out what happened, no matter the cost…
“I’m sorry, boss, but I’m afraid your journal has been, uh, damaged.”
“What do you mean?”
“I found it…burning to ashes.”
“WHAT?!?!?!?!? That rotten, obnoxious, filthy, diseased plant! How dare that pestilent flower!” Electivire screamed loudly, alerting the whole train of the presence of Vileplume.
The same Vileplume that had poisoned Empoleon. And that had turned down Seir. And that was somehow involved with Togepi. And that ruined the lives of so many people. And, of course, that held the key to Amber’s whereabouts…
Death(s): No one! (yet!)
Accused: No one! (yet!)
Vracken
Just a Ghost of the Past
Sweet it begins, and the same night a new chapter of Silver Resistance
and Oh damn, love that insult
*Seir stares through the corner of his eye at the small egg Pokemon, baring a fang*
"I am not likely to let go of a favour anyone owes me as easily as you or Lil, don't let it get to your head, I am just as likely to burn you to a crisp as you are to insult someone. Know your place, least you lose it"
and Oh damn, love that insult
*Seir stares through the corner of his eye at the small egg Pokemon, baring a fang*
"I am not likely to let go of a favour anyone owes me as easily as you or Lil, don't let it get to your head, I am just as likely to burn you to a crisp as you are to insult someone. Know your place, least you lose it"
Hmmm, wonder if I could convince that Togepi to get me a cupcake as well....
[As Lilligant] You know, if you asked nicely I'd give you the cupcake without you going through Togepi. As a passenger, I'd give you one anyways. *Hands Empoleon the Cupcake* In fact, these cupcakes are for the passengers and the staff anyways. *Resumes handing out Cupcakes, sliding one into a pouch on her waist*
[As Gallade] ... *Recieves a Cupcake from Lilligant and starts eating it*
[As thegrovylekid] I know I'm not supposed to play Lilligant, but..CUPCAKES. Great Chapter Vom, definitely worth the wait.
[As Gallade] ... *Recieves a Cupcake from Lilligant and starts eating it*
[As thegrovylekid] I know I'm not supposed to play Lilligant, but..CUPCAKES. Great Chapter Vom, definitely worth the wait.
"What a great place you travel they said. And now I'm stuck with the creature from the dystopia (referring to Seir)."
*When back to the kitchen*
*When back to the kitchen*
Yay, the first chapter! Nor murder - Vileplume murder confirmed. Ah well, must be patient. Just a little writing idea, Vom: try putting a slight more detail into the story! I love the conversation but I think you could do a bit better with the descriptive ^_^
[Lilligant] *Hands Scizor a Cupcake on his way back.*
I is stupid.
[Lilligant] Here, have a Cupcake. *Hands Gardevoir a Cupcake*
Yay! Thanks! :3
[As Lilligant] You're Welcome :3 I made these myself.
Vracken
Just a Ghost of the Past
"Lil, have you checked the undercarriage? Make sure Gears hasn't left any surprises down there, and be careful, you know how dangerous that last "good time" he left was. I will double check the guest carts, I swear though, next time he causes an issue for me, I will have him ... fired"
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