Writing Dawn's Journey through the Sevii Islands

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Dawn was 15, and she had to look over her little sister, Mary, who received her Pokemon, Piplup
"Why are we going to the Sevii Islands ?" Mary questioned
"Beacuse I said so" Dawn replied
"But why ?" Mary questioned
"Beacuse mom told me to look over you, Mary" Dawn questioned
"Why ?" Mary questioned
"Beacuse I'm older than you !" Dawn shouted

The boat moored at Island 1 and Dawn and her Pikachu, Sparky sat down. Mary had gone into the Pokemon Center. During Dawn's 5 years in Sinnoh, she amounted over 60 Pokemon, including some of her favorite Pokemon, Blissey, Milotic, Dragonair and Pikachu. Her team was Pikachu, Blissey, Wigglytuff, Lapras, Ninetales and Pachirisu. Mary had with her a Piplup, Cherubi, Rapidash and an Eevee. Which she wants to evovle into a Jolteon.

"Hey, aren't you Dawn from Sinnoh ?" a girl questioned
"Yes, I am" Dawn replied
"I'm your biggest fan !" she screamed
"Okay" Dawn replied
"Sign me shirt !" she shouted
"I don't do autographs" Dawn got up into the girl's face and the girl walked away
"Sis ! Sis !" Mary shouted
"Yes ?" Dawn questioned
"I want to go for the Sevii Islands Grand Festival and win one like you did in Sinnoh" Mary replied
"Mary, I won 5 times in a row. I won more times than mom did !" Dawn said
"Can you help me train ?" Mary questioned
"Sure, little sis, I'll help you" Dawn replied

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Cool story I like it
Can I be in it? If so...
Name: Muck (My nickname, If i need a real name I'll thin one up)
Pokemon: Venesaur, Raichu, Togakiss, Infernape, Articuno (If I can't use legends I'll swich), and Muk
I can't wait for the next post
 
Really like the story!!! Cant wait for more!!

Name: Matt
Pokemon: Empoleon, Raichu, Dewgong, Dragonite, Houndoom, Gallade
 
Sorry MUCKSTER, I'll be taking moneyking's form

Anyway, before the go off onto Kindle Road, Dawn stopped into the History Center that was built on One Island. She typed in her name in a family tree computer. She typed
"DAWN BERLITZ" and a screen popped up that labeled her family history. Most of her family here very prominant scholars and she was very suprised
"Hey Mary look at this !" Dawn said
"Wow, I never knew !" Mary said, shocked
"Come on, let's go !" Dawn said
 
Yea that's fine, he beat me to it.
Name: Alex Muckle (My real last name, and just like the first name Alex)
 
After Dawn finds out her family were a bunch of scholars, she sets out to find the three gems, the Ruby, the Sapphire and the Emerald to complete the Berlitz family crest (like in the manga, if you read the manga, except there are no gems). But, Mary gets taken from Dawn during her quest and has to battle the Rocket Boss, Giovanni. Yes, Giovanni. She beats him and Giovanni returns Mary who holds the final gem for the crest, the Emerald
 
Dawnfanboy said:
After Dawn finds out her family were a bunch of scholars, she sets out to find the three gems, the Ruby, the Sapphire and the Emerald to complete the Berlitz family crest (like in the manga, if you read the manga, except there are no gems). But, Mary gets taken from Dawn during her quest and has to battle the Rocket Boss, Giovanni. Yes, Giovanni. She beats him and Giovanni returns Mary who holds the final gem for the crest, the Emerald
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Wait is this like background or foreground or whatever you want to call it, Kind of like whats going to happen? Its cool though!
 
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