Writing Diary of a Wimpy Trainer rated pg-10(weird rating)

Furroshi

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here is my fanfic. its called Diary of a Wimpy Trainer. it is kinda a pokemon version of diary of a wimpy kid by Jeff Kinney the main characters name is Donnie Awwe-Mann(pronounced Aw Man.) He starts out really wimpy. Can he change peoples thoughts and become the most powerful pokemon trainer in the world? or will he always be thought of as wimpy?
Character form
name:
pokemon(no legendarys or wobbufet or wynauts):
gender:
age:
i will chose what the person has at that point when Donnie fights them

Donnie's form
name: Donnie Awwe-Mann
pokemon: Sentret, Espeon, and Bob(Charmander)
gender: boy
age: 10

Clark's form
name: Clark Swuczowski
pokemon: Gengar
gender: boy
age: 14

Rose's form
name: Rose Wrenkhart
pokemon: Salamence, Claydol, and Weavile
gender: girl
age: 15

Fabriz's form
name: Fabriz
pokemon:Scyther and Charmander
gender: male
age: 14

Quentin Zant's form
name: Quentin Zant
pokemon: Goldeen and Electrike(both wimps)
gender: male
age:10

March 2: Now just so you know, the title's wrong. I'm 9 years old(almost 10) and i may be tiny(3 ft. 11 in. to be exact,) but i am SO not wimpy!*author comes out and tickles me* Ok! hee hee! maybe a little...EEE OOO EEE! Ok fine. I am wimpy. just stop tickling me! ooh! ooh! ahhhh! thats better. Also, i didnt want to get this stupid diary, but my mom insisted. she's like"oh, diaries are SO awesome!" and"I wont go out and catch you a Sentret for your birthday if you don't get a diary!" Now i really want a Sentret because Sentret and Furret are my favorite pokemon, so i gave in. tommorow is my 10th birthday, so Sentret, here i come!
My name is Donnie Awwe-Mann. My parents names are Ben Awwe and Becky Mann. My dad left to be gym leader of the Viridian city gym 2 years ago because of the old gym leader suddenly dissapearing in to thin air. Of course, no one saw this happen, so he might have just died without anyone knowing. His name was Giovanni, the former leader of the infamous pokemon stealing group, Team Rocket... uhmm.... i think. Some say an elte trainer named Red defeated him in battle and both were never seen after that. I live in New Bark Town and am going to start my adventure tommorow...

March 3: Well, I just got the Sentret my mom gave to me. I tried out a battle against Clark, a 14 year old trainer visiting by. I got pwned! I thought my Sentret could beat him, but when he sent out his Genar, i got a little scared. Then when he showed me 3 of his Johto badges, I got reeeeeeaaaaaallllllyyyyy scared. he one hit ko'ed my Sentret by using sludge bomb. so i got PWNED. So I learned a valuable lesson. Never face trainers who are 14 years old on your first day.
I went to the new pokemon center and healed Sentret, and now my real adventure has begun. So i walk 1 step out of New Bark town and 100 million Nosepasss attack me."Ahhhhh! My spleen!" good thing they saw some cheese in the field and i used that time to run away.
Proffessor Birch then comes and gives me a Pokedex and the action replay so i can manipulate the whole world! yay he also gave me five pokeballs. Next thing ya know, an Eevee tackles me and the AR breaks. NOOOOO!!! i cant get a billion master balls anymore <=(. CRUD! While now "go Sentret" i wanna knock the stuffing outta that Goshdarned Eevee!
Battle #2: Sentret vs. Eevee
"Sentret use tackle!" I yelled. It pwns Eevee's face. It gets Eevee to real low health, and then I throw a pokeball... Caught! Yes! My second favorite pokemon, Eevee! Now to head off to Cherrygrove City. AHHK! the Nosepass again. They trample me, AHHHGH! My Scapula! But a trainer named Rose sends her slamence in and pwns them. So I get into Cherrygrove City with a broken spleen, a broken scapula, a broken Action Replay, and an Eevee! YAY ME! =/

March 5: Well, nothing exciting happened yesterday, so I skipped to today. I just left the pokemon center of Cherrygrove City and sent out my Sentret and Eevee so they can get some fresh air, when I tripped on a piece of something that had the color of the sun. It was weird so I just chucked it somewhere else. But Eevee had just jumped in the air so it hit Eevee and stayed on it's body. Then Eevee started glowing. "Umm, what the heck is happening?" and then I realized Eevee was evolving. "SWEET!" When it was done, it had evolved into Espeon. Then I met a trainer named Fabriz.
Battle #3 vs. Fabriz
"Go Sentret!" I yelled while he says calmly " Charmander, come out." "Sentret, use quick attack!" while Charmander just sits there. but when Sentret was about 5 feet away, Charmander used smokescreen, and the stink of the smoke ko'ed Sentret. Ok."Go Espeon. Espeon, use psybeam!" when Charmander's ember blocked the shot. But psybeam was too strong and hit right on target. "Now go, Scyther!"
"Use Fury cutter! again, again!" and then "Espeon, use psybeam!" I said, but it was too late. Scyther had dodged the attack and kept using Fury Cutter until Espeon was ko'ed. "While, I guess I'll see you again, sometime. I'm off to the Violet City Gym." said Fabriz "Yeah, and then I'll kick your butt!" I yelled back.
Well, I lost, but at least I came close. Now to head off to Violet City and challenge that gym leader.

March 6: Well, my butt got kicked yesterday. Now I am going to start to head off to Violet City. When I started I ran into "wild BritannySpeares appeared!" WTH? i used tackle and ohko'd it. its only attack was "yell hopelessly."
Now, a "wild Charmander appeared. "Go, Espeon!" I yelled."Use Psybeam!" it did alot of damage. But then Charmander used an ancient attack called "destroy all pokeymans" luckilly it just barely missed and now charmander can never use it again. Then i used a pokeball to catch it since it lost all its strength from that attack. I named Charmander Bob(it would be funny if it was a girl.) Then this Trainer in a rush comes up to me and says"Letsberivalsi'llbattleyoulaterBYE! and then he left. five seconds later he comes and challenges me"wow, that was quik."
battle #4 vs. Quentin Zant
i send out espeon then he says "gogoldeenya!" He was really weak. I ohko'd his goldeen with psybeam, the sentret used tackle and ohko'd his electrike. I WON YAY! Now Quentin is like" YOUAREAMEANIEPOOPIEHEAD!"
"Wow, he sure is weird"
well, next time ill pwn him even more! I finally got to Violet City and got to the Pokémon Center. I fell asleep REAL quik.


March 7: Just after leaving, a weird guy who calls himself Mr Pokeman, came up to me and says "Pokemanz are awesome! Come to my place for an egg." so i did.
5 steps after getting the egg, it hatched! YAY! IT WAS A MUDKIP! YAY! NOW... for Violet City. It was crowded and Quenton Zant comes up to me and says "IWANNABATTLEURIGHTNOW!" ok...
Battle #5 vs Quenton Zant(again)
he says"GOELECTRIKEANDPWNHISFACEALRIGHT?!" i send out Espeon and the battle begins
"Espeon, use Psybeam!" OHKO!(again)
now Quentin says "YOUARESUCHAMEANIEPOOPIEHEAD"(does anyone understand this guy?)"go, Oddish!"
"Espeon, Psybeam" it missed and Oddish paralyzed, poisened, burned, and froze espeon with miracle powder.
"Now, go, Bob! use flamethrower!" OHKO!
he says"go seaking!" holy crud!
seaking uses hydro pump for the OHKO(wow, he's actually gotten okay)
"go Sentret! use Quick attack on Seaking!" it did alot, but didnt ko.
"Seaking, use horn drill!" crud again! lucky it missed. another Quick Attack wiped it out.
now Quentin yells" IHATEYOUYOUARESUCHAMEANIEPOOPIEHEAD!" and he left. (Again, does anyone get this guy?)
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

Nice, I liked it. I have read Diary of a Wimpy Kid, but not the second one yet. Did you get the idea of Donnie Awwe-Mann from Greg's brother, Manny? Whatever you got it from, it is good.

I liked the tickling part. So, will this have pokemon battles or just like comedy in the diary entry?
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

it will have both. and i made the name up becaues put them together and it pronounces aw man
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

Ok, I will be looking forward to the next chapter.
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

yep. it will be probably posted some time between tonight and tomorrow night.
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

New Chapter! Now you can fill out a form to be in this fan-fic


March 3: Well, I just got the Sentret my mom gave to me. I tried out a battle against Clark, a 14 year old trainer visiting by. I got pwned! I thought my Sentret could beat him, but when he sent out his Genar, I got a little scared. Then when he showed me 3 of his Johto badges, I got reeeeeeaaaaaallllllyyyyy scared. He one hit ko'ed my Sentret by using sludge bomb. So I got PWNED. But I learned a valuable lesson. Never face trainers who are 14 years old on your first day. I went to the new pokemon center and healed Sentret, and now my real adventure has begun. So I walk 1 step out of New Bark town and 100 million Nosepass attack me."Ahhhhh! My spleen!" good thing they saw some cheese in the field and I used that time to run away. Proffessor Birch then comes and gives me a Pokedex and the action replay so I can manipulate the whole world! yay he also gave me five pokeballs. Next thing ya know, an Eevee tackles me and the AR breaks. NOOOOO!! I cant get a billion master balls anymore <=(. CRUD! While now "go Sentret" I wanna knock the stuffing outta that Goshdarned Eevee!
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

Wow, somebody's original :/ j/k, good story, but you could make the chapters a tad longer. And use some paragraphing of some sort.
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

No prob. Also, I'd like to be in this fanfic. What type of form should I fill out?
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

the character form right here
Character form
name:
pokemon:
gender:
age:
I will chose what the person has at that point when Donnie fights them
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

Name: Fabriz (Short for Fabrizio)
Pokémon: Charizard, Scizor, Dusknoir (Or Charmander, Scyther, Duskull if you want)
Gender: Male
Age: 14
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

ill just make them appropriate for the point i meet Fabriz at
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

Chapter 3(sorry it's short. i'm just short on time. i might add more later):


March 5: Well, nothing exciting happened yesterday, so I skipped to today. I just left the pokemon center of Cherrygrove City and sent out my Sentret and Eevee so they can get some fresh air, when I tripped on a rock or something that had the color of the sun. It was weird so I just chucked it somewhere else. But Eevee had just jumped in the air so it hit Eevee. Eevee said "what the HECK!"
But the thing stayed on it's body. Then Eevee started glowing. "Umm, what's happening?" and then I realized Eevee was evolving. "SWEET!" When it was done, it had evolved into Espeon. Then I met a trainer named Fabriz.
Battle #3 vs. Fabriz
"go Sentret!" I yelled while he says calmly " Charmander, come out." "Sentret, use quick attack!" while Charmander just sits there. but when Sentret was about 5 feet away, Charmander used smokescreen, and the stink of the smoke ko'ed Sentret. Ok."Go Espeon. Espeon, use psybeam!" when Charmander's ember blocked the shot. But psybeam was too strong and hit right on target. "Now go, Scyther!"
"Use Fury cutter! again, again!" and then "Espeon, use psybeam!" I said, but it was too late. Scyther had dodged the attack and kept using Fury Cutter until Espeon was ko'ed. "While, I guess I'll see you again, sometime. I'm off to the Violet City Gym." said Fabriz "Yeah, and then I'll kick your butt!" I yelled back.
Well, I lost, but at least i came close. Now to head off to Violet City and challenge that gym leader
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

Next Chapter
March 6: Well, my butt got kicked yesterday. Now I am going to start to head off to Violet City. When I started I ran into "wild BritannySpeares appeared!" WTH? I used tackle and ohko'd it. its only attack was "yell hopelessly."
Now, a "wild Charmander appeared. "Go, Espeon!" I yelled."Use Psybeam!" it did alot of damage. But then Charmander used an ancient attack called "destroy all pokeymans" luckilly it just barely missed and now charmander can never use it again. Then I used a pokeball to catch it since it lost all its strength from that attack. Then this Trainer in a rush comes up to me and says"Letsberivalsi'llbattleyoulaterBYE! and then he left. five seconds later he comes and challenges me"wow, that was quik."
battle #4 vs. Quentin Zant
I send out espeon then he says "gogoldeenya!" He was really weak. I ohko'd his goldeen with psybeam, the sentret used tackle and ohko'd his electrike. I WON YAY! Now Quentin is like" YOUAREAMEANIEPOOPIEHEAD!"
"Wow, he sure is weird"
well, next time ill pwn him even more! I finally got to Violet City and got to the Pokémon Center. I fell asleep REAL quik
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

March 7: Just after leaving, a weird guy who calls himself Mr Pokeman, came up to me and says "Pokemanz are awesome! Come to my place for an egg." so I did.
5 steps after getting the egg, it hatched! YAY! IT WAS A MUDKIP! YAY! NOW... for Violet City. It was crowded and Quenton Zant comes up to me and says "IWANNABATTLEURIGHTNOW!" ok...
Battle #5 vs Quenton Zant(again)
he says"GOELECTRIKEANDPWNHISFACEALRIGHT?!" I send out Espeon and the battle begins
"Espeon, use Psybeam!" OHKO!(again)
now Quentin says "YOUARESUCHAMEANIEPOOPIEHEAD"(does anyone understand this guy?)"go, Oddish!"
"Espeon, Psybeam" it missed and Oddish paralyzed, poisened, burned, and froze espeon with miracle powder.
"Now, go, Bob! use flamethrower!" OHKO!
he says"go seaking!" holy crud!
seaking uses hydro pump for the OHKO(wow, he's actually gotten okay)
"go Sentret! use Quick attack on Seaking!" it did alot, but didnt ko.
"Seaking, use horn drill!" crud again! lucky it missed. another Quick Attack wiped it out.
now Quentin yells" IHATEYOUYOUARESUCHAMEANIEPOOPIEHEAD!" and he left. (Again, does anyone get this guy?)
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

I liked those three chapters, but your grammar needs some help, remember to capitalize. And Eevee evolves from Friendship and Day time, not from a Sun Stone...
 
RE: Diary of a Wimpy Trainer

name: Chuck
pokemon: Grotle, Abomasnow, Cacturne, Flygon, and Feraligater
gender: Boy
age: 13
(Optional note: Wants to be a gym leader) <--- don't need to include if you don't want
 
ill fit you in. And i made the sun stone thing like XD except sun stone instead of sun shard. ill write a chapter sometime soon
 
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