Writing Digimon: A Lantern in the Darkness

Negative Zero

Negative Zero

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Chapter 1

The school bell rang as I heard many foot steps heading for the class room. I walked in shyly as I saw the motion of the teacher signaling me to come in. “Class we have a new student today.” The teacher announced.

“Another girl, well that sucks.” All the boys sighed.

I put a frown on my face at the time. Boys could be so stupid at times. “Why don’t you introduce yourself?” The teacher asked.

“My name is Ame Tooriame, and I hope to-” I trailed off looking at all the children’s faces. The seemed so blank.

“Why don’t you sit next to Kari?” The teacher whispered soon pointing to a girl with short brown hair, brown eyes, and had a smile as large as heaven. I nodded and walked to my seat next to her. She smiled at me taking her hand out of her pocket.

“Hi Ame want to be friends?”

I smiled at her and nodded my head. Kari she seemed different somehow and so many ways she seemed to be the light that I was looking for.
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It was lunch time at Odaiba Elementary school; I was talking with my new friend Kari eating lunch together. It was fun around her; she seemed to be the only other person, except for my brother that could make me smile or even laugh.

We were walking along the grassy field of the school until 3 boys came up in front of us. They were both bald; each wore a striped shirt, jean, and black sneakers. One of them pushed Kari down and left her crying while the other two just laughed like there was no tomorrow.

I walked over to her and held out my hand. She took it, but she was crying with tears streaming down her face. She started to sob wiping away the tears from her eyes with her hands. I patted her back with my other hand then turned around. I ran as fast as I could and punched one of them in the gut, then kicked one in the neck, then flipped the last one.

“Don’t ever bother her again you understand!” I shouted glaring at them with my deathly gaze. They nodded there heads then scurried crying calling there mommies over and over again. I turned around and put my hand out to her. She took it now with a big smile on her face.

~ End of Chapter~

AN: Ame = Rain
Tooriame = Shower
This is in my characters POV.
Please R&R!
 
I take it that this is the Kari from the show? Or is it an OC of your creation?
Anyway, I really like it so far. I lolled at little Ame taking on three guys by herself. XD. It's also a decent length, unlike most fanfics here.
I happen to like digimon myself, except it doesn't air much in the UK...
My own digimon fanfic died because i was away, but I hope this one will continue. It seems interesting, and I'll be reading it when you update.
 
well i'm a digimon fan to (love terriermon and gargomon)
and i think this is going to be a nice fan-fic

ps:if it's the kari from the t.v. show then i'm happy to se gatomon again
gatomon rulez
same as angewomon
 
AN: Yes it is Kari from the anime and heres the next chapter! =)

Chapter 2
I was in front of Kari’s apartment after school. She invited me over to her place to play a while. I accepted, but I had to call my older brother. I hung up right after he said “yes”, because I didn’t want him doing the ‘My little Sister is Growing Up’ Speech.

Kari’s apartment looked OK, with the kitchen in front, the living room on my right with the balcony north from the living room, and north from the kitchen were the bedrooms/bathrooms.

I introduced myself to her mom then went to the kitchen to sit down to find kids already sitting down. I didn’t really pay attention to what they looked like, but one kid caught my eye. It was a boy with goggles, white gloves, brown shorts, and a blue t-shirt. He slid off his chair and looked at me for a minute adjusting his goggles once in a while.

“Who’s this ugly girl Kari?” He asked as he looked at her who was standing next to me.

I twitched at his question calling me ugly for no reason! He just met me and he thinks I’m ugly!

“Tai why did you call my new friend ugly, that wasn’t very nice!” Kari shouted at the boy. “Yes Tai that wasn’t very nice saying that to Kari’s guest.” Kari’s mom came from behind the counter of the kitchen.

“Don’t worry I’ll take care of this.” I said glaring at Tai who seemed to be Kari’s brother.

“And how would you do that?” He asked.

“How many fingers am I holding behind my back?” I asked while putting my hands behind my back.

“How will this solve anything?”

“Just answer the dang question!”

“Ok um is it four?”

“No.” I said calmly, “It’s my fist!” I shouted as a fist appeared behind my back punching him in the cheek. Tai then flew in the air flying backwards hitting a door which fell then he destroyed the doors that lead to the balcony before landing on his back with pure hard cement.

People started staring at me except for Kari who was smiling giving Tai the medicine he deserved. I walked over to where Tai was ignoring the destroyed doors and stopped in front of him.

“That’s what you get for underestimating a girl that has a black belt in martial arts.” I said flicking him on the forehead. Eyes soon popped out of there sockets starring at me like I was someone with in human strength, which was somewhat true.

I put out my hand out smiling at him like no care in the world; he took it and smiled at me laughing while I was laughing with him. ‘That smile is just like Kari’s. No wonder I took interest in him more than the other kids in Kari’s house.’
 
Wow i really liked it, very interesting and funny story, cant wait for the next chapter:D
 
I'm sad not many people here are Digimon fans. I'll probably get the next chapter this week. Probably Ame won't beat up anybody the next chapter.
 
ive been a digimon fan for years but now its like extict, bandai doesnt even support it anymore, its really sad
 
At least it airs at all where you live. Here it stopped after the third season. :( I watched 4 and 5 on youtube.

Can't wait for the next chapter by the way. ;)
 
disney if it makes cartoons it self there fun but when they buy it from something else they suck

i hate data squad i mean there very unoriginal like agumon digivolves in geogreymon
that's like no differince unless the name en digivolution line

tamers is mij fave i so love terriermon and guilmon
 
I have the chapter, but not much is going to happen in it though. =( Probably the next couple of chapters there will be action.

Chapter 3
Kari and her other friends, including her brother, talked a while about what we liked and things that happened in the past. I had to lie almost about half of my life which wasn’t really appealing to me, but I had to since they wouldn’t understand anyway and that I knew about Digimon.

Sora, the girl with the helmet on her head, red hair, and red eyes, and I became close friends in the short time, who seemed to have a crush on Matt, the cool guy in the group had blond spiky hair and blue sapphire eyes. Matt also has a brother named T.K; he wore a green hat, blond hair, and mostly wore green.

Izzy the most intelligent of the group had red hair, brown eyes, and he was pretty short for his age. I swear that he always keeps his laptop with him. Joe, the most sensitive of the group, had blue hair, blue eyes; he wore glasses, and a vest. He seems to want to be a doctor one day even though he is afraid of blood.

Tai, the leader of the group wore goggles, had spiky tooth like hair, and was much of a leader type of person. He reminded me a lot of Hiroshi when my brother was a Digi-destined. All I did was stay at home while my brother saved the world because I wasn’t a Digi-destined.

Soon I heard beeping in the room then soon flashes of light came from the pockets of my new acquainted friends, an image shown on top of the table revealing to be an old man who was pretty much bald except the hair on top of his head that was tied upwards.

“Hi Gennai. “ I waved my hand at the digital image.

“Wait you know about Digimon?” Tai asked surprised.

“Yes Tai she does.” Gennai said taking the words out from my mouth.

“You mean she is a Digi-destined?” Kari asked.

“No, but her brother was and speaking of Digi-destined.”

Gennai soon formed hand signs that represent Japanese kanji of Courage, Friendship, Hope, Light, Love, Knowledge, Reliability, Sincerity, and last was Wisdom. “I can’t read those hand signs.” Tai said squinting his eyes. I nearly fell on the floor with his remark.

“Stupid Tai, that’s Japanese Kanji!”

“You can read that?” Matt asked.

“Your Japanese you should be able to read it!”

“Can you shut up!?” Gennai shouted.

“Fine you read the Kanji while he does those hand signs!” Tai shouted.

Gennai let out an annoyed sigh and got into form. I got my eyes ready to stare at his hands. He started to move his hands and I got ready to read.

“Courage, Friendship, Hope, Light, Love, Knowledge, Reliability, Sincerity, and Wisdom.” I read out at once.
“Hey that’s the names of our crests!” T.K shouted.

“Wait here is no crest of wisdom in our group.”

Gennai’s hand started to glow at the kanji of wisdom then soon a flash of light came out from the digital image. Next thin I knew I was holding a Digivise!
 
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