Writing do you like my haiku poetry?

[darkpoet]

hawks, hanging like nails
driven into twilight skies
crucifying stars

tonight- lightless skies.
the moon is scared, and hiding-
the sound of dead leaves

tomorrow my breath
will be wind through scattered snow
dying on this trail

i refuse to breathe
frome machines and tubes again
now please, pull the plug

 

[Incinermyn]

The last one might be just a little dark for these forums, but they're all pretty good. I think I mentioned it before, but you may want to consider using capitalization at the beginning of each line (or at least the first one) and some more punctuation when/if possible. That's mostly a personal preference for me, though, since it tends to look a little cleaner and more professional.