donkchamp help! (seniors BRs)

[idrumprettywell]

this is my first deck ever, so i'm open to suggestions.

Pokemon (20)
4-2-3-1 Machamp (all SF)
3-3 Donphan Prime (hgss)
1 Chatot
3 Uxie

T/S/S (31)
4 Rare Candy
1 Luxury Ball
3 Expert Belt
3 Warp Point
3 Bebe's
3 Collector
3 Communication
2 Cyrus
3 SSU
3 PONT
3 BTS

Energy (9)
7 fighting
2 DCE

This is sort of a donk deck, but the strategy is just to get out fast and hit hard. I know this does need work, especially with some techs and t/s/s. Thanks!

 

[Vulpix Yolk]

Why are you running three Chatots?
-3 Chatots
-1 Bebe's Search
+4 Poke drawer +
Poke drawer is great to add to the speed of the deck if you are going for a donk.

 

[idrumprettywell]

i do think i'll take out the chatots, but what are the odds that i'll end up with two or even one poke drawer in my opening hand?

 

[Vulpix Yolk]

This deck is not set up for donks, that is why you would end up with it in your opening hand. If you did this though
-2 Bebe's Search
-1 Pokemon Collector
-3 Chatot (I no you want to keep them just sayin...)
-1 Warp Point
-2 Cyrus's
-1 PONT
-2 Fighting Energy
+4 Pokedrawer
+4 Unown R
+4 Crobat G
+ 1 SSU
+3 Pokedex Handy
That would make this SO much faster, the thing about Supporters, is after you play one on your first turn the rest you draw have no use to you and are just dead draws if you are going for a donk.

 

[idrumprettywell]

but what if i'm trainer locked. then the pokedexes, the pokedrawers, etc. become useless.
i have the supporters to help the deck flowing when i'm trainer locked.

 

[Vulpix Yolk]

You have to choose whether or not you want this to be a late game deck with donk potential or a hands down donk deck then. If you are running a donk deck and they're running a trainer lock you will just have to donk them or get set up before they can set up a trainer lock, it might be hard and given you would have a bad match up against trainer lock, but it can be done.

 

[idrumprettywell]

honestly, it seems better to be a late game deck with donk potential, because that's what my list is geared towards and it seems like a better option.
so, taking all of the chatots out, what should i add in? thanks for all the help

 

[Vulpix Yolk]

I'd leave a Chatot and and enforce your Donphan line
-2 Chatot
+1-1 Donphan
I think that will help late game consistency.

 

[idrumprettywell]

that's a good idea - fixing
ok, now i think i'll take out the ssu's. good idea or bad?

 

[Vulpix Yolk]

You could try this
-1 Warp Point
-3 SSU
+4 Pokedrawer +
This will help with speed, trust me.

 

[idrumprettywell]

ok thanks, i'll get my hands on some pd +.
anything else? you're actually helping a lot, thanks