Writing Ekaj Legends

Oliv17

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This is my brother's story. he doesn't have an account so I am posting it for him! This is not my writing, but comment and I will tell him your comments.

Chapter 1

There were two brothers. Their names were Ekaj and Nalyd. Early in the morning Ekaj headed out to the professor’s lab in Drifter Town to get his supplies to catch his first Pokemon. “Good morning Professor Willow.” Ekaj said to Professor Willow.

“Good morning, but Professor Willow left this morning to do some research in the field. I can give you the supplies to catch your first Pokemon.” Professor Willow’s assistant replied.

“Okay. Thank you!” Ekaj replied relieved. I’m gonna catch my first Pokemon! Ekaj thought with excitement.

Meanwhile with Nalyd… “Ow! Toxicroak! Why’d you do that!” Nalyd angrily said. “Oh no! I’m gonna be late!” Nalyd says looking at the clock and then at Ekaj’s bed. “Where’s Ekaj!” Nalyd jumps up from his bed and runs out the door while putting his pants on. Nalyd runs outside and to the professor’s lab. Nalyd sees Ekaj running back to the lab with something in his arms. “Hey Ekaj! What’s that?” Nalyd shouts. Nalyd gets to the lab first and opens the door for Ekaj.

“A really hurt Drifloon! I found it on the ground!” Ekaj shouts while dashing through the door. Professor walks through the door unaware of the Drifloon.

“Thank you Nalyd.” Professor Willow says.

“No problem.” Nalyd replies.

Ekaj explains to the professor’s assistant about how he was following Drifloon and then he found it on the ground badly injured. Ekaj then asked, “ can you heal it back to health?”

“We definitely can. It may take awhile though.” The professor said.

“Okay.” Ekaj replied sadly.

“Can I get the stuff I need to catch my first Pokemon now?” Nalyd asked with a hint of anger in his voice.

“Sure you can Nalyd.” The Professor replied happily while handing Nalyd the supplies.

“Let’s start this adventure!” Ekaj said with excitement in his voice.

“Yeah!” Nalyd replied. “Let’s go!”

“Okay!” Ekaj replied. They dash out while saying thank you to the professor and his assistants.

“Hey Ekaj!”

“What Nalyd?”

“What do you do when you want to face and catch a Pokemon?” Ekaj then explains with detail how to face and catch a Pokemon. “Okay, thanks Ekaj!” Hey just the Pokemon I was looking for. A Rhyhorn! Nalyd thought with excitement. “Go Pokeball!” Nalyd shouted with confidence. The Pokeball shakes on the ground and… Ding! “Yes! My first Pokemon!” Nalyd says with excitement.

Meanwhile with Ekaj… Ring Ring! Ekaj Picks up his cell phone. “Hey Professor. Oh, Mom? What are you doing at the lab? Drifloon’s all better?! Yes! I’ll be right there!”
“ Hey Nalyd!”

“Yes Ekaj?” I’ll Be right back Drifloon’s all better!”

“Okay I’ll set up camp!”

“Thanks, Ekaj says while dashing to the lab.” Outside the lab... “Hey professor! Can I try to catch Drifloon?”

“Yes you may.” The professor replies.

“Go Pokeball!” Ekaj shouts. Drifloon jumps into the Pokeball. The Pokeball shakes on the ground and… Ding! “Yes! My first Pokemon! I caught a Drifloon!” Ekaj Shout with tons of excitement in his voice. Later that night after all the congrats at the campsite. “Nalyd, tomorrow do you want to battle?”

“Sure Ekaj. Good Night.”

“Good night Nalyd”
 
Whoa! I really wasn't expecting that.
He caught a Ryhorn for his first pokemon!!
Aren't trainer's first pokemon usually quite small?!
I mean ryhorn.....Whoa!

But yeah, it was quite good.
I'd probably say to have more description of the surroundings, instead of just speech.
 
Yeah, I am a fan of Rhyperior. Don't expect updates, my bro hasn't written anything.
 
Chapter 2

The next morning, Nalyd and Ekaj got ready for their battle. “Go Rhyhorn!” Nalyd yelled.
“Go Drifloon!” Ekaj shouted.
“Rhyhorn use Horn Attack!” Nalyd commanded.
“Dodge Drifloon!” Ekaj said, but too late.
“Drifloon!” Drifloon screamed.
“Again!” Nalyd yelled.
“Dodge it and use Constrict!” Ekaj yelled.
“Rhyhorn!” Rhyhorn yelled.
“Now slam it into that tree!” Ekaj commanded.
“Rhy-hornnnnn!” Rhyhorn yelled.
“We did it Drifloon! We beat Rhyhorn!” Ekaj said in excitement.
“Congratulations Ekaj.” Nalyd said in disappointment.
“Let’s keep going Nalyd, and Thanks for the battle.” Ekaj replied eager to keep going.
Later, “Hey, there’s the next town!” Nalyd said.
“Hey”
“Hey wanna battle the confident gardeners?” said two random guys who jumped out of bushes.
“Sure.” Ekaj and Nalyd said simultaneously.
“Go Sunkern”
“Go Sunflora!” the two guys said.
“Go Rhyhorn!”
“Go Drifloon!” Ekaj and Nalyd said.
“Sunkern use Mega Drain on Rhyhorn!”
“Drifloon take the hit!”
“Drifloon!” Drifloon screamed.
“Drifloon try to use Hidden Power!”
“Drif-looooooooon!” Drifloon screamed trying to use Hidden Power. It failed to use it though.
“Rhyhorn use Horn Attack!” Nalyd said.
“Sunkernnnnn!”
“Sunfloraaaaaa!” Sunflora and Sunkern screamed simultaneously.
“Yes! We won!” Nalyd and Ekaj screamed with joy. They just arrived in the next town and found out there is a ghost type gym there. There is also a Pokemon Center, a contest, a Pokemart, and a Pokemon catching contest. They decide to sleep in the Pokemon Center tonight.
“Good Night Ekaj.”
“Good Night Nalyd."
 
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