Esmeraldo Wars Stories

[Mudkip DS]

This is my own story tahat i wrote

Beginning

Far away from Kanto, Hoenn and Johto was another continent named Verdictia. The wars were there. The people live there like in the ancients times. And in one house, live a brave boy named Emerthe. Emerthe has got a lileep and rattata. And one day, the powerfull forces of the Emerald team, attacks Ruby City, Emerthe leaves the house and run to the gates of the city, and there were some pokemons from Emerald team, and one of them, attack´s him. Emerthe was attacked by tackle, uh that was close, he missed, so Emerthe choose his Rattata to attack the evil Pokemon named Armaldo. Rattata, use tackle, Emerthe was saying that to his Rattata. Ratata!!!!!!!, ups Rattata is fainted, who will be next says Armaldo (on the Pokemon language ofcourse!!!!!!!). He will not be the next, he will win!!!!!!! And he choosed Lileep. Then Lileep has used Ingrain, and faint up the Armaldo. Emerthe run from the city, to the forest of life. To be continued....

 

[psyblazer_ex]

Good but does'nt sound right example:He was attacked by tackle should be Emerthe was almost hit by Tackle and speech should'nt be like that use speech marks so Attack,Rattata was what he said should be "Rattata attack!"said Emerthe There are also other problems good try just practise and make sure they sound right ok?

 

[Mudkip DS]

Part-2 Mirage

And so like i said, he run from the city to the forest of life. Someone says, that in this forest live Jirachi and Lugia, Someone says, that in that forest is an evil Ho-oh of darkness, and so he came inthere, and go to the old, old stone relic with water of powerfull, he cured up his Rattata, and then appears an awesome cute Jirachi!!!!!!! Could it be, says Emerthe. Who are you???? says the Jirachi. i´m Emerthe, answer he. And then Jirachi totally dispears, what´s was that, says he
A Mirage system Pokemon, says some woman. He´s a part of the mirage system, continued she to sayng someting To be continued....