okay, so I have been working on this as a manga for a VERY long time. I thought I could post it as a manga, but then I saw Crystal's enigimaic star and realized that doing my manga with just, pencil, pen, eraser, and paper wasn't going to work for you guys. So, I am going to post it as a story, because, unlike crystal, I dont have an awesome graphic designer to help me. I just work alone. So, here we go.
Prolouge: Jasmine's Dream
"Did you guys have fun?" Our new mother, Ms. Kathy asked.
"Yes Ms.Kathy! I had lots of fun!" My little sister Melrose shrieked.
"How about you, Jasmine?" Ms. Kathy questioned.
"Yah....I had a great time."
"Is somethi-" Ms. Kathy was interrupted by a horrible shriek we heard. I looked out my window and saw the sight that would haunt me for life. A giant semi-truck, rolling down the hill to our road, prepared to crush us. I turned to look at Melrose, but then, we were hit by the truck, and it was to late. I was leaving her, the last of my family....
Melrose.
Chap 1:Jasmine's point of view
I screamed as I woke up from the nightmare. Mine(pronounced M-ee-ne) was hanging down from the ceiling, staring at me.
"Bad dream?" She asked.
"No! Adrenaline rush you know, since I've been doing these new excersises and all that!" I said nervously as I got dressed and Mine dropped to the floor.
"You know, Jasmine, I can understand why you always act like an adult, and cover your emotions but....you can still admit to having a bad dream."
"Nightmares only occur when you have an improbable fear." I countered "The only fear I had was losing my family, and it happened. Now, I can't even remember thier names. So I don't have nightmares, Mine. I have memories"
She doesn't understand.... I thought.
I walked out and slammed the door.
***
Mine's point of view
"I just don't get it!" I asked Jonathan as I passed him his staff. "Why would she just yell at me like that?!"
"Maybe she didn't want to talk about it." He suggested.
"But we're friends! BEST friends. I was the very person who saved her from the car crash. And now, she yells at me!"
"Come on, you don't need to think about that now. I need to train with this "staff combat" thing. It's time for you to teach me, Mine."
For some reason, Jonathan only seems confortable talking to me, it would have been annoying, except for the fact that he always cheers me up. After all, we've both been in WASA, or the World Associated Spy Agency, since we were toddlers, why wouldn't he be my friend?
"Sure." I replied. Then, we started our lesson.
Okay, thats not all of chap1, but I just want to hear your comments before I continue. Also, dont post about grammar and spelling please, cuz, I wont really care.
Prolouge: Jasmine's Dream
"Did you guys have fun?" Our new mother, Ms. Kathy asked.
"Yes Ms.Kathy! I had lots of fun!" My little sister Melrose shrieked.
"How about you, Jasmine?" Ms. Kathy questioned.
"Yah....I had a great time."
"Is somethi-" Ms. Kathy was interrupted by a horrible shriek we heard. I looked out my window and saw the sight that would haunt me for life. A giant semi-truck, rolling down the hill to our road, prepared to crush us. I turned to look at Melrose, but then, we were hit by the truck, and it was to late. I was leaving her, the last of my family....
Melrose.
Chap 1:Jasmine's point of view
I screamed as I woke up from the nightmare. Mine(pronounced M-ee-ne) was hanging down from the ceiling, staring at me.
"Bad dream?" She asked.
"No! Adrenaline rush you know, since I've been doing these new excersises and all that!" I said nervously as I got dressed and Mine dropped to the floor.
"You know, Jasmine, I can understand why you always act like an adult, and cover your emotions but....you can still admit to having a bad dream."
"Nightmares only occur when you have an improbable fear." I countered "The only fear I had was losing my family, and it happened. Now, I can't even remember thier names. So I don't have nightmares, Mine. I have memories"
She doesn't understand.... I thought.
I walked out and slammed the door.
***
Mine's point of view
"I just don't get it!" I asked Jonathan as I passed him his staff. "Why would she just yell at me like that?!"
"Maybe she didn't want to talk about it." He suggested.
"But we're friends! BEST friends. I was the very person who saved her from the car crash. And now, she yells at me!"
"Come on, you don't need to think about that now. I need to train with this "staff combat" thing. It's time for you to teach me, Mine."
For some reason, Jonathan only seems confortable talking to me, it would have been annoying, except for the fact that he always cheers me up. After all, we've both been in WASA, or the World Associated Spy Agency, since we were toddlers, why wouldn't he be my friend?
"Sure." I replied. Then, we started our lesson.
Okay, thats not all of chap1, but I just want to hear your comments before I continue. Also, dont post about grammar and spelling please, cuz, I wont really care.