gallade

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Ryuu7

Leaving pretty soon...
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After Midnight Designer clan go down, I had no place for my art, so I'm just gonna post it here :)

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CnC please. Don't bother the shading unless you can tell me where should i shade, i'm just a total n00b on this :S

No one to comment?

I just noticed the shading at the the bottom right leg was awful
 
looks awesome, but the torso seems a bit out of proportion. I'm no expert on shading, so i can't help you there lol.
 
Its abit fat ?
Nice shading although slightly to black in some places, also the lines again >.<
Nice job though ^_^
 
Oops, one part that ruins everything again ...*sighs* You're right DF it is fat Dx

I will try harder again next time ! T.T

btw, SixaxiS, had you seen the latest naruto chapter? It was so awesome.
 
How can anyoen critasise(Spelling:S) this is awsome! The legs are a bit weird but hey!
 
Just need some opinion, Do you think this artwork can survive as a manga version?
 
The Gallade itself doesn't look quite right (I'm not exactly sure what it is. I think it's something to do with the torso as Sixaxis suggested.), but the shading is awesome, and I don't think you should change anything about that. =]

Pretty cool. ;D
 
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How's this now? Edited abit with photoshop, so don't blame the rough outline. ^^"

Hmm what should i draw next ;)
 
Is that a really thick outline at the back of the torso area? I'm no authority on shading myself (as I find it annoying; most of my stuff has no shading at all), but Gallade's torso looks too flat on the front. I'd suggest more gradient, a bigger transition from dark to light, to make Gallade's torso look rounder.

Also, I forget--does Gallade have actual hands, or are they those weird stubs?
 
You know The Elite is an art clan that is still up, anyway.

I like it, it has a certain florescent feel to it probably because of the shades you chose, not a bad thing, cool actually! It's actually very good, well done, just try and make the border a little thinner and smoother (more circular in areas that need it).
 
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