Writing Grand Pika Auto (rated PG13+!)

[Gengar The Son]

Chapter 1: I Choose The Idiot!

(Ballet Town, at Pikachum's house)

TV: Welcome back to "Gengar At 13th".

Pikachum: Yeah right, #%?!*= crap!

(enter his mum, Pikacaca.)

Pikacaca: Don't watch that stupid film! It has blood, sex, laungene, viclonce...

(Pikacaca changes tv to: The Educate Channel.)

Pikachum: Son of a...

(a ad appears with a Gengar called Professeor Oakmeal.)

Pro. Oakmeal: Keh-hum! My name is Professeor Oakmeal. I have some buddies that you can get! a Pichu, a Buneary, or Harry Potter...err, I mean, Teddiusa! Which cool buddies will YOU pick?

Pikachum: I pick on my boogers, pile or crap! Goodnight, pile of #%!$!!!

To be countined!

 

[42 chocolate]

Ok... wait... what? No offense, but I don't like it. Practically no description at all, extremely short chapters, and most of it I don't even understand... Please, read this thread before posting a story in here. This thing makes no sense to me. no offense.

 

[bacon]

Uh... I suggest you... improve before posting here again.

*lock*