Writing Impossible power (Anime story idea)

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Story

Millions of years ago there was a battle between the gods of impossible power, a simple battle evil vs light. The battle raged for one hundred years.
It was a draw no-one won the fight, they both retreated at the same time, thinking if they came out the other side would win. Millions of years later a boy 16 ears of age cutting through a forest with his sword discovered an ancient relic which told this event. The boy then wondered of deeper into the forest and fell through a hole were he was then given the power of Impossible. The Power of a god was given to him but at the same time across the world the power of the devil raged in another humans soul. The boy named Kye set out to rid the world of Darkness and finish the unfinished battle. A new race began to have the power of maximum impossible to become and take on a god to see if they are worthy of becoming a leader of the universe. For good...or bad....

Prologue

*Pant* *Pant* *Pant* *Pant*
A man was running in an empty street looking behind him and screaming wildly
A sudden figure appeared from nowhere and teleported from roof to roof.
It soon appeared right in front of him, a skeleton with a cloak covered with bandages. The man fell to the ground sweating and breathing quietly but heavily. The thing lifted it's arm and formed a ball, it was black with a purple border with little dark electric strikes coming from it.
The thing made a grunt and the ball went into the mans stomach causing him to scream uncontrollably and be shot around 5 meters back. Suddenly a man appeared from nowhere a sliced into the thing slicing it two.
He looked back and saw that the two half's formed back together.
"I knew it wouldn't be that easy, said the man taking of his jacket it was easily recognizable that it was Ky with a black shirt and jeans, Black hair and Blue trainers to match. He pointed his sword at the (Let's call it a reaper) reaper and said dashing towards it
"C'MON!!"
 
The ol' blind view of a third person.

That's an interesting idea with your story, but I've feel as if this was already made...
 
[/color]It was ok but i didn't really know much about the third person though?
D_C
 
^ Even for a prologue? I think the length isn't that horrible.
 
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