- Table Of Contents
- Prolouge: Post 1
- Chapter 1: Post 2
Prolouge
Ok so I have finally decided to write a story that's been in my head for a while and here it is. I will be asking some questions at the end for you guys to post in the comments so please look after you read. Just so you know the lines without quotation marks are when the character who's P.O.V is up is talking.
My name is Check and what I`m about to tell you is between you and me only got it. The story I`m about to tell you is about how I died; well mostly died. Don`t worry I`m ok now, but well... just listen.
I`m Falling…or…floating? I cannot tell. I think I’m dead, but I don't know. I don't know—where am I…who am I? No, I know who I am, and this is where I end…or is it where I begin?
"Do you know who you are?" a deep voice says.
" M-My name is C-Check Check Damon.”
“CHECK, GET UP!!!” Mom yells.
I yawn loudly, stretching my thin arms until they begin to hurt in an oddly satisfying way. “All right already! I`m getting up! Damn, can’t I get some extra sleep on my 13 birthday!?” I complain.
"No! Now get up—you’re going to be late for school. You know it starts at eleven in the morning, right Check?" Mom nags at me continuously.
“Yeah, I get it! I`ll be down in a half hour, okay?”
"You better, kid! Now hurry up!"
So I`m bored at school and then all of a sudden...
"Everybody come outside! Somebody found a cocoon of sorts," says the teacher.
We head outside and see a Purple reddish Cocoon with black marks on it lying on Town Rock, which is a large boulder centered in the middle of our city.
That's when I hear it: a voice! I don't know if it’s scared or angry, but I do know it told me to touch the cocoon. I touch it, but soon my vision fades as the gravitational pull exceeds my own strength and pulls me down to my resting place; or, at least, to the point where I black out.
I wake up to find my town in ruins. There isn’t a soul around me. I get wobbly and dizzy, shocked from what I see.
“What the hell just happened?” I yell, but I don’t know why I bother. The scenery around me is so disturbing.
Broken buildings, burning landscape, and no signs of life. I check every house, but there is only vacancies among them; no people, no Pokémon…but then I check my house: completely destroyed. The only parts untouched are, ironically, rooms like my bedroom. I run in, grab all my gear and what's left of my clothes, and run out as it all collapses. I`m speechless because of the entire landscape before me.
I see the letter ‘Y’ appear on the ground as a dark impression: a shadow! Flying overhead, the too-far-to-see figure moves toward the large mountain far away. For some reason, I’m compelled enough to follow it.
“Why am I following this thing?” I ask myself, though I do not give a response.
I reach the top using the trails and, running up the incline, I find out the shadow’s true identity.
"My name is Yveltal I thank you for releasing me and waking me up" Says the dark bacon-like bird with a menacingly hoarse voice.
“Why did you do this my town the people the Pokémon what happened?” I question.
"This even I don't know. When I am awakened, I go on a rampage and cannot remember what I do. Oops. Sorry."
“Then why am I alive?”
"Again, I have no idea. This is new for me as well. No one has survived one of my rampages before, but I feel something in you I have never felt before."
“Well what is it why am I alive? What happened to me?”
"I am a presence of Death. Inside of you lies a power even I cannot achieve, but for now I must go. I do not belong here. I must leave to Kalos. I hope you learn to harness this power and to not use it for evil intentions. Goodbye for now and I know we will meet again," it whispers into my ear.
Yveltal flies off into the distance. Now, though, I know what I must do. I have to to figure out what Yveltal meant in his words. “Power?” I must go to Kalos and find him. Even if he has no idea what I am, he at least knows more than I do. And, well, that’s something.
I head towards the Pokémon League and from there I`ll take a plane to Kalos. I am puzzled, determined, scared, and brave. I have no idea what awaits me in Kalos, but I know I must go there.
There you go the start of my story I hope you like it. Tell me if I should continue this story below and also tell me how you feel about it. I know I`m vague on where the story is located, the time frame, and what the charaters look like don`t worry if there important from now on I`ll put them in the story. Plus what he looks like needed to be in Chapter 1 trust me.
Anyway
~Check Out 4/28/14
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My name is Check and what I`m about to tell you is between you and me only got it. The story I`m about to tell you is about how I died; well mostly died. Don`t worry I`m ok now, but well... just listen.
I`m Falling…or…floating? I cannot tell. I think I’m dead, but I don't know. I don't know—where am I…who am I? No, I know who I am, and this is where I end…or is it where I begin?
"Do you know who you are?" a deep voice says.
" M-My name is C-Check Check Damon.”
1 Year Earlier
P.O.V me (Check Damon)
P.O.V me (Check Damon)
Time: 10.00 am on August 28.
Location: Unova Region, 10 miles out of Pokémon League, Victory Point Village
Location: Unova Region, 10 miles out of Pokémon League, Victory Point Village
“CHECK, GET UP!!!” Mom yells.
I yawn loudly, stretching my thin arms until they begin to hurt in an oddly satisfying way. “All right already! I`m getting up! Damn, can’t I get some extra sleep on my 13 birthday!?” I complain.
"No! Now get up—you’re going to be late for school. You know it starts at eleven in the morning, right Check?" Mom nags at me continuously.
“Yeah, I get it! I`ll be down in a half hour, okay?”
"You better, kid! Now hurry up!"
3 Hours later at school
So I`m bored at school and then all of a sudden...
"Everybody come outside! Somebody found a cocoon of sorts," says the teacher.
We head outside and see a Purple reddish Cocoon with black marks on it lying on Town Rock, which is a large boulder centered in the middle of our city.
That's when I hear it: a voice! I don't know if it’s scared or angry, but I do know it told me to touch the cocoon. I touch it, but soon my vision fades as the gravitational pull exceeds my own strength and pulls me down to my resting place; or, at least, to the point where I black out.
I wake up to find my town in ruins. There isn’t a soul around me. I get wobbly and dizzy, shocked from what I see.
“What the hell just happened?” I yell, but I don’t know why I bother. The scenery around me is so disturbing.
Broken buildings, burning landscape, and no signs of life. I check every house, but there is only vacancies among them; no people, no Pokémon…but then I check my house: completely destroyed. The only parts untouched are, ironically, rooms like my bedroom. I run in, grab all my gear and what's left of my clothes, and run out as it all collapses. I`m speechless because of the entire landscape before me.
I see the letter ‘Y’ appear on the ground as a dark impression: a shadow! Flying overhead, the too-far-to-see figure moves toward the large mountain far away. For some reason, I’m compelled enough to follow it.
“Why am I following this thing?” I ask myself, though I do not give a response.
20 minutes later
I reach the top using the trails and, running up the incline, I find out the shadow’s true identity.
"My name is Yveltal I thank you for releasing me and waking me up" Says the dark bacon-like bird with a menacingly hoarse voice.
“Why did you do this my town the people the Pokémon what happened?” I question.
"This even I don't know. When I am awakened, I go on a rampage and cannot remember what I do. Oops. Sorry."
“Then why am I alive?”
"Again, I have no idea. This is new for me as well. No one has survived one of my rampages before, but I feel something in you I have never felt before."
“Well what is it why am I alive? What happened to me?”
"I am a presence of Death. Inside of you lies a power even I cannot achieve, but for now I must go. I do not belong here. I must leave to Kalos. I hope you learn to harness this power and to not use it for evil intentions. Goodbye for now and I know we will meet again," it whispers into my ear.
Yveltal flies off into the distance. Now, though, I know what I must do. I have to to figure out what Yveltal meant in his words. “Power?” I must go to Kalos and find him. Even if he has no idea what I am, he at least knows more than I do. And, well, that’s something.
I head towards the Pokémon League and from there I`ll take a plane to Kalos. I am puzzled, determined, scared, and brave. I have no idea what awaits me in Kalos, but I know I must go there.
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There you go the start of my story I hope you like it. Tell me if I should continue this story below and also tell me how you feel about it. I know I`m vague on where the story is located, the time frame, and what the charaters look like don`t worry if there important from now on I`ll put them in the story. Plus what he looks like needed to be in Chapter 1 trust me.
Anyway
~Check Out 4/28/14
Good luck.