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I make this fanfic in honour of the members in the Kingdom Hearts clan/club, and the many warriors that died in the last straw.

This is a good read for all, if you like KH or not.This story is based after Kingdom Hearts 2.

Chapter 1: The letter

Sora, Riku and Kairi read the letter over and over again, hardly daring to believe it. The letter had come just after Sora, Riku, Donald, Goofy and Roxas had defeated Xemnas once and for all, Xemnas was Xehanorts nobody, the nobodys were what were formed when [/i]somone with a strong heart passed away, before that Sora, Donald and Goofy had defeated Xehanorts heartless who called himself Ansem, heartless were what formed when anyone died.

I could go into alot more dtail about heartless, nobodys, Ansem and Xemnas, but there is not much point.

The letter contained bad news.

Dear Sora, Riku and Kairi

I have bad news, very bad news.
It has just been discovered that if somones nobody and heartless both die, then the former self is reborn.
This means that Xehanort is alive!
You have to meet me, Goofy and Donald at the castle, and Roxas and Namine have to come too!

Yours sincerely King Mickey

PS: Trust your keyblades.


Keyblades were legendary weapons, that were a cross between a sword and a key, they can be used for opening any lock, and keyblade masters are chosen to defeat evil.

Roxas was Soras nobody, you may ask: 'But Sora isnt dead!' well the answer is: when he unlocked his heart to free Kairis, he had to turn into a heartless! After that, Kairi restored him back to normal.

Namine was Kairis nobody, you may ask: 'But Kairis not dead!' but when the door to darkness opened, Kairis heart was trapped within Sora.


I understand that some of
the facts from Kingdom Hearts are abit eary, but this is fan-creations, so it doesnt really matter much.
 
Chapter 2: The 'chasers'

"WHAT!!!" Riku shouted as he read the letter a 3rd time."YOU MEAN WE WENT THROUGH ALL THAT TROUBLE JUST RO UNLEASH A BIGGER THREAT!!??" Riku thundered. "Calm down, Riku" Kairi said. "Ugghh,this is to annoying to be true..." Sora muttered.

They were on an island, destiny island, they would play and train here all day until sunset. Roxas and Namine then appeared, Roxas coming out of Soras body and Namine coming out of Kairis (They were able to do this as they were their nobodys).

Namine was a very good drawer, and always carryed around a drawing pad where-ever she went.
Sora had a keyblade, which he could change the form of, but he usually keeps it in either: 'Oathkeeper' design, or 'Kingdom Key' design.
Riku had a keyblade that could use dark powers, it was always in 'Way To Dawn' design.
Kairi's keyblade could heal others and herself, it was always in 'Flower Vines' design.
Roxas used 2 keyblades, 1 of which was always in 'Oblivion' design, and the other was always in 'Oathkeeper' design.

"Well, we have to go to the castle!" Roxas and Namine said together.
"Yeah, but how?" Sora asked.
"Simple" Namine said.
"Us nobodys can create portals to take us anywhere!" Roxas continued.
A portal appeared in front of them, out of nowhere!

"Well done Roxas!" Kairi congratulated.
"Ummm that wasnt me..." Roxas replied.
"Oh, sorry Namine, well done!" Kairi said.
"But that wasnt me either..." Namine replied.
Suddenly 4 people in armour, with keyblades in their hands, came running out of the portal!
"Wha-" Sora started, but before he could finish, the 1st person slashed out at him!
Sora generated his keyblade and managed to block it, just before striking the man in the chest, sending him flying! But he did a back-flip in the air and landed on his feet unharmed!
Kairi, Riku and Roxas generated their keyblades, ready for battle!
"Namine! Go and hide!" Roxas ordered pointing his 'Oblivion' keyblade at Namine.
"Right!" Namine replied, taking her notebook and cralling through a small cavern which lead to 'the secret place'.

Sora charged at the man, keyblade ready to swing! The man stood there, his face was covered by a helmet, like the others, but Sora could tell that he was grinning. But Sora didnt care. Because before he reached the man, he stopped and pointed his keyblade at the man, and shouted: "BlIZZARD!" Suddenly a frosty blast shot out of his keyblade and hit the man!
The man stood there, frozen.

1 down 3 to go Sora thought, so he looked to his side, expecting to see Riku, Roxas and Kairi in battle, but he saw instead, that they were lying on the floor, earth was trapping them, sending roots up from the sand, locking their posistion.

The 3 remaining warriors were pointing their keyblades at Sora, expecting him to drop his weapon. But instead, Sora pointed his keyblade in the air and shouted: "REFLECT!" Just as the enemys fired a fireball at him, the reflect spell had created a forcefeild around him, but even so, the fireballs teared through the forcefeild, slamming into Sora.[/align]
 
love it!! I would made a KH fan-fic but now i almost forgot everything about KH. my younger cousin broke KH1 and KH2 so now i have to remember what happened in the games
 
Chapter 3: Chain of memories

In the secret place Namine had been listening to the battle, every spell, clang of a keyblade, and every ouch of a person who had been hit.
She noticed that these sounds had suddenly stopped, and only the sound of the wind and the sea remained.
Namine rushed outside, expecting to see Sora, Riku, Kairi and Roxas, but instead she saw just a frozen body, 1 of the men (or creatures) who had attacked.
"Theres no-one here..." Namine muttered, walking up to the frozen warrior.
"Its not a heartless, or a nobody..." Namine muttered, reaching out to touch the figure.
But as her fingers were a hairs breath away from the body, the ice turned red, and flashed, then started melting.
The body was alive.

As soon as all the ice was melted, he grinned from the inside of his helmet, and lashed out at Namine, missing her by millimetres!
Namine screamed, then ran, but the warrior was too quick for her, she was just far enough away from the warrior, to avoid his slashes. The warrior stopped, and pointedhis keyblade at Namine, ready to launch a fireball.

Namine was a witch, she could break peoples hearts into pieces, but when she did that she was left with hardly any strengh at all.

Namine just hoped the warrior had a heart.
She closed her eyes, and when she opened them again, it had happened, the warriors heart had been broken.

Namine collapsed.
She just had enough power left to create a portal, and crawl through it.

She had teleported to Disney Castle.
She found herself in front of the king.
"Your majesty..." Namine told the king the whole story.
"What... They've been captured?? But, you say that the chasers attacked you..." The king said.
"The what?" Namine asked.
"The warriors you described to me are known as chasers, they are keyblade bearers from the past, but I thought they were extinct, they died out in the keyblade war... Unless... Xehanorts returned, he commanded the chasers in the keyblade war, he must have found a way to bring them back..." The King explained.

"A keyblade... war?" Namine asked.
"Yes but, ill explain that later, we have to find and rescue Sora, Riku, Kairi and Roxas, now, take this..." In the kings out held hand a light appeared, and it floated over to Namine.
"Take it." The king said.
Namine reached for the light and grabbed it.
It turned into a keyblade.
 
^^ Is it really that good?!

I have a good storyline for it, just wait till the...

Nah im not giving out any spoilers! :)
Chapter 4: Eal

Eal walked along the deserted streets in the world that never was, keyblade in hand, he had kept all his nobodys and heartless memories, he remembered Sora, he remembered Roxas, he remembered organasation XIII, but most of all, he remembered Xehanort.

The small nobodys in the world that never was, were not very smart, they were creatures without feelings, that were commanded by organisation XIII, but organisation XIII no longer existed, now the nobodys commanded themselves, all they wanted to do was avenge their master, Xemnas.

Eal watched as nobodys appeard from nowhere, then engaged combat with them, slashing out at them knocking them back, he was an expert at fire magic, so he could create whirlpools of fire, meteorites, almost anything to do with fire, he used these fire spells alot when fighting nobodys.

Once he had beat them all, he stopped, and looked up at the castle that never was, and remembered when he was in organisation XIII, well when his nobody was in organisation XIII.

Suddenly a man started walking down the crystal path leading to the castle, Eal reckognised him as Xehanort.

Xehanort walked up to Eal.
Abit short, but hey, thats not really a chapter, its a sort of vision that Roxas had, but youll see that scene later :)
 
Chapter 5: The rescue.

Sora, Riku, Kairi and Roxas were locked up in room 428 of sector 37 in the chasers prison, it had been a day since they were captured and all they had got to eat was a moldy peice of bread between them.

It was early in the morning and Roxas had woken up, after having a strange vision (see chapter 4).
"That was weird..." Roxas muttered to himself.
The prison cell that they were in was especially designed for keybearers, so it did not have a lock, instead a mechanical door that reacted in some way when you opened it.
They didnt want to find out what that way was.


Chapter 5 will continue later.
 
Chapter 5: The rescue (part 2)

The alarm sounded, without warning, waking up Sora, Kairi and Riku.
"An alarm?" Sora realised as he stood up from the metal floor he had been sleeping on.
"Maybe its somone coming to save us!" Riku said.
"I doubt it, there are hundreds of prisoners here, and most of them are quite popular..." Roxas said, as he remembered seeing Obi-Won Kenobi and Ash Ketchum in the prison cells.

They saw through the window on the metal door that 20 guards were running through the corridoor towards presumably where the intruders had been spotted.

"Well, whoevers broken in have no hope..." Kairi said as they saw 33 more guards running past.

"They'll also have a great time battling those guys, I want to be part of the action..." Riku said.

***

The intruders werent having a great time battling the chasers, it was so hard battling hundreds of them, the only reason they were still standing was because 1 of the intruders was King Mickey, and the other was Namine.

"I cant do this for much longer..." Namine said, as she was struggling to hang on, since this was the 1st time she had ever swung her keyblade.
"Dont worry..." King Mickey reassured.
He swung his keyblade vigourously, knocking back several chasers.
The king was a proffesional keybearer, and had been crowned a keyblade king, so he could give keyblades to others.
"I cant do it your magesty..."

King Mickey looked into Namines eyes, she was serious.
"I cant give up!" Mickey said as he threw his keyblade at a chaser.

He then jumped in the air and started glowing white, it was so blinding that Namine couldnt see anything, but when he stopped and Namines sight was restored, the chasers were gone, and so was the King.

Namnie called out for him, but no reply came.
So hesitantly, she continued along the corridoor, alone.
She came to Soras cell.
"Namine, get us out of here!" Roxas cried.
Namine opened the door.
 
Haha you all like it, so i will continue and if it stays popular ill finish and publish it mwhahahahahahaaaa!
 
Chapter 6: The search

"What, the Kings dissapeared?" Sora sked Namine eagerly.
"Yes... He did this powerful magic spell and then all the chasers were gone... With the king."
Namine replyed.
"What are chasers?" Riku asked.
"They are the keybearers in armour... They were commanded by Xehanort in the Keyblade War, and since Xehanorts returned, the King recons that Xehanort has found a way to bring them back..."
Namine explained.
"A keyblade war?" Roxas asked.
"Thats exactly what I asked the King, but he said he didnt have time to explain..." Namine said.
"We have to find the King!" Kairi said confidently.

This conversation was happening at Destiny Islands, after Namine had rescued them.
Of course even after Namine had opened the door it wasnt easy...
10 chasers had found them as soon as Namine had opened the door, they ahd managed to defeat them with their combined power.
And alot af magic... Sora could use his wind magic very well to create forcefeilds around himself, and bouce back enemys magic, apart from the chasers occasional fireball.
Riku could use his earth and dark magic well, so he could make ground come up underneath the chasers, and send black fireballs at them.
Kairi was famous for her ice and healing magic, so she cpould heal the team when injured, using her favourite spell: curaga, and she could freeze the chasers for a limited time.
Roxas didnt use magic, he just used his 2 keyblades to absoutoutely smish enemys.
Namine could use her memory erasing powers to confuse chasers for a certain amount of time.

They all agreed to search for the King, so they began at the world that never was, running into many nobodys on the way, but they had had so much practice that it was childs play compared to the chasers...
They searched through 24 different worlds and still nothing...

"This is hopeless..." Sora said eventually.
"Hmmm weve searched through all the worlds weve been to, but I know 1 place we didnt look..." Riku said, grinning.
 
I told you not to be a noob biomorphic, go post in the KH clan if you want to...
Chapter 7: The dark realm (Im not talking yugioh here)

Riku finished his sentence, without continueing...
"Where, Riku?" Sora asked.
"The place that the King got his keyblade..." Riku said.
"The dark realm?! Of course!" Sora realised.
"But I dont think that even us nobodys could create a portal to another dimension..." Roxas said.

"You gotta try!" Kairi said, desperately. She looked into Roxas' eyes, and Roxas gave in when Namine said:
"Shes right, we gotta try..."
"Fine then, we'll try, but dont expect a ummm... Portal to the dark realm!"
Roxas generated his keyblades, and held them up to the sky, while Namine pointed her keyblade to the sky aswell...

Riku was determined that they could get it right, he just hoped determination would help...

***

"We have a problem sir," A chaser warned his commander.
"What is it now, chaser 349585159..." The commander replied.
"Well, the keybearers are making a portal intom the dark realm, our location may no longer be private..." The chaser replied.
"Send re-inforcemants to the guards, we cant risk the destruction of..." The commander started, but stopped as xehanort entered the controll room.

"I hope everything things going well, commander 13..."


Part 2 of chapter 7 is on its way...
 
Chapter 7: The dark realm (Part 2)

A portal appeared...
They all celbrated, so they presumed that this time Roxas/Namine DID make the portal.
"Alright, Roxas good one!" Riku cheered.
" *Cough* *Cough* I did it alswell..." Namine said.
"Well, nevermind lets just get into the portal."

They all walked in, 1 after another.
"Hahaha... They all have keyblades..."

"This is the dark realm alright..." Riku said, as they appeared in a beach, but instead of the usual scenery, there were boulders with a certain aura about them that you cant quite define...

Namine had never been to the dark realm before, so she asked:
"Is this the dark realm version of Destiny Islands?"
"Yeah..." Sora replied.
"Creepy..." Namine implied.
"Not if your like me," A voice behind them said, out of the blue.

"Who are you?" Sora said as he looked round to see a person in armour apart from a helmet.
His face looked alot like Roxas', but it was clear that they werent related, the same aura that covered the boulders, also covered him.
"I am your heartless..." He replied.
"What?" Sora asked again.
"I am your heartless." He said again.
"But, you dont look like 1..." Sora said.
"Xehanorts heartless didnt look like your average heartless either, now did he?"
"I guess not..."

Suddenly everthing was black, but it wasnt dark, Sora could still see himself and his heartless.
But everyone else was gone.
"Where is everyone?" Sora demanded.
"They have gone nowhere, it is you and I that have gone somewhere..." His heartless replied.
"Where is somewhere?" Sora asked, but before he could get an answer, his heartless had gone from a man in armour, to a black creature, who was vicous, and a beast.

Go onto this link, and select sinister sundown, and listen to that while reading the following paragraph:
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It jumped at him, so Sora generated his keyblade, ready for a battle.
"Alright then, fine have it your way!" Sora challenged.
It leaped at Sora again, but Sora managed to defend himself using his keyblade, and then slashed it.
It leaped in the air, and created a dark destructive ball, which headed towards Sora.
It hit him.
It sent Sora flying back, and he lay still.
His heartless ran up to him, getting ready for the final strike, but before it could, Roxas suddenly appeared, and defending Sora, he sent the heartless flying back.
 
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