I've decided to rewrite Legend of the Seven Stones again. (It was the first fanfic I posted onto pokebeach, posted it about 1 1/2 years ago or something)
Here's the prologue.
Once, a long time ago, far before time existed, there was a pouch. The pouch was a collection of everything that existed so far. When something was added, it went into the pouch. A few years later, the pouch started to warm up, and it eventually exploded in red-orange colors. This was known as the Big Bang. Slowly, the universe came into shape, and the pouch disappeared. It eventually exploded, and released 7 stones. The 7 stones were 7 different colors. Ruby, sapphire, topaz, emerald, gold, silver, and crystal. Each of the crystals represented a certain personality or feeling. Ruby had anger, sapphire had calm, topaz had afraid, emerald had joy, gold had kindness, silver had afraid, and crystal had leader. Each stone had a certain power, matching the color of the stone. The stones controlled the universe for trillions of years. Until IT happened.
Millions of years later, pokemon started appearing around the world we live in today. Pokemon were so overpopulated that the legendary pokemon had no choice but to get rid of some and out them on a new planet: Zorre. Zorre was not a regular planet: it was created by the gods and the rulers of the pokemon universe. But what happened to the stones?
When mewtwo was first created, it escaped and caused mayhem all over the place. Mewtwo snuck into a legendary meeting, where it found out about the pokemon’s plans. He went into the room and destroyed everything in sight. Blazing, raging flames covered the entire room. The only thing in sight without the flames was a little pink creature that resembled a cat: otherwise known as Mew. Mew was carrying 7 strange stones. Each stone had a different color: ruby, sapphire, topaz, emerald, gold, silver, and crystal. They sparkled greatly as mew flew away with the 7 stones. Mewtwo concentrated, and lifted himself off of the ground, and flew to find mew and take the 7 stones.
Mewtwo caught up to mew, but they landed in a very strange area. It was like a battlefield, but with strange features. The lights were turned off, unusually. Nightmares from the dreams of pokemon flew about. Mew tried to escape, but there was no way out. As mew cried in fear, mewtwo blasted mew with a powerful energy blast. Mew cried out in pain. Wounds covered its entire body. It couldn’t talk and it couldn’t move. “You have the seven legendary stones. The ones that controlled the universe.” Mewtwo spoke. “Mew, just imagine what power these stones hold. They controlled the universe, until the universe had enough power to protect itself. I will take those stones, and become ruler of the world. You will not stop me!”
As mewtwo reached its cold, evil hands to grab the stones, they flashed. Each one flashed in a different color and greatly sparkled in more colors than you can think of. They slowly rose into the air, glowing and circling each other. Suddenly, the stones started glowing a crimson red. “That anger…..it’s incredible!” Mewtwo lunged out and grabbed the crystal. “I have never felt so much power before in my LIFE!” Mewtwo yelled, surrounding himself in a shiny grey aura. Thinking quickly, Mew lunged and grabbed the only crystal in reach: the gold crystal. Mew surrounded herself in a pinkish gold aura, then rammed into Mewtwo. There was a huge explosion, leaving nothing but the remaining crystals behind.
Hearing the explosion, the curious phione went to see what happened. “Mama! Mama!” the phione cried to her mama. A manaphy came floating by and patted the little phione on the back. “Now, sweetheart. What happened?” manaphy asked. “Look!” Phione pointed to the seven stones. Manaphy gasped as they started glowing. “Phione, get out of here!” Manaphy cried. “But, mama…” phione tried to say. “NO! Get out of here, now! Get the others!” Manaphy screamed. Knowing what she must do, little phione floated away as fast as she could.
“Take this, ruby!” Manaphy cried, unleashing an ice beam from its mouth. The ruby swiftfully dodged the attack and rammed into Manaphy. Coughing up blood, Manaphy struggled to get up. The topaz and the gold crystals started to charge up electrical energy. “This is the end…” Manaphy sniffed, seeing tears drop to the ground like a heavy drizzle. The topaz and gold crystals unleashes their energy, shocking Manaphy with extreme power. “MAMA!” a voice cried. It was Phione! She jumped in the way of the blast, taking the hit. “PHIONE!!” Manaphy cried in a sorrowful way. “Mama……” Phione weakly said while still taking the blast. “I……..love…………you………” The crystals stopped the electrical blast causing Phione to fall to the ground. “Phione…..” Manaphy cried. “Why? Why did you have to die?!” Manaphy screamed in emotional pain. “You were destined to become Queen of the Sea someday…” Manaphy was crying even harder than before.
FLASHBACK
“Phione, please stop. This is impossible. There’s no way a little Phione like you can do this.”
“Believe in me, Mama!”
“But I do believe in you, but this is too dangerous.”
“But Mama…”
“I forbid you from taking part in that race!”
“………………………………………………….”
“……….Phione?”
“……………….I hate you.”
END FLASHBACK
FLASHBACK
“PHIONE! I told you many times and I’m telling it to you again! Stop racing!”
“But Mama-”
“No buts! You listen to ME! Do you understand?!”
“No Mama! You listen to me, just this once!”
“…………………………………….”
“I heard you. You were cheering for me in that race. You wanted me to win. You didn’t even try to pull me out of the race.”
“…………………………………………………”
“You even congratulated me in the Winner’s Circle. You wanted me to be in that race. You didn’t even tell the judge to disqualify me! Admit it, Mama: you believed in me.”
END FLASHBACK
“Phione……you taught me a very important lesson in your long life.” Manaphy said to herself as she stood up and wiped all of her tears away. “Never give up! Believe in yourself! Never stop fighting until the very end!!” she cried, punching the sapphire crystal with extreme force that left a crack right in the middle. The crystal emitted sparks and occasional discharges and rammed into a wall. “You deserve this TOO!” Manaphy yelled, punching the topaz crystal with an even larger amount of force that left it shattered. However, it quickly regenerated. “Damn it!”
Manaphy suddenly felt a sharp pain in her sides and collapsed. The sapphire crystal took advantage of this moment and dashed towards Manaphy. It tackled Manaphy, then emitted a blue aura. Manaphy started glowing the same aura, then vanished along with the crystal.
The remaining crystals started glowing an intense black aura. They flew around the battlefield and into the hall. From there, they teleported to the room where the legendaries were having a meeting. All you could hear after that were explosions, nothing else. All that was left was a fragment of the crystal Mewtwo had taken. The little crystal weakly flew over to the hall, but collapsed. The crystal used the last of its power to create a green portal. Realizing what it had done and what would happen, the crystal flew through the portal.
R&R, please.
Here's the prologue.
Once, a long time ago, far before time existed, there was a pouch. The pouch was a collection of everything that existed so far. When something was added, it went into the pouch. A few years later, the pouch started to warm up, and it eventually exploded in red-orange colors. This was known as the Big Bang. Slowly, the universe came into shape, and the pouch disappeared. It eventually exploded, and released 7 stones. The 7 stones were 7 different colors. Ruby, sapphire, topaz, emerald, gold, silver, and crystal. Each of the crystals represented a certain personality or feeling. Ruby had anger, sapphire had calm, topaz had afraid, emerald had joy, gold had kindness, silver had afraid, and crystal had leader. Each stone had a certain power, matching the color of the stone. The stones controlled the universe for trillions of years. Until IT happened.
Millions of years later, pokemon started appearing around the world we live in today. Pokemon were so overpopulated that the legendary pokemon had no choice but to get rid of some and out them on a new planet: Zorre. Zorre was not a regular planet: it was created by the gods and the rulers of the pokemon universe. But what happened to the stones?
When mewtwo was first created, it escaped and caused mayhem all over the place. Mewtwo snuck into a legendary meeting, where it found out about the pokemon’s plans. He went into the room and destroyed everything in sight. Blazing, raging flames covered the entire room. The only thing in sight without the flames was a little pink creature that resembled a cat: otherwise known as Mew. Mew was carrying 7 strange stones. Each stone had a different color: ruby, sapphire, topaz, emerald, gold, silver, and crystal. They sparkled greatly as mew flew away with the 7 stones. Mewtwo concentrated, and lifted himself off of the ground, and flew to find mew and take the 7 stones.
Mewtwo caught up to mew, but they landed in a very strange area. It was like a battlefield, but with strange features. The lights were turned off, unusually. Nightmares from the dreams of pokemon flew about. Mew tried to escape, but there was no way out. As mew cried in fear, mewtwo blasted mew with a powerful energy blast. Mew cried out in pain. Wounds covered its entire body. It couldn’t talk and it couldn’t move. “You have the seven legendary stones. The ones that controlled the universe.” Mewtwo spoke. “Mew, just imagine what power these stones hold. They controlled the universe, until the universe had enough power to protect itself. I will take those stones, and become ruler of the world. You will not stop me!”
As mewtwo reached its cold, evil hands to grab the stones, they flashed. Each one flashed in a different color and greatly sparkled in more colors than you can think of. They slowly rose into the air, glowing and circling each other. Suddenly, the stones started glowing a crimson red. “That anger…..it’s incredible!” Mewtwo lunged out and grabbed the crystal. “I have never felt so much power before in my LIFE!” Mewtwo yelled, surrounding himself in a shiny grey aura. Thinking quickly, Mew lunged and grabbed the only crystal in reach: the gold crystal. Mew surrounded herself in a pinkish gold aura, then rammed into Mewtwo. There was a huge explosion, leaving nothing but the remaining crystals behind.
Hearing the explosion, the curious phione went to see what happened. “Mama! Mama!” the phione cried to her mama. A manaphy came floating by and patted the little phione on the back. “Now, sweetheart. What happened?” manaphy asked. “Look!” Phione pointed to the seven stones. Manaphy gasped as they started glowing. “Phione, get out of here!” Manaphy cried. “But, mama…” phione tried to say. “NO! Get out of here, now! Get the others!” Manaphy screamed. Knowing what she must do, little phione floated away as fast as she could.
“Take this, ruby!” Manaphy cried, unleashing an ice beam from its mouth. The ruby swiftfully dodged the attack and rammed into Manaphy. Coughing up blood, Manaphy struggled to get up. The topaz and the gold crystals started to charge up electrical energy. “This is the end…” Manaphy sniffed, seeing tears drop to the ground like a heavy drizzle. The topaz and gold crystals unleashes their energy, shocking Manaphy with extreme power. “MAMA!” a voice cried. It was Phione! She jumped in the way of the blast, taking the hit. “PHIONE!!” Manaphy cried in a sorrowful way. “Mama……” Phione weakly said while still taking the blast. “I……..love…………you………” The crystals stopped the electrical blast causing Phione to fall to the ground. “Phione…..” Manaphy cried. “Why? Why did you have to die?!” Manaphy screamed in emotional pain. “You were destined to become Queen of the Sea someday…” Manaphy was crying even harder than before.
FLASHBACK
“Phione, please stop. This is impossible. There’s no way a little Phione like you can do this.”
“Believe in me, Mama!”
“But I do believe in you, but this is too dangerous.”
“But Mama…”
“I forbid you from taking part in that race!”
“………………………………………………….”
“……….Phione?”
“……………….I hate you.”
END FLASHBACK
FLASHBACK
“PHIONE! I told you many times and I’m telling it to you again! Stop racing!”
“But Mama-”
“No buts! You listen to ME! Do you understand?!”
“No Mama! You listen to me, just this once!”
“…………………………………….”
“I heard you. You were cheering for me in that race. You wanted me to win. You didn’t even try to pull me out of the race.”
“…………………………………………………”
“You even congratulated me in the Winner’s Circle. You wanted me to be in that race. You didn’t even tell the judge to disqualify me! Admit it, Mama: you believed in me.”
END FLASHBACK
“Phione……you taught me a very important lesson in your long life.” Manaphy said to herself as she stood up and wiped all of her tears away. “Never give up! Believe in yourself! Never stop fighting until the very end!!” she cried, punching the sapphire crystal with extreme force that left a crack right in the middle. The crystal emitted sparks and occasional discharges and rammed into a wall. “You deserve this TOO!” Manaphy yelled, punching the topaz crystal with an even larger amount of force that left it shattered. However, it quickly regenerated. “Damn it!”
Manaphy suddenly felt a sharp pain in her sides and collapsed. The sapphire crystal took advantage of this moment and dashed towards Manaphy. It tackled Manaphy, then emitted a blue aura. Manaphy started glowing the same aura, then vanished along with the crystal.
The remaining crystals started glowing an intense black aura. They flew around the battlefield and into the hall. From there, they teleported to the room where the legendaries were having a meeting. All you could hear after that were explosions, nothing else. All that was left was a fragment of the crystal Mewtwo had taken. The little crystal weakly flew over to the hall, but collapsed. The crystal used the last of its power to create a green portal. Realizing what it had done and what would happen, the crystal flew through the portal.
R&R, please.
