LegyMaster's Art Thread

[LegyMaster]

I believe that i am a great drawer/artist. The only thing i'm not really good at is digital art... XD I LOVE to make my own Fakemon.

Here are some for example:
Ying

I also do art of Pokemon:

and I do take requests. I can, of course, have them doing certain poses if you want it for an avatar. Just PM me! Thanks and Enjoy!

(I will have my art colored.. - LM)

 

[SuperArtNinja]

This is a start, but I see a lot of work that could be done to help improve your work. I will suggest that if you have work on lined paper that you like, you really should trace them or transfer them onto a piece of computer paper or Photoshop the lines out. The lines can be really distracting and are more likely to detract from a piece than add.

I feel that the fakemon posted could use a little more detail. Maybe a few more markings, or a fur pattern, maybe give Riddchimps fur a question mark pattern, or possibly put a question mark shaped tuft of fur on its head. The evolution is an interesting idea. I like the typing of Normal/Psychic, it's always been an interesting combo to me. However, I feel that the evolution went in the wrong direction. I think that it could use a few new details to make it feel like it truly evolved. It makes me think that it's a middle evolution since the changes weren't drastic enough. Maybe you could add some more patterns or give it some extra markings, something to make it more distinct off the bat.

Other than that, just keep practicing! It's a good start and a good step in the right direction and you'll get there eventually. Good Work.

 

[Luckyfire]

Agreed with what Super said, and I feel that the moves Throwback and Choke are too overpowered. 150 and 100 damage? Reasonable for the TCG, (except for the prevolution) but not reasonable for the VG. Which one are you basing the moves in?

But great Fakemon, Legy! The first one especially, is cute.

 

[LegyMaster]

Agreed with what Super said, and I feel that the moves Throwback and Choke are too overpowered. 150 and 100 damage? Reasonable for the TCG, (except for the prevolution) but not reasonable for the VG. Which one are you basing the moves in?

But great Fakemon, Legy! The first one especially, is cute.

Thank you! The moves were based on the TCG but i didn't really need to put those there... XD. I put the name of the first fakemon on there. His name is Ying

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This is a start, but I see a lot of work that could be done to help improve your work. I will suggest that if you have work on lined paper that you like, you really should trace them or transfer them onto a piece of computer paper or Photoshop the lines out. The lines can be really distracting and are more likely to detract from a piece than add.

I feel that the fakemon posted could use a little more detail. Maybe a few more markings, or a fur pattern, maybe give Riddchimps fur a question mark pattern, or possibly put a question mark shaped tuft of fur on its head. The evolution is an interesting idea. I like the typing of Normal/Psychic, it's always been an interesting combo to me. However, I feel that the evolution went in the wrong direction. I think that it could use a few new details to make it feel like it truly evolved. It makes me think that it's a middle evolution since the changes weren't drastic enough. Maybe you could add some more patterns or give it some extra markings, something to make it more distinct off the bat.

Other than that, just keep practicing! It's a good start and a good step in the right direction and you'll get there eventually. Good Work.

Thank you. I wonder if it was hard to notice, but Riddchimp's tail is shaped like a Question mark. I had an idea where it'd usually be shaped like a question mark but when he is surprised, angry, etc. he'd have an exclamation mark as his tail. (As shown in riddchimp's attack)

 

[SuperArtNinja]

I like the idea of the tail, but it's not as obvious as it could be. Since both question and exclamation marks are more than just the shape, they have the dot at the end. If you can find a way to make it look like a dot at the bottom of the tail, it would help make the tail appear as those marks. I still think I'm going to go with what I said earlier about them using a little more detail, it would just make them stand out just a little more.

 

[[POKEMSTR] KIARA]

I like the idea for Ying (im assuming it's one half of the ying and yang symbol)
You should make a Yang so they could be a duo, like minun and plusle!
Overall the fakemon you have created are good ideas but good do with some improvement, such as detail and possibly some colour to make them look more appealing. You should shade them in properly so it looks more presentable.
and just an idea for riddchimp, maybe you could place the mark/s on his belly.
If coloured in you could make his belly a lighter colour of whatever colour his fur would be, then a clashing colour for the mark.