Writing may i have your opinion on my untraditional haiku?

[darkpoet]

this is metaphorical, but take it as you will.

I refuse to breathe-
From machines and tubes again
Now please, pull the plug

{D} darkpoet {D}

 

[MrGatr]

You really want my opinion?
*MrGatr reads poem over again and again*

Ah, I finally got it.
The poem is talking about someone on life support, their tired of it, so they just wanna die. In any case, that is the most amazing death nontraditional Haiku I've read on the beach yet!