Writing My deathnote story (started it about 4 days ago)

Dokromi

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Ok this is a story about the anime deathnote and so far im only in chapter four of my story so here it is i hope you enjoy :D
the characters are based on people i know. Also sorry for the shortness i have like 7 pages to type so right now is a sample sorry if its too short tommorow i will try to add 3-4 pages to this thanks for reading again sorry for its shortness

Characters:
Jason Stanton
Brown eyes and black brownish hair with red streaks

Brandon Dansho
Dirty Blonde hair and brown eyes

Ryne Lek
Blonde hair and blue eyes

Heather Pent
Blonde Curly Hair and Green eyes

Steven Hench
Dirty Blonder hair and brown eyes

Cassie Hort
Red hair and blue-green eyes

Morgan Etsfo
Brunette and green eyes

Reka Denstro
Blue-Black eyes and black hair with golden stripes

NOW THE STORY BEGINS


Chapter One:
"Mr.Stanton?, Mr.Stanton?, MR.STANTON wake up you little punk dont you be sleeping in my class!" Mr.Micky said while slapping Jason upside his head in an attempt to wake him out of his sleeping state. "Oh hey Mr.Micky can i help you? if i can then it must be important since you woke me up am i right or am i right?" Jason replied while he rubbed his head and stretched out his arms. "Oh shut it Jason and like you said you can help me by staying after school for some detention young man!" Mr.Micky said with a fierce and forceful tone. "No you can't do that i have plans and its so unfair just give me double homework assignments i dont give a shit but no not detention!" Jason replied wtih anger. "Haha maybe that will teach you a lesson not to sleep in my class, well ill see you in detention class dissmissed." As everyone got up to head out for home Jason was meeted with the eyes of his best freind Reak Denstro. "Well you got yourself into some deep shit Jason now we both are in detention." Reka said while giving him a pat on the back. "Umm...Reka i think you mean me not we i know your kinda slow today but please try to get it right" Jason replied while giving her a smurk and chuckling. "Haha very funny smart one no whatch this." "Hey Mr.Micky you fat ass if your teaching skills were as good as your pants size they would still suck balls!" Reka screamed while pointing to him. "Ms.Dentra," "Yes lard butt?" "I'll see you in detention with Mr.Stanton," Mr.Micky said while walking out and looking at his butt.
 
Hmmm.. not bad. Lol @ "lard butt" :D.

I'm trying to identify myself... if I'm even in there :D.

Keep at it, Jacob. I think it has potential. Funny plot and lines :D
 
thanks its gonan take me forever to get it all in here cause i have written soo much and more tommorow lol
 
Yay! I am Brandon Dansho! Lucky me.Anyways great story Jacob looking forward to more.
 
Chris,you arent in this and you dont have to be.Also sorry I couldnt be on AIM Jacob.
 
Oh, ok, NVM then :D.

Anywho, continue the story as soon as you can :). This one seems good, except make sure you make paragraphs

Like this, when there's someone new talking or when there's a new subject :)
 
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