Writing My Sinnoh Fan-fic

PokeNibble

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WARNING: I HAVE FINISHED THIS FIC ALREADY, SO THESE FIRST TWO EPISODES (SUB-CHAPTERS IN MY STORY) AREN'T THAT GREAT, BUT TRUST ME, THEY GET BETTER AS THE STORY MOVES ON.

Episode 1- I choose you!
"GARCHOMP! Use giga impact!" A woman yelled out. The dragon jumped into the air, and zoomed down at the opponent.
"Pikachu, use iron tail!" Another person said, as the garchomp hit pikachu, the iron tail hit the dragon on the head. And they both fell down.....
"Nick, it's time to wake up! You are going to go get your first pokemon!" Nick's little sister ran into his room and jumped on him until he finally got up.
"Ok ok, tell mom I’ll be down a second, ok?" the little girl nodded, and ran down the stairs. Nick stood up, went into his bathroom, showered quickly, ran to his closet, and got dressed. Nick is a 14 year old boy who lives in twinleaf town, sinnoh. He was supposed to get a pokemon at 10, but he decided to wait a little longer, now he was ready. He ran down the stairs, but tripped, and caught himself before he hit the ground. His little sister looked down at him, holding a plate of eggs and bacon.
"Mom made a special breakfast because you’re leaving today." Nick looked up, and took the plate, and seconds later, gave the plate back to his sister. Her name by the way is Gigi. When Nick was ready, he hugged little Gigi and yelled goodbye to his mom, and ran out the door. He didn't have a bike, so he had to run on his own. When he reached sandgem town, he looked up at the sign, it read. "
"Professor Rowan, pokemon evolution expert." The door opened and tall man of about 60 walked out, and looked down at Nick.
"Hello, are you here for your first pokemon?" Rowan looked at Nick curiously, Nick nodded, and then Rowan leads him inside. "There are 3 pokemon you can choose from, the grass type, turtwig, the fire type chimchar, and the water type Piplup. Which one do you choose?" Nick stared at all 3 for a while; Rowan nearly fell asleep when he made his decision.
"I choose the pokemon turtwig!" Nick finally said, then Rowan gave him the pokeball, a pokedex, and some spare pokeballs. Nick ran out as quickly as he could, Rowan smiling, then sat down and ate a ding-dong.
When Nick opened the door the light was so blinding he couldn't see the person in front of him, he tripped, and fell on the ground.....


Episode 2- Off on the journey: Route 202
Nick looked up into the blinding light and saw a guy with a pikachu on his shoulder, his head hurt for some reason.
"Top of the morning' Buddy!" The guy said, holding out his hand, Nick grabbed it and was helped up, now he could see the guy better because he was accustomed to the light.
"Err, hello, I’m Nick, and you’re...?" Nick was confused, he didn't know how to greet this mysterious person.
"Names Ian, lemme guess, your name is Nick, right?" Ian said.
"Yeah, but how do you know my name?" Nick was still puzzled.
"Professor Rowan tells me about all new trainers, and he said that you were holding off getting your first pokemon, am i right?"
"Yeah, I didn't really wanna head out at 10, so i waited a little while." nick said, chuckling. He looked at the pikachu, who was smiling back at him.
"So who is your pokemon starter?" Ian said, looking at the pokeball in Nick's hand.
"Turtwig."
"I see, good choice, I have pikachu as mine." Ian said, petting pikachu on the back of the neck. Pikachu giggled.
"I'm headed off for Oreburgh city and the first gym!" Nick said.
"Cool, say, could i come with you? It'd be great to travel around the world, plus I could train with you!" Ian said, pikachu squealing behind him.
"Yeah, sure, let's go!" Nick said.
"Sure, c'mon pikachu!" Ian said, pikachu jumping off of his shoulder. "So....where first?" Ian said as they were leaving sandgem town.
"I think the next town is Jubilife city." Nick said, then a thought came to him. "What other pokemon do you have with you?"
"Other than pikachu, I have a Gible, my older sister have me the egg of she found with her Garchomp. It's pretty strong."
"Cool. Hey! What's that pokemon?" Nick said, looking at a black and gray bird in the trees.
"That's a starly, you wanna catch it?" Ian said.
"Sure! Go turtwig! Use tackle on the starly!" Turtwig jumped and tackled the starly in the tree, starly fell, "Go pokeball!" Nick yelled out, the pokeball swallowed up the starly, and when it stopped clicking, he caught it.
"YAY! I caught a starly!" Nick yelled.


hope you enjoyed.
 
-_- - Really hard to say. This really needs a long way to go. You really need to improve a lot. I hope your future chapters improve.
 
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