Okay, this is kinda like naruto, but then it has some very obvious differences. (names for one) I'd love any comments!
One important thing to know, is that until chapter 4 the characters are all separated, but they'll come together. Also, at the end there's a mystery ninja, who is the villain.
Chapter One-Part One-
Leo
"Are you gonna challenge me this time?" Leo Said.
"Of course!" The Jonin said, who was training to become an anbu black-ops.
"Alright then, Chackra Trinko Jutsu!" As Leo said this, 12 Black sheep appeared next to him. They seemed like jello, not completely solid, but they were standing up. They were not standing in any particular formation, but that changed when the Jonin leaped towards Leo, and Leo shouted, "Trinko Tornado!" The sheep immediatley began run run extremely fast around leo, causing a large, extremely tall tornado. The Jonin was 5 yards away.
They Began to run so fast, they gave to ooze a sort of red energy, which spread up, making the tornado look very impressive, and dangerous.
"I've seen this before, Earth-Fire Style! Fire rock jutsu!" At this, Many rocks were lifted out of the ground and it appeared as if it were melting. They were thrust at the tornado, and immediatley went through. It was impossible to see into the tornado, but the Jonin was sure it had hit Leo, as the tornado had begun to slow down. "Hah, got'cha!"
"Really?" The Jonin heard from behind him, when he turned around with his fist cuffed, he saw Leo stading with one of his sheep. When he turned around, he realized where he had gone wrong. The Red energy, which was hiding Leo From view, had gone up so high that it was able to flip in the air, forming An Upside Down "U". Leo had taken one of his sheep with him, to make it seem like it was slowing down, when ideed it wasnt. Before he could decide what to do next, his Fire-Rock Jutsu flew out of the Tornado without any noise, knocking the Jonin out.
"Nice try, Let's Get you to A hospital though." Leo said, as the tornado dissapeared, leaving only peaceful sheep, grazing in the grass. He picked up the Jonin, and placed him on A Sheep, which turned into a bird, and flew away. "Get back soon!" Leo yelled to the black-Jello likebird, as it transportec the ninja to a hospital, and leo MAde his remaining sheep disapear, to conserve chakra.
Chapter One-Part Two-
Sally-(Great ninja name, huh.
)
"I don't wanna gradpa, I'm tired of this." The 9 year old girl rebelled, rubbing her pointer finger.
"You must practice sally, and you shall become A Jonin soon enough.
"Really? How much longer do you think it will be?"
"2 more weeks with this much calculation, by your mother calculations, and they're almost always right. Now, If you defeat me one on one, you may be dismissed for the day. Can you do it?"
Sally, who had been lying, knowing her grandfather would say this if she acted like she wouldnt try otherwise, said, "I guess."
"Alright, I'm not holding back! Neither should you sally, use you best bullet attacks, i'll be fine."
"Are you sure? Alright..."
Sally held up her thumb and pointer finger up, pointing then at her grandpa like a gun. her Grandpa jumped up and bounced off the ceiling, towards sally. She swiftly followed his move ments with her pointer finger, and held small spheres of chakra began to explode from her finger. Her grandfather put a shield in front of him, blocking the first few bullets, but sally had seen the shield coming. She shot bullets which werent completely blocked by the shield. The shield block her grandpa from the actual bullets, but onece they hit the shield, blades made of the same chakra came out of the other side of the shield, cutting the grandpa. She then shot another round , while he was falling, they explode on him into a jelly substance, which bound him to the ground. "I won!" She said cheerfully. She pointed her finger at her grandpas wounds. She shot a bullet at him, and her grandpa was completely suprised. He thought she had shot it by accident, bbut it was completely on pourpose. The bullet hit, but it did not hurt. It healed his wounds and the jelly substance disapeared.
"I had no idea you could do that sally, good job!"
"Thank you grandpa!" She said walking out of the room. She closed the door, and before she even looked, she shot a silent chakra bullet into the air, which hit a bird and killed it. she caught it before it hit the ground, and then threw it down, and stepped on it as she ran past.
Chapter One-Part Three-
Daisy
"Hee-Hee!" Daisy laughed. She was amused by a flower, which was growing sideways and was wrapped around the tree. It was dying. "You silly thing, you could be so big by now!" She looked at the tree. "Yeah! that tree has plenty of water!" She look at the plant, which had one measly red flower. "Here..." She said, as it began to wrap around the tree more, and continue up the tree. It became much thicker and grew large red flowers every couple of feet. "There! All better!" Daisy walked away, through the trees which all look like the like that. AS she walked away, grass grew out of the ground. It was very green, and was very even, as if someone had just cut it. She waslked out of the forest, and into her house, which was completely covered in Beautiful vines. Far off, a fire began to grow. As Daisy saw it, she became very suprised, and ran out of the house towards the fire, still with a smile on her face.
Chapter One-Part Four- (short)
Ucello
"Hmm..." Ucello said to another bird as he flew through the cold mid-night sky. The gem on his fore head began to glow, and many different kinds of birds surrounded him. "I believe I'm being folowed." He said to the birds. "Please investigate. It'll be on the ground." He looked down, and half of the birds flew off. "It's to risky to go down at this time of night, we should stay here. He said to the rest of the birds. Let them investigate.
Chapter One-Part Five-(also short)
?
"Leave them...I want that one immediately."
Want to read the rest?! Click here!
One important thing to know, is that until chapter 4 the characters are all separated, but they'll come together. Also, at the end there's a mystery ninja, who is the villain.
Chapter One-Part One-
Leo
"Are you gonna challenge me this time?" Leo Said.
"Of course!" The Jonin said, who was training to become an anbu black-ops.
"Alright then, Chackra Trinko Jutsu!" As Leo said this, 12 Black sheep appeared next to him. They seemed like jello, not completely solid, but they were standing up. They were not standing in any particular formation, but that changed when the Jonin leaped towards Leo, and Leo shouted, "Trinko Tornado!" The sheep immediatley began run run extremely fast around leo, causing a large, extremely tall tornado. The Jonin was 5 yards away.
They Began to run so fast, they gave to ooze a sort of red energy, which spread up, making the tornado look very impressive, and dangerous.
"I've seen this before, Earth-Fire Style! Fire rock jutsu!" At this, Many rocks were lifted out of the ground and it appeared as if it were melting. They were thrust at the tornado, and immediatley went through. It was impossible to see into the tornado, but the Jonin was sure it had hit Leo, as the tornado had begun to slow down. "Hah, got'cha!"
"Really?" The Jonin heard from behind him, when he turned around with his fist cuffed, he saw Leo stading with one of his sheep. When he turned around, he realized where he had gone wrong. The Red energy, which was hiding Leo From view, had gone up so high that it was able to flip in the air, forming An Upside Down "U". Leo had taken one of his sheep with him, to make it seem like it was slowing down, when ideed it wasnt. Before he could decide what to do next, his Fire-Rock Jutsu flew out of the Tornado without any noise, knocking the Jonin out.
"Nice try, Let's Get you to A hospital though." Leo said, as the tornado dissapeared, leaving only peaceful sheep, grazing in the grass. He picked up the Jonin, and placed him on A Sheep, which turned into a bird, and flew away. "Get back soon!" Leo yelled to the black-Jello likebird, as it transportec the ninja to a hospital, and leo MAde his remaining sheep disapear, to conserve chakra.
Chapter One-Part Two-
Sally-(Great ninja name, huh.
)"I don't wanna gradpa, I'm tired of this." The 9 year old girl rebelled, rubbing her pointer finger.
"You must practice sally, and you shall become A Jonin soon enough.
"Really? How much longer do you think it will be?"
"2 more weeks with this much calculation, by your mother calculations, and they're almost always right. Now, If you defeat me one on one, you may be dismissed for the day. Can you do it?"
Sally, who had been lying, knowing her grandfather would say this if she acted like she wouldnt try otherwise, said, "I guess."
"Alright, I'm not holding back! Neither should you sally, use you best bullet attacks, i'll be fine."
"Are you sure? Alright..."
Sally held up her thumb and pointer finger up, pointing then at her grandpa like a gun. her Grandpa jumped up and bounced off the ceiling, towards sally. She swiftly followed his move ments with her pointer finger, and held small spheres of chakra began to explode from her finger. Her grandfather put a shield in front of him, blocking the first few bullets, but sally had seen the shield coming. She shot bullets which werent completely blocked by the shield. The shield block her grandpa from the actual bullets, but onece they hit the shield, blades made of the same chakra came out of the other side of the shield, cutting the grandpa. She then shot another round , while he was falling, they explode on him into a jelly substance, which bound him to the ground. "I won!" She said cheerfully. She pointed her finger at her grandpas wounds. She shot a bullet at him, and her grandpa was completely suprised. He thought she had shot it by accident, bbut it was completely on pourpose. The bullet hit, but it did not hurt. It healed his wounds and the jelly substance disapeared.
"I had no idea you could do that sally, good job!"
"Thank you grandpa!" She said walking out of the room. She closed the door, and before she even looked, she shot a silent chakra bullet into the air, which hit a bird and killed it. she caught it before it hit the ground, and then threw it down, and stepped on it as she ran past.
Chapter One-Part Three-
Daisy
"Hee-Hee!" Daisy laughed. She was amused by a flower, which was growing sideways and was wrapped around the tree. It was dying. "You silly thing, you could be so big by now!" She looked at the tree. "Yeah! that tree has plenty of water!" She look at the plant, which had one measly red flower. "Here..." She said, as it began to wrap around the tree more, and continue up the tree. It became much thicker and grew large red flowers every couple of feet. "There! All better!" Daisy walked away, through the trees which all look like the like that. AS she walked away, grass grew out of the ground. It was very green, and was very even, as if someone had just cut it. She waslked out of the forest, and into her house, which was completely covered in Beautiful vines. Far off, a fire began to grow. As Daisy saw it, she became very suprised, and ran out of the house towards the fire, still with a smile on her face.
Chapter One-Part Four- (short)
Ucello
"Hmm..." Ucello said to another bird as he flew through the cold mid-night sky. The gem on his fore head began to glow, and many different kinds of birds surrounded him. "I believe I'm being folowed." He said to the birds. "Please investigate. It'll be on the ground." He looked down, and half of the birds flew off. "It's to risky to go down at this time of night, we should stay here. He said to the rest of the birds. Let them investigate.
Chapter One-Part Five-(also short)
?
"Leave them...I want that one immediately."
Want to read the rest?! Click here!
