This is a fanfic that I made quite a while ago and stopped at 13 chapters, but I would like to keep going. I stopped at quite a suspenseful point, so I'd like to keep going. I'll post all the Chapters again and also a link to the old thread. Please comment and well, it is a good fanfic that I hope you'll all love.
Chapters:
Ch. 1: The Teacher's
Ch. 2: The Downfall
Ch. 3: The Tournament of Determination
Ch. 4: Round 1
Ch. 5: Round 2
Ch. 6: Semifinals
Ch. 7: Finals
Ch. 8: Chuunin Exam
Ch. 9: The Chosen One
Ch. 10: Brassel and the Dark Rain
Ch. 11: The Revenge of Arquarine
Ch. 12: Arquarine: The Real Villian
Ch. 13: 12 Pieces of the Millennium Beast
Ch. 14: The War of Good and Evil
Ch. 15: The War of Good and Evil (Part 2)
Ch. 16: Arquarine and the Stone Tablet
Ch. 17: Stone Tablet of the Pharoah
Ch. 18: The Hero's
Ch. 19: Reunion
Ch. 20: 12 Pieces of the Millennium Beast (Part 2)
Ch. 1: The Teacher's!
"Hey guys! I just finished the test! How'd you think you did?" asked Jack. "I'm pretty sure I aced it!" shouted Chris. But Chris wasnt the smart type. He guessed all the questions! "Sure you did...." said Jack in a sarcastic voice. "Hey Chris, can you come here for a sec?" asked Shino. "Ya sure, whatever" said Chris. "Chris.....it seems you got every question on the test wrong. It looks like your gonna get held back!" said Shino. "Say What?" asked Chris. "Unless, you win at least round 1 in the upcoming tournament!" shouted Shino. "Alright! I can fight but I may not be smart!" shouted Chris as he left the academy. "Alright, Jack, you got a perfect score and you will be my pupil" said Shino. "Alright! See ya!" said Jack as he left the academy. "Ok, Nemaru, you are Sakura's pupil! And same with you Bonsly!" said Shino. "Alright!" shouted Bonsly and Nemaru as they ran out of the academy. But some kids had some trouble with the test! "Uhhh...." said Oren Jr. He didnt want to cheat because his dad was right there and he didnt want him to be disappointed. So he used his body switching ability and stole another kid's paper with all the right answers and gave the kid his paper with nothing on it. All Oren Jr. did was change the name at the top of the paper and the perfect score was his! "Done!" shouted Oren Jr. "Hey! What happened to my paper!" shouted a kid. "Alright, who's my teacher?" asked Oren Jr. acting so immature. "Your teacher is.... .Me! Shino Aburame!" said Shino. "Yahoo!" shouted Oren Jr. as he skipped out of the academy and went to play with his friends who finished the test a few hours ago! "Hey Kyle, I got Shino Aburame as my teacher!" shouted Oren Jr. "Well, I got Calvin and so did Katherine" said Kyle in a casual voice. "Hey, where is Katherine anyways?" asked Oren Jr. "She's playing with her new friend Keller. He also got put in Calvin's group. That kid is such a meany! He wanted to start a fight with me today because a pine fell off a pine tree and he wanted someone to take his anger out on. How could anyone like that guy!" shouted Kyle. "I heard that!" shouted Keller. Keller's special power is that by using his Chakra he can hear things extremely far away! "I don't care Keller!" shouted Kyle as he left! "Ehh.... " said Oren Jr. "Hey Chris, wanna battle?" asked Jack. "Nahh! I don't feel like it....maybe later" said Chris. "What? What are you talkin about? You never refuse a battle" said Jack. "I'm just in the mood sorry!" said Chris as he left. "Weird day today!" shouted Jack.
Ch. 2: The Downfall!
"Hey, Sakura! Have you met my youngsters here? Thats Nicolie and Shion. Davis isnt here right now. He has some family business to attend to" said Nelsaur. "Oh, nice to meet you all! So, are you ready for the teacher's tournament today?" asked Sakura. "Ya! I'm all ready!" said Nelsaur in a confident voice. Five Hours Later in the Teacher's Tournament Room! "Hey Kyle! Come here! Where's Kathrine?" asked Oren Jr. "She's hanging out with Keller. That kids such a jerk!" said Kyle. "Hey, Chris! Are you Here?" shouted Jack into the open stadium. "Right here Jack! I'm sitting here with Bonsly and Nemaru!" shouted Chris from up in the stands. "So, you think this will be a good match?" asked Nicolie. "Are you asking me? I'm blind! But I can still sense the teacher's movements! So I'm pretty much hearing the battle. And here comes Sakura!" said Shion. "Hello kids! Are you ready for the Teachers tournament?" asked Sakura. "Ya!" shouted everyone in the stands. "Alright, first round! Me vs. Nelsaur!" shouted Sakura. "I hope you studied Sakura.....because this is not a favorable matchup.... " said Nelsaur with and evil grin on his face! "I'm alright!" shouted Sakura. "Battle....Begin!" shouted the commentator. Sakura jumped up in the air and grabbed Nesaur by the arm but Nelsaur just escaped his way out of the grab and slammed Sakura to the ground! "Now you will feel pain!" shouted Nelsaur. Nelsaur used all his Chakra and made an electric energy ball into his hand and threw it close range to Sakura. Sakura was hit with amazing force and Sakura flew back and was knocked out. At first, they werent even sure if she was alive. But her heart was still pumping! "Alright! I win!" shouted Nelsaur with a more evil grin on his face. "You all shall be destroyed soon enough" said Nelsaur to himself. "Wow, quick match!" shouted Oren Jr.
Ch. 3: The Tournament of Determination!
"Nelsaur goes on to the fianl round! Now its Calvin vs. Shino! This will be a great match! Begin!" shouted the commentator. "Hey, remember the last time we battled? Anyways, it didnt end good for you remember!? Well now you'll be crushed once again!" shouted Calvin. Calvin tried to punch Shino but Shino blocked his punch with his pinky. Then he kicked him on the side and threw him into the wall! Then he threw his bugs at him. The bugs bit him and he fell unconscious. "The winner is Shino! Final Round! Nelsaur vs. Shino! Begin!" shouted the commentator. "You know, I fell like destroying you all right here, right now!" shouted Nelsaur. Nelsaur revealed his true form. He was just a shadow at first but then he appeared as a human form. Except darkness was still shrouding him. "My name is Brassel! All of you, get ready to die!" shouted Brassel as he ran right into Shino with a knee kick. But Shino grabbed him, and stabbed him with a shuriken. "Ahh!!" shouted Brassel. Brassel kicked Shino and took the Shuriken out of his body. Any metal that is in my body which was never before takes away my dark energy. You will never defeat me!" shouted Brassel. He ran up to Shino and stabbed him in the stomach and Shino fell unconscious! "Guys! This is our time to help!" shouted Jack. Jack, Chris, Nemaru, Bonsly, Oren Jr. (Unfortunately), Kyle, Kathrine, Keller, Nicolie, and Shion stepped onto the tourament grounds. "Us kids, will defeat this mad villian!" shouted Jack. "You, you'll be the first to die!" shouted Brassel. Brassel grabbed Jack by his shirt. But what brassel didnt know is that Jack can grow as many arms as he wants that can fit on his body. He made 4 extra arms all with shurikens in the hand and the threw the shurikens into the wall! Then Jack put another shuriken straight into his knee. "Ahh!" shouted Brassel. Brassel flinched. "Now!" shouted Jack. Jack pushed Brassel into the wall where the 4 shurikens were. One shuriken hit his heart, another on the chest. And the 2 others in the stomach. "He's down! Everyone finish him off!" shouted Jack. Kathrine, Kyle, and Oren Jr. have a powerful combination attack together. Then they powered up their Chakra and got ready to use the attack! Shion and Nicolie threw more shurikens at Brassel to weaken him more until they ran out of shurikens. Chris, Nemaru, and Bonsly used paralyze trio. They paralyzed him! And triple the power. He couldnt even breathe! Then Keller ran away like a baby! "Told you he was weak! Now execute attack!" shouted Kyle. They held each others hands andpowered up a strong energy ball in their hand. Then it transformed into a fireball! "Go!" all of them shouted as the energy ball flew and slammed into Brassel! "No! How could puny little kids beat me! This is not the last of me!" shouted Brassel! Brassel escaped his body by leaving it with his spirit. He flew to the sky and disappeared. His body was burned do to the fireball! "We won!" shouted Jack. "Ya!" everyone shouted but Jack because he was so exhausted from the battle and he fell to the ground. Looking up at the sky.....and he fell asleep. "Wake up children!" shouted Sakura. "Ughh!" moaned all of the kids. "Its the Tournament of Determination today! All students must participate. I know you guys are tired from last night and you did a good job but hurry out of beds slowpokes!" shouted Sakura as she left the dorm.
Ch. 4: Round 1!
"Alright, first you guys will be tested.....I have just been told that we will not test you! It will just be a tournament! But 4 little kids here got an excuse because there parents said that they shouldnt be fighting people that are older than them by more than 2 years! But you still have to watch!" shouted Sakura. "Aww man!" shouted Oren Jr., Keller, Kyle, and Kathrine. "Alright....the first round matches are:
Shion vs. Nicolie
Chris vs. Jack
Bonsly vs. Nemaru
"I have just been told that your parents have just approved! Ha!" shouted Sakura. "Aww man!" shouted the kids. "The new first round is...." said Sakura.
Shion vs. Chris
Jack vs. Nemaru
Nicolie vs. Bonsly
Keller vs. Kyle
Oren Jr. vs. Katherine
"First match! Shion vs. Chris! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "Hehehehe, you cant win!" shouted Chris. Shion felt Chris' leap of the ground. Shion quickly moved to the side and tripped Chris. Chris fell on his face. "I'll teach you!" shouted Chris. But before he could get up Shion kicked him into the wall with mighty force! "Will you?" said Shion. "Ahh!" shouted Chris as he disappeared into the wall. He reappeared right behind Shion being silent and punched him in the back! "Ughh!" shouted Shion. But Shion faked the fall. He knew that Chris was there all along. He jumped off of the ground and back punched Chris in the face and threw him up. Chris spun in the air. He fell right back down head first. He didnt die but he got a bad concussion from the fall. "First Match, first Round winner: Shion! Match 2, Round 1: Jack vs. Nemaru! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "Ahh!" shouted Nemaru as he ran up to Jack but Jack just stepped to the side and stuck his Shuriken pretty deep into Nemaru. Nemaru wasnt the strongest around...he was actually weaker than Keller! But he can still put up a pretty good fight! "Ughh!" shouted Nemaru as he took out the Shuriken and almost sliced Jack but Jack moved back in time. Jack then slammed into Nemaru and Nemaru flew back and was finished! "Jack wins the Match 2, First Round! Match 3, First Round: Nicolie vs. Bonsly! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "I'm a tough fighter!" shouted Bonsly. Bonsly was about to punch Nicolie but then he disappeared. Nicolie used his brain waves and made him disappear and stop in mid air. Then he appeared but was still not moving! Nicolie punched Bonsly in the face and he flew back. He got a bloody nose! The blood dripped down into his mouth. When he got the taste of blood in his mouth he got angry and rammed into Nicolie. Nicolie was hit but used his Brain Energy Ball. It wasnt so strong but it was enough to finish off Bonsly! Bonsly flew back as if somebody was carrying him. He fell and lost! "Nicolie is the winner! Match 4, Round 1: Keller vs. Kyle! Begin!" shouted Sakura! "I've always wanted to do this!" shouted Kyle. Kyle's speed was hit greatest tactic! He punched Keller real fast then ran around him really fast and made a wind tornado and trapped Keller inside! Keller flew out of the tornado in tremendous speed and hit the wall and fainted! "Winner is Kyle! Match 5, Round 1: Oren Jr. vs. Kathrine! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "I'm doing this for the right thing Kathrine. don't get me wrong!" shouted Oren Jr. He hit himself on the head in an area where it would make him faint. He did that and lost the match. "Okkk.....Winner is Kathrine! That is the end of the first round! Tomorrow is round 2 kids! Here is the challenge match!
Jack vs. Shion
Nicolie vs. Kathrine
Pass: Kyle
"Ya! I got a pass! I get a free past to the final round yay! O boy! I'm gonna battle the strongest person! No!" shouted Kyle.
Ch. 5: Round 2! (And The Newcomer)
"Wake Up! We have a new kid joining us in the tournament today! He was Nelsaur's student, his name is Davis!" shouted Sakura. "Yo Davis what happened? Where were you?" asked Shion. "My Uncle died in a forest. They didnt find his cause of death either. It was really scary. I was the one who found him!" shouted Davis. "Whoa, that sucks..My Uncle died in the war when I was 2. I never met him" said Shion. "Anyways! Kyle....your free pass is gone! You'll be facing Davis!" shouted Sakura. "Wahh!" shouted Kyle! "Haha!" shouted Oren Jr. and Kathrine. "Alright, everyone come to the tournament area as soon as possible!" shouted Sakura as she left the dorm. "I'm sorry to hear that your Uncle died" said Nicolie. "Its alright.." said Davis. "Alright here are the vs. in the tournament!" shouted Sakura!
Shion vs. Nicolie
Kyle vs. Kathrine
Jack vs. Davis
"Now Jack vs. Shion....begin!" shouted Sakura. Shion used his white Sharingan! He can see a bit now. He knew that Nicolie was a silent runner so he needed to see! "Ahh!" shouted Nicolie from behind Shion. Shion fell back and this time he wasnt faking! "I wont lose to you!" shouted Shion. Nicolie jumped from behind but Shion sensed it with his Sharingan! "Ahh!" shouted Shion. He slid out of Nicolie's way and kicked him in the back. Nicolie fell back. Blood flew out of Nicolie's mouth. Nicolie was not gonna give up here! Nicolie got up and screamed. The blood from Nicolie's eyes flew into Shion's eyes. That ruined his Sharingan. Now he had to listen! Nicolie came from behind Shion but Shion felt the vibration. He tripped Nicolie and grabbed him by his foot! He threw him up in a circular motion. Nicolie landed back down on the ground knocked out! "The winner is Shion! Match 2, Round 2: Kyle vs. Kathrine! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "Kyle and Kathrine punched each other and they flew back. They did the exact same thing 7 times until they ran out of energy. Then they both used Dragon Dance. That attack brings lighting from the sky and hits your opponent. Lighting struck both of them and they both were knocked out! "Its a tie! Both are out of the tournament! Match 3, Round 2: Jack vs. Davis! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "I'm not a beginner so don't go easy on me!" shouted Davis. "You asked for it! I'm going all out!" shouted Jack. He used his super move Jaguar Inferno! His whole body turned into fire. Then he rammed into Davis. Davis flew back but Jack caught him. Davis was burning up. "Now, I'll finish this match! Jaguar Blast!" shouted Jack. A flame like Jaguar came out of Jack's body! Jack threw Davis and made sure he landed on his feet! Then the fire Jaguar jumped on Davis and a giant fire explosion blew up in the stadium. After the smoke disappeared you saw that Davis was lying on the ground, alive, but fainted. "The winner is Jack!" said Sakura. "So, I guess I'll be facing Shion" said Jack. "Thats correct!" shouted Shion as he ran back to the dorm to get a good rest!
Ch. 6: Semifinals
"This is not really the semifinals kids. There are only 2 people left, so this will be a practice battle. Shion vs. Jack! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "Alright, this will just hurt, a lot! Haa!" shouted Shion. He digged his way into the ground and came up and slammed into Jack. "You went get away with that!" shouted Jack. Jack punched Shion in the back an parazlyed him on his thy's and up. Then he grabbed Jack by his feet and pushed him away. Then Shion jumped up and used a super explosion blast and lost the battle. He just wanted to end everything and go rest for tomorrow.
Ch. 7: Finals!
They both stepped up, got into there fighting stances, and attacked! "You wont beat me!" shouted Shion. Shion used White Sharingan and he could see a little.....But Jack could see more with his normal Sharingan! He grabbed Shion by the foot and threw him onto the wall but Shion flipped around and landed on his feet! "Rahh!" shouted Shion as he uppercutted Jack. Jack was hit and flew up high into the air and crashed down! "Hehe, you fight well don't you?" said Jack. Jack then disappeared. Shion used his White Sharingan's special effect! He could see Jack even though he disapppeared, Shion grabbed Jack and Jack flew and was slammed into the wall! Then Shion grabbed out his sword and cut Jack on the knee because Jack dodged his death! "You think you can beat me?" asked Jack. Jack grabbed Shion's sword and threw it at Shion. It cut Shion on the shoulder.... .Shion grabbed his Sword again and Jack took his out too! They were sword fighting like crazy! They were circling each other and keep attacking each other....Then they threw their swords at each other and hit each other in the stomach. They both fell and were losing a ton of blood! ... ... "Where am I?" said Shion in a low voice. It was white everywhere then, it became clear.... .he wasnt blind anymore! His White Sharingan now turned into normal Sharingan! But Shion knew this sight wasnt gonna last for long anymore! "Jack.... " said Shion. "I'm right here man. That was a nice battle...." said Jack. "Where is everyone?" asked Shion. "There in the waiting room!" shouted Jack. Jack was angry, Shion could hear it in his voice. Jack wanted to keep going with the battle, but he knew that there power were equal. Shion got up somehow as if he was fully healed and went to the waiting room.... "Nicolie! Davis! I'm alright!" shouted Shion. "How's Jack?" asked Chris. "Jack's healing, I just talked to him! He's getting a lot better though! But doesnt anyone care about me?" asked Shion. "Nobody likes you!" shouted everyone! Then Shion woke up from his nightmare, he was still blind, but he could feel Jack's breath, Shion knew it woudnt end well.... "Where is everyone? I feel queasy!" said Shion. "It'll be alright" said the doctor. "How's Jack?" asked Shion. "I'm sorry, but it seems to be fatal for him" said the doctor. "Oh..." said Shion as he fell back to deep sleep.
Ch. 8: Chuunin Exam
The doctor came out of the room.....looked at all of us, his face was not excited....we all knew what happened. "I'm sorry, but, Jack, is dead" said the doctor as he left them to take it in. "Its all my fault!" shouted Shion. "No its not! You never knew that was gonna happen!" shouted Nicolie. "Well, this might be a pretty bad time to bring this up, but, the Chuunin Exams are up tomorrow! And all your teachers have put you in! So, the first exam is tomorrow! Go get some sleep, to get your mind off what happened. Jack's team will not be included in this, I'm very sorry to say that. But the Hokage insists that Oren Jr. will do it, he will join Calvin's team!" shouted Sakura. "Yay!" shouted Oren Jr. But Jack's team wasnt happy, they were crying, they were sad.....they couldn't do the chuunin exam even if they were aloud to.... Then.... .the sky turned dark, it started ti rain. They took Jack's body and buried him in a safe place. The place where nobody would check! Chris was extremely sad, his rival, all time rival was dead. They were good friends, but things just didnt go very well. Next Day! "Wake up kids!" shouted Sakura. "Alright, the first part of the chuunin exam, the written exam!" shouted Oren Jr. He was just excited to be in it! "Alright, come with me!" shouted Sakura. They followed her to the room. They were each seated next to someone they didnt know, there were tons of people, different hair, different looks, different strengths. "Wow, lots of people!" shouted Oren Jr. "Whats a pipsqueak like you doing here?" asked one of the older kids. "Rahh!" souted Oren Jr. He threw a punch at the guy. It knocked him out completely! "Thats why!" shouted Oren Jr. "Alright begin!" shouted Sakura. Oren Jr. knew all the questions for some reason.... .this was way to easy for him! He was the first to finish somehow! He ran up to Sakura, gave her the test and ran out happily! "Ahhh!" screamed Oren Jr. from outside.... "What was that?" said one of the kids. "Sakuraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!" shouted Oren Jr. as he ran back in! "Whats wrong?" asked Sakura. "Jack.....body.....gone!" shouted Oren Jr. "If this is a joke..." said Sakura. "No! Its not! Come look!" shouted Oren Jr. "Your right! Stop the Exam! This isnt good, there had to be a reason from someone to steal his body. I can only think of one person, Arquarine!" shouted Sakura!
Ch. 9: The Chosen One!
"Who's Arquarine?" asked everyone. "He's a villain I faced when I was younger, he steals bodies and becomes stronger.....if Jack is stronger than him, he might have taken control of Jack himself!" shouted Sakura. "Oh, so how do we stop him?" asked Oren Jr. "Eh, we....(sniff), have to (sniff), kill him. Thats how we lost, Kakashi!" said Sakura in a low voice! "Oh, I'm sorry, I didnt know!" said Oren Jr. as he left to his dorm. "Who's there?" said Sakura. "Well, well, well, its me! Arquarine! I might be in a kids body, but I'm stronger than ever, and when I find Brassel, you guys are in a load of destruction!" said Arquarine. "Actually, Jack killed Brassel" said Sakura. "But I still sense his spirit. He is still alive!" shouted Arquarine. Arquarine then left the scene in an instant. "Get back here!" shouted Sakura. But she couldnt do anything! "Jack, must be the chosen one! Impossible!" shouted Sakura. All the kids in the class were confused and left to their village! "Where you guys going?" asked Sakura. Sakura knew she couldnt stop Arquarine by herself. "Majestic Wings!" shouted Sakura. Wings of silver grew from her back and she flew. She could sense wherever Arquarine was. She spotted him and landed. But, he had already found Brassel. The end is near! Then a scream came from the forest where Sakura was! "Huh? What was that?" said Shion. "Lets go check it out" said Davis. They ran to the forest, only to find, Sakura, dead! "Sakura! Lets take her to the hospital fast!" shouted Davis. She had a bite mark on her neck.....They ran to the hospital as fast as they could, but it was too late. All her energy as drained and was sent to Arquarine! Arquarine was invincible! Or at least he will be! The news spread, Shino was extremely sad, for he liked Sakura his whole life, though never had guts. "We have to find a way to bring her back!" shouted Shino! "We cant, she's dead! Deal with it!" shouted Keller. "Shut up! don't ever say that!" shouted Shino. "I'm sorry Shino, we ran to the hospital as fast as we could!" said Davis. "I'm not mad at you kids, don't worry!" shouted Shino. Then Arquarine showed up! All I wanted was for you to be sad, then you guys would be vulnerable and never realized that I was draining your power all along!" shouted Arquarine as he snapped his fingers and disappeared. Then Sakura awoke in the hospital! "Where am I? I have to save Jack!" shouted Sakura. She ran out of the hospital and ran to the dorm! "I know how to save Jack!" shouted Sakura.
Ch. 10: Brassel and the Dark Rain!
"How?" asked Shino. The room became silent as a mouse. "We have to defeat Arquarine in someone else's body!" shouted Sakura. "What!? But how will we get him into another body?" asked Shino. "We are about to kill Jack in his body, and I know him, and then stop, he would get out of the body. But since he already fused with Brassel he would turn into a whole different form and Jack's spirit will come back to life, although he was dead before!" shouted Sakura as she was running out of breath! "Thats brilliant!" shouted Shino. "I know where he is too!" shouted Sakura. "Where?" asked Shino. "In the upper right part of the forest!" shouted Sakura. "Lets go!" shouted Shino. They ran out to the forest in search of their hideout but there was nothing in sight! "They have to be here somewhere!" shouted Shino. "Well, if it isnt miss dead! Have you come to die again? Anyways, Brassel is right here in my body, and our power is stronger than ever! don't try me!" shouted Arquarine. "This is it! Dark Fire Manipulation!" shouted Shino. A ton of Shino's appeared. Then they all fired a giant fire attack out of their mouths! "Eat this!" shouted all the Shino's. "I don't have to!" shouted Arquarine! Arquarine flew out of Jack's body and turned into a whole new form! He is now Arquarine Complete! (I'm still going to call him Arquarine in dialog) All the Shino's stopped attacking and Jack stood up, alive! "What happened?" said Jack in a really funny voice. "Lets just say you were dead! Now lets battle this guy before something really bad happens!" shouted Shino. "Something bad already happened! Your little guy Shion is heading here! I'll double myself! And my double will kill Shion off!" shouted Arquarine! "No! I'll go back and battle with Shion! You guys can defeat him! I know it!" shouted Jack. "Take this! Its the sword of honor. My father gave it to me but you deserve it now" said Shino. "Thanks! I'm off!" shouted Jack. Jack ran off in search for Shion. "Lets play, shall we?" said Arquarine. "Take this!" shouted Shino. Shino multiplied into 500 other forms and surrounded Arquarine. Then they all exploded and a giant explosion blew up in the forest! Shino made a shield around Sakura and him. The explosion was not match for Arquarine, though. Arquarine came out completely alive! "I'll get you for this! Ahh!" shouted Arquarine. He punched the shield and it broke! "Its indestructible!" shouted Shino. "That was a very skilled move I have to say!" said Arquarine. "Thanks!" shouted Shino as he punched Arquarine. It was a really light punch and Arquarine didnt even feel it. But Shino didnt want to hurt him, yet. He let his bugs crawl their way into his body. In a few seconds he will explode from the inside. This time, Sakura made a shield because Shino was out of energy. Arquarine exploded from the inside.... .his whole body went into flames. This was his final body, he could not leave it. He would die if he did! "Noo! I cant lose! My second form will kill you all! I'll get my revenge!" shouted Arquarine. He fell to the ground as his whole body melted in the fire. "We have to save Shion and Jack! We don't want him to die again!" shouted Shino. "Shion! Are you alright?" asked Jack. "So, you guys wanna play?" asked Arquarine. "Ahhhh!" shouted Shion and Jack in fear. But they had to let this fear go! "We have to battle together, take away the past, and put in the future! This will be the battle that will lead us to our destiny!" shouted Shion. "Lets do this!" shouted Jack. They both jumped and flew in for a punch at Arquarine.
Ch. 11: The Revenge of Arquarine!
Arquarine grabbed both of their punches! "You puny little punks cant beat me! And Sakura and Shino will die in a few minutes, when I died I gave them a dose of Grudge Serum! That will kill them in an hour but will activate in a few minutes! You guys will have to beat me under 10 min. but thats impossible isnt it?" said Arquarine. "Let go! Sharingan!" shouted Shion. He got away from Arquarine's hold and slammed into him, but Arquarine showed no movement! "Fool!" shouted Arquarine. Arquarine's kick was so fast Shion's Sharingan couldnt read it! Shion was hit and slammed into a tree. "Let go of me!" shouted Jack. Jack didnt slam into him, he just glared at Arquarine. Then Arquarine started to tremble..."Aggh! What are you doing with my power?! Ahh!" shouted Arquarine. Jack was stealing his power and energy through his glare. Arquarine fell on his knees. "Please?! Spare me!? I'm weak! don't kill me!" shouted Arquarine. "A true villian doesnt ask for mercy! And thats why I don't have mercy either!" shouted Jack. He took out his sword and cut Arquarine's head off. "Nice job Jack!" shouted Shion. "Why didnt you help me?" asked Jack. "I just woke up from my unconsciousness when you cut his head off! We have to go find Shino and Sakura though.... .they were probably hit by that disease thing already! We have to find a way to reverse the effect!" shouted Shion. "We cant! Its impossible, thats how Sakura's Sensei died" said Jack. "Oh, the great Kakashi?" said Shion curiously. "Yes" said Jack in a sad voice. "We still have to be with them for their last moments don't you think?" asked Shion. "Ya, lets go and find them" said Jack. But Shino and Sakura found them instead. "Hey guys! You beat him!" shouted Sakura. "Very well done!" shouted Shino. "Guys, you know Arquarine? He did this thing-... "He um.....did this thing but then we scared him ya and killed him totally!" shouted Jack. "What?" asked Shion. "Get over here.....Whisper Whisper Whisper (Lets not tell them, we don't want to ruin it for them" said Jack. "Alright!" said Shion.
Ch. 12: Arquarine: The Real Villain!
"Hey guys, did you miss me?" shouted Arquarine. "Ahh! what are you doing here? We killed you!" shouted Jack. "No, you killed Brassel.... .You want to see my true form? Well here it goes!" shouted Arquarine. Arquarine held a big energy ball in his hand it threw it on the ground and it exploded...He then showed himself in his new form! "How many forms does this creepy guy have?" said Jack. Arquarine grabbed Jack and Shion and he threw them up in the sky and put them in a bubble! "In one hour the bubble will explode and splat!" shouted Arquarine. "Look at you! You only care about yourself! You monster! Ahh!" shouted Sakura. Sakura was hurting inside! From the disease! She rammed Arquarine but all that happened was that she was sent into the bubble in the sky too! "You fools!" shouted Arquarine. "My name is Shino and I'm summoning Gorian the Flame Dragon to defeat evil!" shouted Shino. His command was heard into the sky and a giant flame dragon appeared and smashed the bubble and took Jack, Shion, and Sakura back to safety! "Flame Dragon! Execute! Shino fused with the flaming dragon to create: Shioflair! Darkness was approaching the sky....but Shioflair destroyed all darkness in the air! Including Arquarine! "Ha, I will be back, I always come back! The 12 Pieces will make me rise again with full power!" said Arquarine. "Begone!" shouted Shioflair! Arquarine's body disappeared. Darkness then shrouded Shino. "Run!!" shouted Shino. He teleported them to a safe place....Then there was an explosion in the forest....it must have been Shino. When he summons the beast he dies.....Darkness beat him! "No, Shino!" shouted Sakura. The whole forest was in flames....the found Shino, dead!
Ch. 13: The 12 Pieces of the Millennium Beast!
They all went to Shino's funeral. Everybody had a bad feeling in their stomach. They all went to bed after the day. Nobody was happy nor said a word. The whole academy was shushed. The next day.... "Extra! Extra! Come here, read the newspaper! Extra! Extra!" shouted the mailman and ran away! "What's this? It seems that there is a terrible monster terrorizing the world. Only Arquarine could be the reason for this! Unless...." said Sakura. "What?" shouted everyone. "You all, every single one of you! Must go face, Arquarine!" shouted Sakura. The kids were off, on the boat, the gray skies, and the fire from the far away towns and villages! "So Jack, are you ready? We might die, you know" said Shion in a low voice. "I know, I'm only doing this for my family" said Jack. "Your family?" asked Shion. "They were killed, by him" said Jack. Jack went to his room on the boat. "So, you think you can escape me? Well, think again!" shouted Jack's Evil Spirit! "No, leave me alone! Get away from me! Ahh!" shouted Jack. The spirit slammed him threw all the walls and he went through the final wall and flew into the water. Never to be seen again. Shion went to look for Jack, but his room was empty. Then he saw all the holes in the walls! "Were drowning! The boat is sinking! Get out of the boat as soon as possible! Run!" shouted Shion. Shion jumped into the water. He started to look for Jack under the water! He found him hanging to the boat! "Jack! Can you here me!?" shouted Shion into the cold sea. "I'm right here!" shouted Jack. "No, your not!" shouted his spirit! His spirit grabbed him and threw him to land. He landed in the burning village where Arquarine was, or so they thought! The other people on the sip, sank with the ship! Only a few survived. Oren, Kyle, Chris, and Bonsly! They all grabbed to a floating piece that fell off the ship, and they landed on an island. Shion swam to where Jack was, but it took him a few hours. It was dark and Shion could barely see. Then Shion heard a scream from a nearby burning house. He took a peek inside and he saw Jack being grabbed by a giant darkness monster. It flew away into the sky with Jack. "I have to concentrate!" shouted Shion. His eyes started to glow, energy was shrouded all around his body! Then, he flew!
I will keep going, don't worry. I won't drop out on this one.
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Chapters:
Ch. 1: The Teacher's
Ch. 2: The Downfall
Ch. 3: The Tournament of Determination
Ch. 4: Round 1
Ch. 5: Round 2
Ch. 6: Semifinals
Ch. 7: Finals
Ch. 8: Chuunin Exam
Ch. 9: The Chosen One
Ch. 10: Brassel and the Dark Rain
Ch. 11: The Revenge of Arquarine
Ch. 12: Arquarine: The Real Villian
Ch. 13: 12 Pieces of the Millennium Beast
Ch. 14: The War of Good and Evil
Ch. 15: The War of Good and Evil (Part 2)
Ch. 16: Arquarine and the Stone Tablet
Ch. 17: Stone Tablet of the Pharoah
Ch. 18: The Hero's
Ch. 19: Reunion
Ch. 20: 12 Pieces of the Millennium Beast (Part 2)
Ch. 1: The Teacher's!
"Hey guys! I just finished the test! How'd you think you did?" asked Jack. "I'm pretty sure I aced it!" shouted Chris. But Chris wasnt the smart type. He guessed all the questions! "Sure you did...." said Jack in a sarcastic voice. "Hey Chris, can you come here for a sec?" asked Shino. "Ya sure, whatever" said Chris. "Chris.....it seems you got every question on the test wrong. It looks like your gonna get held back!" said Shino. "Say What?" asked Chris. "Unless, you win at least round 1 in the upcoming tournament!" shouted Shino. "Alright! I can fight but I may not be smart!" shouted Chris as he left the academy. "Alright, Jack, you got a perfect score and you will be my pupil" said Shino. "Alright! See ya!" said Jack as he left the academy. "Ok, Nemaru, you are Sakura's pupil! And same with you Bonsly!" said Shino. "Alright!" shouted Bonsly and Nemaru as they ran out of the academy. But some kids had some trouble with the test! "Uhhh...." said Oren Jr. He didnt want to cheat because his dad was right there and he didnt want him to be disappointed. So he used his body switching ability and stole another kid's paper with all the right answers and gave the kid his paper with nothing on it. All Oren Jr. did was change the name at the top of the paper and the perfect score was his! "Done!" shouted Oren Jr. "Hey! What happened to my paper!" shouted a kid. "Alright, who's my teacher?" asked Oren Jr. acting so immature. "Your teacher is.... .Me! Shino Aburame!" said Shino. "Yahoo!" shouted Oren Jr. as he skipped out of the academy and went to play with his friends who finished the test a few hours ago! "Hey Kyle, I got Shino Aburame as my teacher!" shouted Oren Jr. "Well, I got Calvin and so did Katherine" said Kyle in a casual voice. "Hey, where is Katherine anyways?" asked Oren Jr. "She's playing with her new friend Keller. He also got put in Calvin's group. That kid is such a meany! He wanted to start a fight with me today because a pine fell off a pine tree and he wanted someone to take his anger out on. How could anyone like that guy!" shouted Kyle. "I heard that!" shouted Keller. Keller's special power is that by using his Chakra he can hear things extremely far away! "I don't care Keller!" shouted Kyle as he left! "Ehh.... " said Oren Jr. "Hey Chris, wanna battle?" asked Jack. "Nahh! I don't feel like it....maybe later" said Chris. "What? What are you talkin about? You never refuse a battle" said Jack. "I'm just in the mood sorry!" said Chris as he left. "Weird day today!" shouted Jack.
Ch. 2: The Downfall!
"Hey, Sakura! Have you met my youngsters here? Thats Nicolie and Shion. Davis isnt here right now. He has some family business to attend to" said Nelsaur. "Oh, nice to meet you all! So, are you ready for the teacher's tournament today?" asked Sakura. "Ya! I'm all ready!" said Nelsaur in a confident voice. Five Hours Later in the Teacher's Tournament Room! "Hey Kyle! Come here! Where's Kathrine?" asked Oren Jr. "She's hanging out with Keller. That kids such a jerk!" said Kyle. "Hey, Chris! Are you Here?" shouted Jack into the open stadium. "Right here Jack! I'm sitting here with Bonsly and Nemaru!" shouted Chris from up in the stands. "So, you think this will be a good match?" asked Nicolie. "Are you asking me? I'm blind! But I can still sense the teacher's movements! So I'm pretty much hearing the battle. And here comes Sakura!" said Shion. "Hello kids! Are you ready for the Teachers tournament?" asked Sakura. "Ya!" shouted everyone in the stands. "Alright, first round! Me vs. Nelsaur!" shouted Sakura. "I hope you studied Sakura.....because this is not a favorable matchup.... " said Nelsaur with and evil grin on his face! "I'm alright!" shouted Sakura. "Battle....Begin!" shouted the commentator. Sakura jumped up in the air and grabbed Nesaur by the arm but Nelsaur just escaped his way out of the grab and slammed Sakura to the ground! "Now you will feel pain!" shouted Nelsaur. Nelsaur used all his Chakra and made an electric energy ball into his hand and threw it close range to Sakura. Sakura was hit with amazing force and Sakura flew back and was knocked out. At first, they werent even sure if she was alive. But her heart was still pumping! "Alright! I win!" shouted Nelsaur with a more evil grin on his face. "You all shall be destroyed soon enough" said Nelsaur to himself. "Wow, quick match!" shouted Oren Jr.
Ch. 3: The Tournament of Determination!
"Nelsaur goes on to the fianl round! Now its Calvin vs. Shino! This will be a great match! Begin!" shouted the commentator. "Hey, remember the last time we battled? Anyways, it didnt end good for you remember!? Well now you'll be crushed once again!" shouted Calvin. Calvin tried to punch Shino but Shino blocked his punch with his pinky. Then he kicked him on the side and threw him into the wall! Then he threw his bugs at him. The bugs bit him and he fell unconscious. "The winner is Shino! Final Round! Nelsaur vs. Shino! Begin!" shouted the commentator. "You know, I fell like destroying you all right here, right now!" shouted Nelsaur. Nelsaur revealed his true form. He was just a shadow at first but then he appeared as a human form. Except darkness was still shrouding him. "My name is Brassel! All of you, get ready to die!" shouted Brassel as he ran right into Shino with a knee kick. But Shino grabbed him, and stabbed him with a shuriken. "Ahh!!" shouted Brassel. Brassel kicked Shino and took the Shuriken out of his body. Any metal that is in my body which was never before takes away my dark energy. You will never defeat me!" shouted Brassel. He ran up to Shino and stabbed him in the stomach and Shino fell unconscious! "Guys! This is our time to help!" shouted Jack. Jack, Chris, Nemaru, Bonsly, Oren Jr. (Unfortunately), Kyle, Kathrine, Keller, Nicolie, and Shion stepped onto the tourament grounds. "Us kids, will defeat this mad villian!" shouted Jack. "You, you'll be the first to die!" shouted Brassel. Brassel grabbed Jack by his shirt. But what brassel didnt know is that Jack can grow as many arms as he wants that can fit on his body. He made 4 extra arms all with shurikens in the hand and the threw the shurikens into the wall! Then Jack put another shuriken straight into his knee. "Ahh!" shouted Brassel. Brassel flinched. "Now!" shouted Jack. Jack pushed Brassel into the wall where the 4 shurikens were. One shuriken hit his heart, another on the chest. And the 2 others in the stomach. "He's down! Everyone finish him off!" shouted Jack. Kathrine, Kyle, and Oren Jr. have a powerful combination attack together. Then they powered up their Chakra and got ready to use the attack! Shion and Nicolie threw more shurikens at Brassel to weaken him more until they ran out of shurikens. Chris, Nemaru, and Bonsly used paralyze trio. They paralyzed him! And triple the power. He couldnt even breathe! Then Keller ran away like a baby! "Told you he was weak! Now execute attack!" shouted Kyle. They held each others hands andpowered up a strong energy ball in their hand. Then it transformed into a fireball! "Go!" all of them shouted as the energy ball flew and slammed into Brassel! "No! How could puny little kids beat me! This is not the last of me!" shouted Brassel! Brassel escaped his body by leaving it with his spirit. He flew to the sky and disappeared. His body was burned do to the fireball! "We won!" shouted Jack. "Ya!" everyone shouted but Jack because he was so exhausted from the battle and he fell to the ground. Looking up at the sky.....and he fell asleep. "Wake up children!" shouted Sakura. "Ughh!" moaned all of the kids. "Its the Tournament of Determination today! All students must participate. I know you guys are tired from last night and you did a good job but hurry out of beds slowpokes!" shouted Sakura as she left the dorm.
Ch. 4: Round 1!
"Alright, first you guys will be tested.....I have just been told that we will not test you! It will just be a tournament! But 4 little kids here got an excuse because there parents said that they shouldnt be fighting people that are older than them by more than 2 years! But you still have to watch!" shouted Sakura. "Aww man!" shouted Oren Jr., Keller, Kyle, and Kathrine. "Alright....the first round matches are:
Shion vs. Nicolie
Chris vs. Jack
Bonsly vs. Nemaru
"I have just been told that your parents have just approved! Ha!" shouted Sakura. "Aww man!" shouted the kids. "The new first round is...." said Sakura.
Shion vs. Chris
Jack vs. Nemaru
Nicolie vs. Bonsly
Keller vs. Kyle
Oren Jr. vs. Katherine
"First match! Shion vs. Chris! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "Hehehehe, you cant win!" shouted Chris. Shion felt Chris' leap of the ground. Shion quickly moved to the side and tripped Chris. Chris fell on his face. "I'll teach you!" shouted Chris. But before he could get up Shion kicked him into the wall with mighty force! "Will you?" said Shion. "Ahh!" shouted Chris as he disappeared into the wall. He reappeared right behind Shion being silent and punched him in the back! "Ughh!" shouted Shion. But Shion faked the fall. He knew that Chris was there all along. He jumped off of the ground and back punched Chris in the face and threw him up. Chris spun in the air. He fell right back down head first. He didnt die but he got a bad concussion from the fall. "First Match, first Round winner: Shion! Match 2, Round 1: Jack vs. Nemaru! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "Ahh!" shouted Nemaru as he ran up to Jack but Jack just stepped to the side and stuck his Shuriken pretty deep into Nemaru. Nemaru wasnt the strongest around...he was actually weaker than Keller! But he can still put up a pretty good fight! "Ughh!" shouted Nemaru as he took out the Shuriken and almost sliced Jack but Jack moved back in time. Jack then slammed into Nemaru and Nemaru flew back and was finished! "Jack wins the Match 2, First Round! Match 3, First Round: Nicolie vs. Bonsly! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "I'm a tough fighter!" shouted Bonsly. Bonsly was about to punch Nicolie but then he disappeared. Nicolie used his brain waves and made him disappear and stop in mid air. Then he appeared but was still not moving! Nicolie punched Bonsly in the face and he flew back. He got a bloody nose! The blood dripped down into his mouth. When he got the taste of blood in his mouth he got angry and rammed into Nicolie. Nicolie was hit but used his Brain Energy Ball. It wasnt so strong but it was enough to finish off Bonsly! Bonsly flew back as if somebody was carrying him. He fell and lost! "Nicolie is the winner! Match 4, Round 1: Keller vs. Kyle! Begin!" shouted Sakura! "I've always wanted to do this!" shouted Kyle. Kyle's speed was hit greatest tactic! He punched Keller real fast then ran around him really fast and made a wind tornado and trapped Keller inside! Keller flew out of the tornado in tremendous speed and hit the wall and fainted! "Winner is Kyle! Match 5, Round 1: Oren Jr. vs. Kathrine! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "I'm doing this for the right thing Kathrine. don't get me wrong!" shouted Oren Jr. He hit himself on the head in an area where it would make him faint. He did that and lost the match. "Okkk.....Winner is Kathrine! That is the end of the first round! Tomorrow is round 2 kids! Here is the challenge match!
Jack vs. Shion
Nicolie vs. Kathrine
Pass: Kyle
"Ya! I got a pass! I get a free past to the final round yay! O boy! I'm gonna battle the strongest person! No!" shouted Kyle.
Ch. 5: Round 2! (And The Newcomer)
"Wake Up! We have a new kid joining us in the tournament today! He was Nelsaur's student, his name is Davis!" shouted Sakura. "Yo Davis what happened? Where were you?" asked Shion. "My Uncle died in a forest. They didnt find his cause of death either. It was really scary. I was the one who found him!" shouted Davis. "Whoa, that sucks..My Uncle died in the war when I was 2. I never met him" said Shion. "Anyways! Kyle....your free pass is gone! You'll be facing Davis!" shouted Sakura. "Wahh!" shouted Kyle! "Haha!" shouted Oren Jr. and Kathrine. "Alright, everyone come to the tournament area as soon as possible!" shouted Sakura as she left the dorm. "I'm sorry to hear that your Uncle died" said Nicolie. "Its alright.." said Davis. "Alright here are the vs. in the tournament!" shouted Sakura!
Shion vs. Nicolie
Kyle vs. Kathrine
Jack vs. Davis
"Now Jack vs. Shion....begin!" shouted Sakura. Shion used his white Sharingan! He can see a bit now. He knew that Nicolie was a silent runner so he needed to see! "Ahh!" shouted Nicolie from behind Shion. Shion fell back and this time he wasnt faking! "I wont lose to you!" shouted Shion. Nicolie jumped from behind but Shion sensed it with his Sharingan! "Ahh!" shouted Shion. He slid out of Nicolie's way and kicked him in the back. Nicolie fell back. Blood flew out of Nicolie's mouth. Nicolie was not gonna give up here! Nicolie got up and screamed. The blood from Nicolie's eyes flew into Shion's eyes. That ruined his Sharingan. Now he had to listen! Nicolie came from behind Shion but Shion felt the vibration. He tripped Nicolie and grabbed him by his foot! He threw him up in a circular motion. Nicolie landed back down on the ground knocked out! "The winner is Shion! Match 2, Round 2: Kyle vs. Kathrine! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "Kyle and Kathrine punched each other and they flew back. They did the exact same thing 7 times until they ran out of energy. Then they both used Dragon Dance. That attack brings lighting from the sky and hits your opponent. Lighting struck both of them and they both were knocked out! "Its a tie! Both are out of the tournament! Match 3, Round 2: Jack vs. Davis! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "I'm not a beginner so don't go easy on me!" shouted Davis. "You asked for it! I'm going all out!" shouted Jack. He used his super move Jaguar Inferno! His whole body turned into fire. Then he rammed into Davis. Davis flew back but Jack caught him. Davis was burning up. "Now, I'll finish this match! Jaguar Blast!" shouted Jack. A flame like Jaguar came out of Jack's body! Jack threw Davis and made sure he landed on his feet! Then the fire Jaguar jumped on Davis and a giant fire explosion blew up in the stadium. After the smoke disappeared you saw that Davis was lying on the ground, alive, but fainted. "The winner is Jack!" said Sakura. "So, I guess I'll be facing Shion" said Jack. "Thats correct!" shouted Shion as he ran back to the dorm to get a good rest!
Ch. 6: Semifinals
"This is not really the semifinals kids. There are only 2 people left, so this will be a practice battle. Shion vs. Jack! Begin!" shouted Sakura. "Alright, this will just hurt, a lot! Haa!" shouted Shion. He digged his way into the ground and came up and slammed into Jack. "You went get away with that!" shouted Jack. Jack punched Shion in the back an parazlyed him on his thy's and up. Then he grabbed Jack by his feet and pushed him away. Then Shion jumped up and used a super explosion blast and lost the battle. He just wanted to end everything and go rest for tomorrow.
Ch. 7: Finals!
They both stepped up, got into there fighting stances, and attacked! "You wont beat me!" shouted Shion. Shion used White Sharingan and he could see a little.....But Jack could see more with his normal Sharingan! He grabbed Shion by the foot and threw him onto the wall but Shion flipped around and landed on his feet! "Rahh!" shouted Shion as he uppercutted Jack. Jack was hit and flew up high into the air and crashed down! "Hehe, you fight well don't you?" said Jack. Jack then disappeared. Shion used his White Sharingan's special effect! He could see Jack even though he disapppeared, Shion grabbed Jack and Jack flew and was slammed into the wall! Then Shion grabbed out his sword and cut Jack on the knee because Jack dodged his death! "You think you can beat me?" asked Jack. Jack grabbed Shion's sword and threw it at Shion. It cut Shion on the shoulder.... .Shion grabbed his Sword again and Jack took his out too! They were sword fighting like crazy! They were circling each other and keep attacking each other....Then they threw their swords at each other and hit each other in the stomach. They both fell and were losing a ton of blood! ... ... "Where am I?" said Shion in a low voice. It was white everywhere then, it became clear.... .he wasnt blind anymore! His White Sharingan now turned into normal Sharingan! But Shion knew this sight wasnt gonna last for long anymore! "Jack.... " said Shion. "I'm right here man. That was a nice battle...." said Jack. "Where is everyone?" asked Shion. "There in the waiting room!" shouted Jack. Jack was angry, Shion could hear it in his voice. Jack wanted to keep going with the battle, but he knew that there power were equal. Shion got up somehow as if he was fully healed and went to the waiting room.... "Nicolie! Davis! I'm alright!" shouted Shion. "How's Jack?" asked Chris. "Jack's healing, I just talked to him! He's getting a lot better though! But doesnt anyone care about me?" asked Shion. "Nobody likes you!" shouted everyone! Then Shion woke up from his nightmare, he was still blind, but he could feel Jack's breath, Shion knew it woudnt end well.... "Where is everyone? I feel queasy!" said Shion. "It'll be alright" said the doctor. "How's Jack?" asked Shion. "I'm sorry, but it seems to be fatal for him" said the doctor. "Oh..." said Shion as he fell back to deep sleep.
Ch. 8: Chuunin Exam
The doctor came out of the room.....looked at all of us, his face was not excited....we all knew what happened. "I'm sorry, but, Jack, is dead" said the doctor as he left them to take it in. "Its all my fault!" shouted Shion. "No its not! You never knew that was gonna happen!" shouted Nicolie. "Well, this might be a pretty bad time to bring this up, but, the Chuunin Exams are up tomorrow! And all your teachers have put you in! So, the first exam is tomorrow! Go get some sleep, to get your mind off what happened. Jack's team will not be included in this, I'm very sorry to say that. But the Hokage insists that Oren Jr. will do it, he will join Calvin's team!" shouted Sakura. "Yay!" shouted Oren Jr. But Jack's team wasnt happy, they were crying, they were sad.....they couldn't do the chuunin exam even if they were aloud to.... Then.... .the sky turned dark, it started ti rain. They took Jack's body and buried him in a safe place. The place where nobody would check! Chris was extremely sad, his rival, all time rival was dead. They were good friends, but things just didnt go very well. Next Day! "Wake up kids!" shouted Sakura. "Alright, the first part of the chuunin exam, the written exam!" shouted Oren Jr. He was just excited to be in it! "Alright, come with me!" shouted Sakura. They followed her to the room. They were each seated next to someone they didnt know, there were tons of people, different hair, different looks, different strengths. "Wow, lots of people!" shouted Oren Jr. "Whats a pipsqueak like you doing here?" asked one of the older kids. "Rahh!" souted Oren Jr. He threw a punch at the guy. It knocked him out completely! "Thats why!" shouted Oren Jr. "Alright begin!" shouted Sakura. Oren Jr. knew all the questions for some reason.... .this was way to easy for him! He was the first to finish somehow! He ran up to Sakura, gave her the test and ran out happily! "Ahhh!" screamed Oren Jr. from outside.... "What was that?" said one of the kids. "Sakuraaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!" shouted Oren Jr. as he ran back in! "Whats wrong?" asked Sakura. "Jack.....body.....gone!" shouted Oren Jr. "If this is a joke..." said Sakura. "No! Its not! Come look!" shouted Oren Jr. "Your right! Stop the Exam! This isnt good, there had to be a reason from someone to steal his body. I can only think of one person, Arquarine!" shouted Sakura!
Ch. 9: The Chosen One!
"Who's Arquarine?" asked everyone. "He's a villain I faced when I was younger, he steals bodies and becomes stronger.....if Jack is stronger than him, he might have taken control of Jack himself!" shouted Sakura. "Oh, so how do we stop him?" asked Oren Jr. "Eh, we....(sniff), have to (sniff), kill him. Thats how we lost, Kakashi!" said Sakura in a low voice! "Oh, I'm sorry, I didnt know!" said Oren Jr. as he left to his dorm. "Who's there?" said Sakura. "Well, well, well, its me! Arquarine! I might be in a kids body, but I'm stronger than ever, and when I find Brassel, you guys are in a load of destruction!" said Arquarine. "Actually, Jack killed Brassel" said Sakura. "But I still sense his spirit. He is still alive!" shouted Arquarine. Arquarine then left the scene in an instant. "Get back here!" shouted Sakura. But she couldnt do anything! "Jack, must be the chosen one! Impossible!" shouted Sakura. All the kids in the class were confused and left to their village! "Where you guys going?" asked Sakura. Sakura knew she couldnt stop Arquarine by herself. "Majestic Wings!" shouted Sakura. Wings of silver grew from her back and she flew. She could sense wherever Arquarine was. She spotted him and landed. But, he had already found Brassel. The end is near! Then a scream came from the forest where Sakura was! "Huh? What was that?" said Shion. "Lets go check it out" said Davis. They ran to the forest, only to find, Sakura, dead! "Sakura! Lets take her to the hospital fast!" shouted Davis. She had a bite mark on her neck.....They ran to the hospital as fast as they could, but it was too late. All her energy as drained and was sent to Arquarine! Arquarine was invincible! Or at least he will be! The news spread, Shino was extremely sad, for he liked Sakura his whole life, though never had guts. "We have to find a way to bring her back!" shouted Shino! "We cant, she's dead! Deal with it!" shouted Keller. "Shut up! don't ever say that!" shouted Shino. "I'm sorry Shino, we ran to the hospital as fast as we could!" said Davis. "I'm not mad at you kids, don't worry!" shouted Shino. Then Arquarine showed up! All I wanted was for you to be sad, then you guys would be vulnerable and never realized that I was draining your power all along!" shouted Arquarine as he snapped his fingers and disappeared. Then Sakura awoke in the hospital! "Where am I? I have to save Jack!" shouted Sakura. She ran out of the hospital and ran to the dorm! "I know how to save Jack!" shouted Sakura.
Ch. 10: Brassel and the Dark Rain!
"How?" asked Shino. The room became silent as a mouse. "We have to defeat Arquarine in someone else's body!" shouted Sakura. "What!? But how will we get him into another body?" asked Shino. "We are about to kill Jack in his body, and I know him, and then stop, he would get out of the body. But since he already fused with Brassel he would turn into a whole different form and Jack's spirit will come back to life, although he was dead before!" shouted Sakura as she was running out of breath! "Thats brilliant!" shouted Shino. "I know where he is too!" shouted Sakura. "Where?" asked Shino. "In the upper right part of the forest!" shouted Sakura. "Lets go!" shouted Shino. They ran out to the forest in search of their hideout but there was nothing in sight! "They have to be here somewhere!" shouted Shino. "Well, if it isnt miss dead! Have you come to die again? Anyways, Brassel is right here in my body, and our power is stronger than ever! don't try me!" shouted Arquarine. "This is it! Dark Fire Manipulation!" shouted Shino. A ton of Shino's appeared. Then they all fired a giant fire attack out of their mouths! "Eat this!" shouted all the Shino's. "I don't have to!" shouted Arquarine! Arquarine flew out of Jack's body and turned into a whole new form! He is now Arquarine Complete! (I'm still going to call him Arquarine in dialog) All the Shino's stopped attacking and Jack stood up, alive! "What happened?" said Jack in a really funny voice. "Lets just say you were dead! Now lets battle this guy before something really bad happens!" shouted Shino. "Something bad already happened! Your little guy Shion is heading here! I'll double myself! And my double will kill Shion off!" shouted Arquarine! "No! I'll go back and battle with Shion! You guys can defeat him! I know it!" shouted Jack. "Take this! Its the sword of honor. My father gave it to me but you deserve it now" said Shino. "Thanks! I'm off!" shouted Jack. Jack ran off in search for Shion. "Lets play, shall we?" said Arquarine. "Take this!" shouted Shino. Shino multiplied into 500 other forms and surrounded Arquarine. Then they all exploded and a giant explosion blew up in the forest! Shino made a shield around Sakura and him. The explosion was not match for Arquarine, though. Arquarine came out completely alive! "I'll get you for this! Ahh!" shouted Arquarine. He punched the shield and it broke! "Its indestructible!" shouted Shino. "That was a very skilled move I have to say!" said Arquarine. "Thanks!" shouted Shino as he punched Arquarine. It was a really light punch and Arquarine didnt even feel it. But Shino didnt want to hurt him, yet. He let his bugs crawl their way into his body. In a few seconds he will explode from the inside. This time, Sakura made a shield because Shino was out of energy. Arquarine exploded from the inside.... .his whole body went into flames. This was his final body, he could not leave it. He would die if he did! "Noo! I cant lose! My second form will kill you all! I'll get my revenge!" shouted Arquarine. He fell to the ground as his whole body melted in the fire. "We have to save Shion and Jack! We don't want him to die again!" shouted Shino. "Shion! Are you alright?" asked Jack. "So, you guys wanna play?" asked Arquarine. "Ahhhh!" shouted Shion and Jack in fear. But they had to let this fear go! "We have to battle together, take away the past, and put in the future! This will be the battle that will lead us to our destiny!" shouted Shion. "Lets do this!" shouted Jack. They both jumped and flew in for a punch at Arquarine.
Ch. 11: The Revenge of Arquarine!
Arquarine grabbed both of their punches! "You puny little punks cant beat me! And Sakura and Shino will die in a few minutes, when I died I gave them a dose of Grudge Serum! That will kill them in an hour but will activate in a few minutes! You guys will have to beat me under 10 min. but thats impossible isnt it?" said Arquarine. "Let go! Sharingan!" shouted Shion. He got away from Arquarine's hold and slammed into him, but Arquarine showed no movement! "Fool!" shouted Arquarine. Arquarine's kick was so fast Shion's Sharingan couldnt read it! Shion was hit and slammed into a tree. "Let go of me!" shouted Jack. Jack didnt slam into him, he just glared at Arquarine. Then Arquarine started to tremble..."Aggh! What are you doing with my power?! Ahh!" shouted Arquarine. Jack was stealing his power and energy through his glare. Arquarine fell on his knees. "Please?! Spare me!? I'm weak! don't kill me!" shouted Arquarine. "A true villian doesnt ask for mercy! And thats why I don't have mercy either!" shouted Jack. He took out his sword and cut Arquarine's head off. "Nice job Jack!" shouted Shion. "Why didnt you help me?" asked Jack. "I just woke up from my unconsciousness when you cut his head off! We have to go find Shino and Sakura though.... .they were probably hit by that disease thing already! We have to find a way to reverse the effect!" shouted Shion. "We cant! Its impossible, thats how Sakura's Sensei died" said Jack. "Oh, the great Kakashi?" said Shion curiously. "Yes" said Jack in a sad voice. "We still have to be with them for their last moments don't you think?" asked Shion. "Ya, lets go and find them" said Jack. But Shino and Sakura found them instead. "Hey guys! You beat him!" shouted Sakura. "Very well done!" shouted Shino. "Guys, you know Arquarine? He did this thing-... "He um.....did this thing but then we scared him ya and killed him totally!" shouted Jack. "What?" asked Shion. "Get over here.....Whisper Whisper Whisper (Lets not tell them, we don't want to ruin it for them" said Jack. "Alright!" said Shion.
Ch. 12: Arquarine: The Real Villain!
"Hey guys, did you miss me?" shouted Arquarine. "Ahh! what are you doing here? We killed you!" shouted Jack. "No, you killed Brassel.... .You want to see my true form? Well here it goes!" shouted Arquarine. Arquarine held a big energy ball in his hand it threw it on the ground and it exploded...He then showed himself in his new form! "How many forms does this creepy guy have?" said Jack. Arquarine grabbed Jack and Shion and he threw them up in the sky and put them in a bubble! "In one hour the bubble will explode and splat!" shouted Arquarine. "Look at you! You only care about yourself! You monster! Ahh!" shouted Sakura. Sakura was hurting inside! From the disease! She rammed Arquarine but all that happened was that she was sent into the bubble in the sky too! "You fools!" shouted Arquarine. "My name is Shino and I'm summoning Gorian the Flame Dragon to defeat evil!" shouted Shino. His command was heard into the sky and a giant flame dragon appeared and smashed the bubble and took Jack, Shion, and Sakura back to safety! "Flame Dragon! Execute! Shino fused with the flaming dragon to create: Shioflair! Darkness was approaching the sky....but Shioflair destroyed all darkness in the air! Including Arquarine! "Ha, I will be back, I always come back! The 12 Pieces will make me rise again with full power!" said Arquarine. "Begone!" shouted Shioflair! Arquarine's body disappeared. Darkness then shrouded Shino. "Run!!" shouted Shino. He teleported them to a safe place....Then there was an explosion in the forest....it must have been Shino. When he summons the beast he dies.....Darkness beat him! "No, Shino!" shouted Sakura. The whole forest was in flames....the found Shino, dead!
Ch. 13: The 12 Pieces of the Millennium Beast!
They all went to Shino's funeral. Everybody had a bad feeling in their stomach. They all went to bed after the day. Nobody was happy nor said a word. The whole academy was shushed. The next day.... "Extra! Extra! Come here, read the newspaper! Extra! Extra!" shouted the mailman and ran away! "What's this? It seems that there is a terrible monster terrorizing the world. Only Arquarine could be the reason for this! Unless...." said Sakura. "What?" shouted everyone. "You all, every single one of you! Must go face, Arquarine!" shouted Sakura. The kids were off, on the boat, the gray skies, and the fire from the far away towns and villages! "So Jack, are you ready? We might die, you know" said Shion in a low voice. "I know, I'm only doing this for my family" said Jack. "Your family?" asked Shion. "They were killed, by him" said Jack. Jack went to his room on the boat. "So, you think you can escape me? Well, think again!" shouted Jack's Evil Spirit! "No, leave me alone! Get away from me! Ahh!" shouted Jack. The spirit slammed him threw all the walls and he went through the final wall and flew into the water. Never to be seen again. Shion went to look for Jack, but his room was empty. Then he saw all the holes in the walls! "Were drowning! The boat is sinking! Get out of the boat as soon as possible! Run!" shouted Shion. Shion jumped into the water. He started to look for Jack under the water! He found him hanging to the boat! "Jack! Can you here me!?" shouted Shion into the cold sea. "I'm right here!" shouted Jack. "No, your not!" shouted his spirit! His spirit grabbed him and threw him to land. He landed in the burning village where Arquarine was, or so they thought! The other people on the sip, sank with the ship! Only a few survived. Oren, Kyle, Chris, and Bonsly! They all grabbed to a floating piece that fell off the ship, and they landed on an island. Shion swam to where Jack was, but it took him a few hours. It was dark and Shion could barely see. Then Shion heard a scream from a nearby burning house. He took a peek inside and he saw Jack being grabbed by a giant darkness monster. It flew away into the sky with Jack. "I have to concentrate!" shouted Shion. His eyes started to glow, energy was shrouded all around his body! Then, he flew!
I will keep going, don't worry. I won't drop out on this one.
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