Nasty Steve
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Best lolz ever!
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Lol, that was funny. ^^ Entertaining, funny, imaginative, well written. ^^ Great similes and use of expressions and ideas. You may wanna increase the length, though. 
It was really short. ^^'
But it was great. xD And I like how you wrote it in present tense. ^^ Not many stories are written like that. I found no mistakes in the way of grammatical or spelling errors. ^^ Great work. ;P
~Flareon. {R}
It was really short. ^^'But it was great. xD And I like how you wrote it in present tense. ^^ Not many stories are written like that.
I found no mistakes in the way of grammatical or spelling errors. ^^ Great work. ;P~Flareon. {R}
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