Writing Nigel's first ever poetry ever.

[Nigel]

Hey Pokebeachers. It's Nigel (believe it or not) taking a break from the Competitive Collective section of Pokebeach for a day. Recently, I have just found how fun it is to write poetry, which I have never done before. I am going to post some of my poems right here so you can see them and tell me how I can improve and what I do good.

I haven't named any of this poetry yet, so I'll update this once I think of a good name.

The stagnant wood;
An emerald canopy covering.
Newly developed
From the glacial, shrewd fangs of frost.

That once light autumn breeze,
delivered a crisp, zesty essence through the wood.
Those sanguine, spry leaves,
were all that mattered at the time.

This thick, autumn breeze,
delivers a dull, defeated aroma through the wood.
These dry, monotonous blades,
do not matter at this time.

As the sapling spreads its mitts
through the topiary's kits,
We know that it will matter very soon.

Thanks guys! :3

 

[Nigel]

I have a new piece of poetry for you guys!

That once light autumn breeze,
delivered a crisp, zesty essence through the wood.
Those sanguine, spry leaves,
were all that mattered at the time.

This thick, autumn breeze,
delivers a dull, defeated aroma through the wood.
These dry, monotonous blades,
do not matter at this time.

As the sapling spreads its mitts
through the topiary's kits,
We know that it will matter very soon.

With this new piece, I have updated my first post to include this. Also, I have deleted my second piece of poetry as I feel it is not worthy of being on this thread.

 

[Aoki]

Hey there Nigel! First off, I loved the descriptions of the 2nd poem, as I was reading it, it really made me feel that the season is autumn! Keep it up and I look forward to seeing more from you.