I think you're missing some heavy draw support in both night march decks. A staple to night march is the ability to be setup to do enough damage to OHKO in 1 turn. The problem I see with the DL you provided is you really only have 5 cards that will draw you more than 1 card (1x Shaymin, 4x Scyamore, 1x Giovonni). That doesnt seem like a lot to me, and I haven't tested your DL so I can't say for sure. This DL might be the perfect combination, I dont know. I'm just saying from initial looks, it doesnt look like enough. Also, why no unown's for the vespiquen DL? Those two seem to go together like lamb and tunafish. You get an extra card to draw and the added damage for having another pokemon in the discard pile. Anyway, I'm not picking apart your DL as much as asking how you came to the conclusion of the card combinations that you submitted as I'm interested in how these played.