Writing Paremon: Darkness awaits

Delta

Selling colourful Pokemon to Celadon Game Corner
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Most of you may remember I wrote a fic a while ago so now I am continuing it.

Prologue

Liam was awoken by the hooting Trescs a bird type that didn't care for anyone else, not even it's young. Liam walked over to the window rubbing his eyes and dragging his num leg along the cold midnight brown floorboard. He rested his head on his hands as his elbows lifted him from the white window-sill. He looked at the Trescs and thought of his big day tomorrow of receiving his first Paremon from Professor.Bark. He was very famous for his Pokemon research. No-one believes him but he claims to of laid out the blueprint for Professor Oak for the pokedex, but oak stole the plans and took all the credit for himself.
Liam crawled back into his bed and soon fell asleep.
His Velect alarm clock made a loud noise, enough even to wake a Snorlax up.
Liam looked at the clock.
"ELEVEN O'CLOCK?", Liam shouted out in surprise
Liam fell out of bed and ran to his wardrobe grabbing a stylish red jacket, a black shirt and blue jeans followed by a pair of white trainers.
As he rushed his clothes on and pounced downstairs.

His mother shrieked as Liam took a piece of toast from her plate and ran out of the door.
The bright summers day was very warm sun as bright as it can be.
Liam put the piece of toast into his mouth while putting on his dark red jacket. Panting he finished the toast and running while rubbing the crumbs of of his cheek. He stopped for a second while a man with a fat torso came out of the poke-mart carrying a package and sweating.
"Are you ok with that sir?", Liam asked
"Yeah I am fine, this thing has to go to Professor Bark for an experiment.", the man replied
"I can take this if you would like, I was just heading there"
The man thanked Liam and Liam took the package while running of to the lab.
Dodging all people in the crowded day was tiring especially with kids running around.
Finally Liam made it to the lab. Tired, he rested his head on the door before entering.
 
Well I only saw the mistake in the quote use. You should try look at the Advise for Future Authors Thread sometime. Anyway it is good so far.
 
Chapter 1
Getting the first​

Liam entered the lab and walked forwards still sweating just that little it to annoy him. The scientists looked at him and stared as he walked across the middle of the room. They didn't get much visitors which was surprising as they did provide the potions and working on the ultra potion now. Liam got o a scientist at the back of the room. He put the parcel down on the table to the side which held three adjacent pokeballs.
"Bark?", Liam asked
"Yeeeeeeeeeeessssss?", Professor Bark responded with his back towards Liam
"You called me yesterday saying that I needed to come round here"
"OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH yes!"
The professor span round on is chair and put on his glasses. The professor was very crazy but a heck of a scientist, he is very determined and dominant.
"Hmm?", The professor questioned as he looked to his right.
"Ah my parcel, you brought it for meeeeee?"
"Y-y-yeah!?", Liam smiled confusingly
The professor ripped it open like a child getting a present wrapped up.
"My custom ingredients have arrived!", The professor grinned.
"For what exactly?", Liam pondered
"Didn't you here I need ingredients from around the world to make my new potion and mass produce it, birch has beaten me every time at it, with him and his stupid wondering around"
Liam asked what he was there for and the professor responded with
"Ah yes, come,come"
Liam walked over to the table and was offered a choice between three pokeballs. The professor said to pick one, so he did.
Before Liam chose the professor told Liam
"Liam...this partner is very important to you, it will probably be with you for the rest of your life"
Liam bit his lip and nodded. A few seconds passed before he chose the one in the middle.

"Go ahead", The professor said
"huh!?", Liam stumbled
"Give him a rest outside of his pokeball"
Liam looked down and smiled, he threw the pokeball up into the air.
A bright light shone from the pokeball and then a red laser like beam shot out to the ground, white figure appeared a pointy figure like a spike only around it and appeared an electric type called.
Voltcreep
"Wow", Liam gasped
"The starters are the Pokemon I found, they were hard to find but I found the before I retired, Electric, ground and water, all weak against each other all effective against each other."

End of chapter 1
....what? You can't stick with grass,fire and water all the time
 
Chapter 2
Battling the first part 1​

"Hmmmm, interesting"
"What?", Liam questioned
"It seems to be taking a liking to you", The professor smiled
"Huh!? wh- AAAhhh!", Liam shouted while looking down
The Voltcreep was hugging it's leg, Liam started to shake his leg slowly to get it off until he sighed and put it back into the pokeball which he then put onto
his belt.
"Thanks professor Bark", Liam grinned
"Liam, I want you to do something", The professor suddenly went serious
He stood up and walked to a shelf with 5 pokeballs and a weird red case
He walked back and fell back into his chair, slumping.

"Liam take these and I want you to do something, there are 5 evil organizations in the Kraken region , all spaced out between the five islands of Kraken. These guys are masters of Pokemon even hold there own against the 5 gym leaders who I am sure you have heard of. Any way once you have earned all the 5 badges report to me and I will ell you what I want you to do. As a little briefing, I will tell you what I want to do. Head to each organization and destroy the generation towers that force Pokemon to evolve and they contain rare Pokemon."
Liam frowned and then said
"Yeah I will"
Liam walked out of the lab and noticed that the sun was still shining.
As he walked on wards twp biked rode past him one red and one blue, on them two people, two girls to be exact. They stepped on the brakes and turned around.The one on the blue bike had straight black hair a Grey jacket and blue jeans followed by black trainers and a white shirt, she was about 9-19 years old.
The other on the Red bike was around 14-16 and was wearing a yellow jumper followed up to breast height, blue jeans followed by white trainers.
"LIAM?!?", The girl on the blue bike shouted while getting off
"Oh hey jess",Liam sighed
"Well what cutie do we have hear?!", The girl on the red bike shouted
"Well angelica this is Liam, my brother", Jess explained
"He looks like you got yourself a good brother", Angelica smiled
Jess blushed and said
"HEY you have a pokemon!?"
 
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