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Negative Zero

Negative Zero

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You probably know my fics usually die and I'm sorry. I plan to re post them again sometime around.

Prologue

It was a stormy night I was going up to bed.
"Stupid Evil Step-Mom." I said. as I want on ahead to bed.
"Davis!" A voice cried. I turned around, but no one was there.
"It can't be Andrew!" I cried. "Davis!" Another voice cried.
"Shadow? Now I'm dreaming." I said to myself. I mean
Andrew and Shadow disappeared a year ago, It can't be them.
Then I walked to my small really small bed and drifted of
to sleep.

~ End of Prologue ~
Chapter 1

I woke up in a meadow. I was surprised! I mean a meadow was the last thing I wanted to wake up from.

"Ok what the heck is this a fantasy?" I asked myself.

Something felt strange really strange. I felt as If I was walking on 4 legs.

"Ok this is a fantasy." I concluded.

Then it felt like I had a tail. A brown tail.

"Ok this is getting strange." I said to myself.

I soon found a river and ran towards it. Wen I did I saw myself as a brown, tailed Eevee!!!

"Ok this must be a nightmare." I said.
"No it is not." A voice started.
"OL who's there?" I asked.
"I'm nothing but a voice." The voice answered.
"That must be the worst reply I ever heard." I concluded.
"It might be the worst and it will be the last you'll ever hear from me." The voice said.
"What really?" I asked.

The voice didn't reply.

"Ok I guess he's serious." I said.

~ End of Chapter ~
 
Is this a new one or is this one that has already been posted a while ago?
 
lol, you don't know? Oh well, first chapter was good and so was prologue. I don't remember this one so it might be new...i don't know....it is good though, keep up the good work.
 
Chapter 2

"Ok this must be a fantasy." I said.
"I can't be a Pokemon!" I shouted.

A Torchic then walked bu me and stopped to take a look at me.

"Are you talking to yourself?" The Torchic asked.
"Says who." I replied.
"Oh just answer my question!" The Torchic shouted.
"Why should I?" I asked.
"Why what do you mean but why?" Torchic asked.
"It's none of your business if I'm talking to myself or not, and I don't reaclal you being my mom." I replied.
"How Rude!" The Torchic shouted.
"Like I Care." I said back.
"Well if can you answer this question?" Torchic asked.
"Depends." I replied.
"What's your name?" Torchic asked.
"The same ges for you." I replied.
"Fine."
"My name is Davis." I said.
"Well my name is Blaze." Torchic responded.

~End of Chapter~
 
lol, funny chapter. Keep up the good work and I'll be waiting for Ch. 3!
 
Sorry I'll be studying for exams for awhile. and I won't be back till after Christmas well until the day after I celebrate it.
 
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