Writing Poems by Limitless

[Limitless]

The Pain of Truth

The pain of truth,
The pain of knowing the truth was always there staring at you blankly in the face,
Never wanting to accept the inevitable truth, but always thinking, thinking,
Thinking in the back of your mind, what you had hoped deemed untrue,
Thinking that she stood for something that every other girl did not,
When alas, she was the same,
The same, as sinister and uncaring of the other heart in her possession from her own,
The same girl who had stolen his heart, had stolen his only other true possession,
The only other true possession he had coveted, was faith,
The faith that she loved him for who he was and not some paper or toy he flaunted,
While being encumbered in this loss, he was also free,
Free from the burden he was for so long attached to,
For the poison that he had once feared, had now set him free.

 

[Plato]

RE: Gray November

Wow, this is so amazing.

I can kinda relate to it too.

 

[Limitless]

I've updated one of my other poems into this thread.

On another note, I'll now just turn this thread into my own personal poem thread. Therefore I won't have to make a new thread every poem I write.

 

[PokeChamp]

I didn't know Nobember was a month...

Awesome poetry, though! You are an excellent poet, the words flow when you write! ^^

 

[Limitless]

I didn't know Nobember was a month...

Awesome poetry, though! You are an excellent poet, the words flow when you write! ^^

Heh, thanks for catching that.

 

[SixNumbers]

I'm not a huge fan of emo poetry, but good. ;D

 

[juunkmilk]

I'm not a huge fan of emo poetry, but good. ;D

GOOD BURN. the words are pretty nice, like poetry or sumfin

 

[dmaster]

I'm not a huge fan of emo poetry, but good. ;D

Don't post in threads that haven't had replies in them for two weeks or more.

LL, you can reopen this if you want.

*Locked*

dmaster out.

 

[Limitless]

I'll re-open it. While SixNumber's post was fairly stereotypical (especially since I'm not even close to emo), at least he kind of contributed, I guess. I should probably write more of these, heh. Thanks though, dmaster.

*Unlocked*

 

[SixNumbers]

And just to add to what I said. I didn't mean it as a burn...Some people take "emo" as a compliment. :| But if I'm wrong, I'm wrong, sorry.

I also said it was good.