Writing Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Distortion World

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Moonlight Lugia

Auther's Notes:
This was originaly a Role Play that a few of my friends and I are still currently doing. I just decided to make it a Pokémon Fan Fiction.
The characters in this story rightfully belong to the people who created them and I give full credit to them for their characters.
Poke'mon is (C) to Game Freak and Creatures Inc.


Characters Are:

Roe- A female Sneasel about the level of 33 who just likes to relax and lay around alot. She has a strange ability to see the poke'mon who have passed away. Very frisky and energetic. She is a little cold hearted, likes to be in dark places, she’s very fast, and likes to sneak up on others. She’s good at climbing trees and jumping in higher places.

Caedo (Pronounced: Say-e-dough)- A male Weavle at level 41, who's never grown up with his parents. He's learned to survive the hard way and loves to travel around the world. He often avoides two species of Pokémon: Pichu and Giratina. He loves to pull pranks on others, emotional deep down but tends not to show it. Appears to be an optimistic Pokémon and loves to insult others for his own humour.
Unable to swim/refuses to go into any lake/sea/swimming area.

Hisako- A female Umbreon at level 40 who lived in snow point city with her mate, Toshiro a male Glacion, but left because of the harsh weather occuring. She traveled into the caves and avventually started to live there. Her apperence is alittle diffrent, she is a jet black umbreon with ice rings and Dark blue eyes. She's very light hearted, and will protect anyone she loves. She's very calm, but when made angry, she can behave like a child. Her best friend is Toshiro, a glaceon who lived in Snow Point.

Sky- A Male Grovyle at level 36 who lived in a quiet town with his friends, untill a group of savage Pok'emon came to his town they burnt the place to the ground. When the group left, Sky emerged from the rubble to find his best friend lying there dying. Before his friend died, he gave Sky the red scarf he wears, & asked Sky to make sure this unfair, never happens to anyone. Sky trained himself to the limit every day & wears the scarf all the time for inispiration & to rember his fallen friend.

Hissar (Hissy for short)- A Shiny female Lucario at level 26 and as a Riolu, She had dreams of Exploring and Discovering new places. Even if she is not on a Exploration/Rescue Team, She discovered all alone Abandoned places and such. She is sometimes Timid when meeting much bigger Pokemon, often fleeing from them.
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Prolauge

The T.V was on and it had some sort of an emergency brodcast on. It seemed urgent and seriuse.

Many Pokémon are disappearing. Most eye witnesses say they were last seen looking into a mirror or some other reflective object and they suddenly disappeared.
Pokémon Rescue Teams have been searching countless times to find the other missing Pokémon. The Gods Dialga and Palkia have been fighting over power. They say this may have to do with the disappearing of Pokémon. Others say it may be something else that they can’t see.
Some had said that they have seen a strange huge figure in their mirrors and it looked like a monster. The Rescue Team Officers say that this is all just some sort of prank.
Others say that the other Legendary Pokémon are doing this, possibly out of anger of Dialga and Palkia or to protect them from their rage against each other.


That is what the T.V. said and the Poke'mon in the background looked worried and confused.

There have been rumors of a Pokémon, a Pokémon that has extraordinary powers of a parallel universe of our world. It dwells within it and watches over us all…
 
Zyflair's Three Quick Things You Might Want To Think About
Quick tip #1: Avoid using character descriptions. It really destroys the fun in getting to know our characters.

Quick tip #2: Pay attention to spelling; if you aren't a good speller, then use a spell check system, as bad is it is. Your first line of the prologue (the first two sentences), already has two spelling errors ("brodcast" needs to be "broadcast" and "seriuse" hardly looks like "serious").

Quick tip #3: If you want to say Pokémon, press and hold the "Alt" button, type "130" on the num pad (make sure to have num lock on), and then let go of the Alt button. You'll have the "é" made.
 
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