Writing Pokémon War (My first Pokéfic!)

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This is my first fic! The chapter names are at the bottom of the post but contain SPOILERS!!! Links will be made to each chapter.

Some of these may seem jumbled up but they will link up!

Prologue


It was sunny up in PokéHeavan (Where the legendaries live!), but down in the land of Pokémon an army was building. The long line of recruits included many Azurills, Magbys, Elekids and Smoochums but no Azumarrils, Magmortars, Electivires or Jynxes.

Back in PokéHeavan an Exploud came in to Arceus' temple.
"Arceus," It started to shout with its usually loud voice.
"Hang on a minute, go to Ho-Oh's volcano on the other side of PokéHeavan and then tell me," Arceus instructed calmly.
After following its orders, Exploud started again.
"Arceus," It started again, quiter but still loud. "There is an army forming down on Pokéland! They're rebelling at us because Darkrai's stopping them from evolving!" he finished.
"Arceus continued in his calm voice "We will quell their rebellion and then I will deal with Darkrai," Arceus said, still in his calm voice. "Form the Army. I must think of a plan."

To be continued in chapter 1!!!

Chapter List (LAST REMINDER OF SPOILERS!)

1. Babies’ Rebellion
2. A Traitor!
3. Machamp’s Appearance
4. Mew’s Strategy
5. Gaining the Upper Hand
6. Breaking Through
7. Machamp’s Appearance
8. Regi’s Attack
9. Mewtwo’s Defeat
10. Machamp’s Defeat
11. Battle at Route 119
12. Battle Over Kanto
13. Battle Over Johto
14. Battle Over Hoenn
15. Battle Over Sinnoh
16. Campaign Against Arceus
17. Evil’s Defeat
18. Battle Over the Four Kingdoms
19. Evil’s Win
20. Arceus’ Defeat
21. Arceus is Rescued!
22. Battle of the Ocean
23. Red, Blue and Yellow
24. Gold, Silver and Crystal
25. Ruby, Sapphire and Emerald
26. Diamond, Pearl and Platinum
27. Civil War!
28. Arceus’ Plan
29. Arceus is Routed!
30. Arceus is Captured!
31. Arceus Defects!
32. Arceus is Defeated!
33. Who’s Taking Over?
34. Lunar Battle
35. Cresselia’s Rule
36. Carrying out Arceus’ plan!
37. Aftermath

Please Comment!
 
That Prologue is extremely short, too short. And the chapter names are very unoriginal(Not all of them, just some) and repetitive.
 
~Magma King~ said:
That Prologue is extremely short, too short. And the chapter names are very unoriginal(Not all of them, just some) and repetitive.

No, a prologue can be as long as you want. If you have ever looked in some books the prologue are usually a half/two pages.
 
That's only like, 6 lines though. And sure, if it was a short, dynamic one, it'd be fine. But it isn't: It's boring and uneventful :S
 
It leads up to something. And the next chapter should be up by Sunday instead.
 
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