Writing Pokebeach: And then there was one. The one.

Fridge

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DUM DUM DUM!!!! OMG! NO WAI!

Yes way. The fic you have all been waiting for is here... or a sneak preview of it anyway.

This is a section of the Prologue to my new fic. It is based on 'And then there were none' By Agatha Cristie, but it is mostly very different, and it is pokebeach style :O.

All characters are refered to by their online names, so for example PMJ would be called PMJ, and Bacon would be called bacon. If someone was called sghai;gh;agh; and were in my fic, they would be called sghai;gh;agh;.

Basically, the fic is divided into three parts, each with a number of chapters. Before each part begins, there will be a peice of text in italics, a very important part of the story. There will also be a Haiku (type of poem) before each part. You will see the relevence of this at the end. I am telling you this because otherwise random n00bs will spam me saying: But fridge, why is there a random poem!!!! OMG1.

Anyways, I suppose you want to get onto the fic. Since I want to be really horrible, I'm just posting a sneak preview. Later will be the whole of the prolouge, and chapter one.

Pokebeach: And then there was one – The one.

Part 1: Darkness.

~*Prologue*~​

There was Darkness,
It waited undetected,
Quietly waiting.


The Dark Sovereign was waiting, quietly counting the seconds to go. Not many, he thought to himself. Ten. Nine.

Nothing would go wrong this time. It was perfectly planned. There would be no survivors. There would be no witnesses. Nothing would stand in the way of The Darkness.

The Dark sovereign finished his countdown. ‘One,’ he said to himself, and melodramatically pushed a red button. His men were in place. They would get the signal. The plan had begun.

There wouldn't be anyone to muck up this time. He had taken no chances. He smiled, evilly, the evil smile of an insane psychopath. He guffawed loudly, howling with laughter. He stroked a cat, as if he was a criminal mastermind, and pressed the black button next to the red. The second signal. There was only one more to come.

He pushed to final button, guffawing loudly and evilly, shrieking with howls of laughter, louder and louder until the signal came back onto his panel of buttons. A flash of red, black and then white. His men were ready.

All of them would die.


The darkness closed in on Pokebeach.
 
Pretty cool. Although that looks like a prologue in itself. What more could you add to make it more dramatic and prologuey? :S
 
^ Wait and see :O

The rest of the prologue will be up in a couple of hours, followed by chapter one.
 
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