Writing PokeBeach: Cold-blooded ~Chappie 3 is now up!!!!~

[Sleepy]

My first 'Beach' fanfic! Read the prolouge and if ya like, read the chapters! And if you really like, coment!

Chapter 1: Squad 6
Chapter 2: Laid-Back Day
Chapter 3: Mission to Squad 7

Prologue

How long have I been stuck here? I think it's been like a year and a few months, I've stopped counting. All I know is ever since I hit that register button, I have been trapped in this world called PokeBeach. It was amazing the first few months; all the mods incredibly nice and all the members helpful. I quickly made friends and found a place to live. Everything ran smoothly. Man, a lot has changed since then.
- - - - -
Gunshots rang through the streets as members ran in all directions. Screams made my head throb as I looked around for someone, anyone I knew. I started to panic. I didn't know any of these members! More gunshots and a few of the members fell down to the ground, dead or as some called it, banned. I stared in horror at the dead members.
Gunshots.
More members fell. I ran up the street, hoping to get away from this chaos. I felt like flailing my arms and screaming. Hey, I only came here when I was eleven, show some pity. Fire shot up in front of me, making me stop dead in my tracks.
Gunshots.
Not many members were left on the street. Crimson blood covered everything, making my stomach twist.
Gunshots.
Pain stabbed my sided. I coughed up blood in pain and my hands grabbed where I was hit. Blood seeped through my fingers. My legs caved in and I fell to the ground. I looked up, my vision a little blurry. Through the smoke of the fire, I could make out the mod that was attacking.
Zyflair!
Why Zyflair?! Zyflair was one of my close friends until he suddenly got modded. I thought he wouldn't change, but something made the mods go...Ahh...crazy. They've been banning members left and right in cold blood. It was the same with Zyflair. I couldn't reach down to my weapon, I couldn't run; all I could do was stare in horror. No screams made my head throb now. No gunshots echoed through the streets. All was silent as Zyflair pointed his gun at me, a wicked smile etched across his face. I closed my eyes, waiting for the pain. It never came.

PM me if you wanna be in the story!

 

[Daren]

RE: PokeBeach: A Cold-blooded Tale

Sweet story! You've got me really wanting to read the next chapter Keep it up!

 

[Sleepy]

RE: PokeBeach: A Cold-blooded Tale

Chapter 1: Squad 6

"Is she awake yet?"
"Dunno, how's her wound?"
"It's stopped bleeding."
"Hmm..."

Voices, I hear voices. I thought I got killed, why do I hear voices? My side hurts and my head is throbbing, but I can't remember anything. Only Zyflair pointing his gun at me... I flinched from this thought.

I slowly opened my eyes and colors swirled in my head to form shapes. This just made my head hurt more and myself slightly dizzy. Propping myself up on my elbows, I could get a better look around. I was sitting on a small bed. It was white, to match everything else in the room. Where the heck am I?!

"Hey dmaster! She's awake!"

Dmaster?! He became a mod just a few days ago! Wasn't he going crazy like all the other moderators? Oh why are all my friends becoming mods? A looked around the room to see who the voice belonged to.

Gliscor!

I felt really stupid by this point. Ok, so I'm not dead, I'm in a plain white room, and Gliscor and dmaster are here. I buried my face in my hands and moaned in confusion.

"TSL? You ok?"

I peeked through my fingers and looked at Gliscor with wide eyes. I must be going insane! Gliscor has been missing for months. But I had to reply.

"Y-yeah." My voice was shaky and hoarse. "What's going on? W-where am I?"

"Well you see-"

As Gliscor was beginning to explain, dmaster walked into the room. He gave me a look of confusion.
"I see she's awake," dmaster said,"But why is she looking through her hands?" He looked a me and then to Gliscor.

At this I blushed slightly in embarrassment. I sat my hands down and waited for someone to keep talking. My throat hurt too much at the moment to speak.

"I bet your wounding where you are." Dmaster looked back at me and I gave a quick, jerky nod. It made my head throb more.

"You're at Squad 6. A hidden base located near General TCG Discussion." That made sense. Both Gliscor and dmaster were TCG players. And Zyflair modded the TCG section heavily. I was such an idiot coming here.

"You aren't familiar with the Squads, are you? Ever since the mods have been going insane and banning eveyone, many members have formed squads. It helps when you have many members to watch your back. The Squads have their aguments and fights with each other, yes, but it usually doesn't get too bad."

Dmaster sighed."But everyone since I've became a mod, many of Squad 6 members have been moving to other Squads. I'm guessing they think I'll go crazy like the other mods," he muttered."Squad 1 is near the Site Discussion. You have to give them credit, they stay close to the mods. Squad 2 is near the Deck Garage. Squad 3 Organized Play. Squad 4 and 5 stay around anything Video Games. And then we have Squad 6 and 7. Both Squads move along the entire forums. It's hard yes, but it is confuses the mods at least."

All the information about squads flowed through my head. How is it I've never herd of the squads before? Not everything is making sense though. I still don't get how I'm alive. I tried speaking.

"B-but h-h-how did I s-survive Zyflair's attack?" Speaking wasn't such a good idea. It made my throat burn and as I listened to how the words were said, you could of thought I was disabled.

"We don't know," Dmaster said."We found you passed out on the street. A single gunshot wound by your waist. Everyone else on the street was dead."

This sent shivers down my spine. I'm lucky I survived, but I still don't get how I did. Zyflair was pointing his gun right at me...Thinking about this made my head hurt even more.

"Who else is in Squad 6?" I asked, struggling to keep my voice from shaking. Gliscor stood up.

"I can show you around! Come on, your stuff is on the desk and you can get something to eat downstairs," he said, pointing to the desk and then to the door in a quick manor. I gave him a puzzled looked. Can't he see I can barely talk correctly? But sitting here in pain won't help anyone and I was rather hungry. Slowly and a bit shaky, I stood.

"Ok, let's go." It was easier to make sure my voice wasn't shaky now. To tell the truth I was feeling quite a bit better. Gliscor handed my my backback-like bag and motioned me to follow him downstairs. I followed, of course. What did you think I would do, jump out the window?

I knew a few of these members. PokeChamp, Soul Seeker, more and more people I knew. Hmph, some of these people are pretty popular. We walked along the halls until we came to a rather large door.

"And this is..." Gliscor pushed the door open."The mess hall!" He put his hands out in a 'Ta-da!' kind of motion. It was a pretty good mess hall, I guess. There were a few talbles, a counter were it looks like you got you food, and another door on the side of the room. Some members that were sitting at the tables looked at me. Akward...

"Well, you can get something to eat and then meet back up with me in your room. I have to go talk with dmaster. See ya!" Gliscor ran back through the doors. I sighed and looked back to the members. Nope, didn't know any of them. How come I knew about every member outside the mess hall, but none in it? I sighed.

I grabbed what looked like soup from the counter and walked back to a table to eat. Everyone, and mean like every single member in the mess hall was staring at me. Great...


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So here's Chapter 1! Yay! I randomly picked members that were close friends or just poplular XD I also see this one is a little short, just going over 1000 words :S Well, hope you like it anyway!^_^

 

[Zyflair]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

So I become a bad guy for TWO fanfics here! XD

It's a nice read, and I hope you continue it.

 

[PokeChamp]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

OMG I made a cameo and stuff.

Pretty good, keep up the nice writing. I'm looking forward to more chapters.

 

[Sleepy]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

Thanks for the coments! And thanks to the awesome people who PM'ed me to be in the story. Glad you guys lik it ^_^
I'll get chapter 2 up as soon as I can. I'm sick with H1N1, so I'm home for a bit. That means I can work on the Chapter more!

 

[charidude]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

You got H1N1? I feel sorry for you. =(. My friend has it too. But at least your story is great. Just a question. What Squad would I be in? If any at all?

 

[Sleepy]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

You got H1N1? I feel sorry for you. =(. My friend has it too. But at least your story is great. Just a question. What Squad would I be in? If any at all?

You would most likely be in Squad 7.
And thanks ^_^

 

[charidude]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

Hmm I had an interesting game idea using your squads idea. If I wait and see more of this story I might very well make the game. Would that be okay with you?

 

[Sleepy]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

Fine with me, but I would like to explain more of the story too before you make it. There are still a lot of things left out.

 

[charidude]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

Okay.

 

[Zyflair]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

Lot of things eh? I'm rather interested to see how the plot develops.

 

[Futa]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

I made the story? Wow! Good fanfic BTW. I really enjoyed reading it.

 

[Seth1789110]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

All right, I know that Lenny thought of a sort of ban wars idea a few months or a long time ago or whatever, but then I wrote my story and now these pokebeach mod turns evil threads are popping up like crazy! Makes me feel like mine isn't original...:'( Anyways, it is good so far, I likez it. Continue I guess.

 

[Sleepy]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

All right, I know that Lenny thought of a sort of ban wars idea a few months or a long time ago or whatever, but then I wrote my story and now these pokebeach mod turns evil threads are popping up like crazy! Makes me feel like mine isn't original...:'( Anyways, it is good so far, I likez it. Continue I guess.

Don't worry, it'll change up. ^_^
Glad you like it...

 

[Staraptor]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

I love the idea of the squads. ^^
Could that possibly be from bleach? =p

Please keep going. I wanna see how the the other squads are doing. =D

Also, Seth.. what you're saying is making me have déjà vu. xp
There was a string of beach fics quite a while ago.. and someone thought their ideas were being taken.

But y'see.. all these fics have their own original flair to them.. so I don't see what the fuss is about. =p
And even if they are similar.. imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. ^-^

 

[Sleepy]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 1 up!*

I love the idea of the squads. ^^
Could that possibly be from bleach? =p

Please keep going. I wanna see how the the other squads are doing. =D

Also, Seth.. what you're saying is making me have déjà vu. xp
There was a string of beach fics quite a while ago.. and someone thought their ideas were being taken.

But y'see.. all these fics have their own original flair to them.. so I don't see what the fuss is about. =p
And even if they are similar.. imitation is the sincerest form of flattery. ^-^

Thanks Staraptor! ^_^
Yes, the squad's are kinda base off of Bleach. Hey I can't help it! I was writing a bBeach fanfic when this idea came up XP.
I'm trying to get chapter 2 up as soon as I can!

 

[Sleepy]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 2 up!*

Chapter 2: Laid-back Day

I sighed and leaned back in my chair, reading a fanfic called Ban Wars. I must admit, it was completely hilarious, but right now, even this fanfic couldn't cure my boredom. Was there anything to do here at all? A few days ago I was told I could become a part of Squad 6. Of course I did, but now I was bored out of my mind. Being a new member to the Squad, I couldn't really do anything but paperwork. I don't like paperwork! I hate paperwork. Great, now I sound like a little kid. At least now my wounds are completely healed. The only thing the hurts is my head every now and again.

A voice interrupted my jumble of thoughts."TSL, come on!" Someone was calling me. Better not be more paperwork I grumbled in my head. I turned to see who was calling me. Ah, 42 chocolate.

"Hey 42, what do you want?" I asked, sitting upright.

"A few of the members want to hang out at the Chillax Zone," he said. Were we really going to pack up and trug all the way to the Gathering of the Miscellanea just to 'hang out'? Man these people must be crazy. Grumbling a response, I closed my eyes and continued to lean back in my chair. Any person could see this meant 'no thank you'.

Even though I gave this sign, I felt a slight tugging on my arm. Ok, maybe slight wan't the right word. The rather hard tug threw me out of my chair, making me fall on the floor. I shot a death glare up at 42 chocolate.

"What the heck was that for?!" I yelled angrily up at him.

"No need to get made at me. I was just trying to get you to do something other then grumble." I crossed my arms.

"Well now I'm yelling at ya!" I felt like punching something right now.

"Since when did you become so cold TSL?" 42 chocolate let out a laugh and helped me up. "So are you coming or not?" I shook my head.

"Do you really believe I go all the way Gathering of the Miscellanea?" To my surprise, 42 chocolate burst out laughing and grabbed my arm again.

"Hey! Whadda think you're doing!" He ignored me and pulled me quickly through the halls of Squad 6. We flew past members who ether stared wide-eyed or fell down stupidly in shock. We stopped at a door with the words 'The Chillax Zone' written across in black letters. Ok, so it wasn't the real Chillax Zone. That was truly far away, but this was Squad 6's Chillax Zone, I guess. 42 chocolate opened the doors and pulled me in. Sitting around us was five members; Juliacoolo, raichupika33, PokeChamp, Electimortar, and Staraptor. The room was quite large and was pretty nice compared to the rest of Squad 6. There was a huge flat screen on the wall, some sweet speakers, awesome chairs. There was even a fresh box of pizza on the table! Then I noticed, I was the only girl among guys. Usually this doesn't affect me at all, but still.

"So did you just bring me to a room full of guys?" I laughed. PokeBeach was made up of mostly guys. I'm one of the few girls, the rest I have no idea where. Heck, I don't even know if I've seen a single girl in Squad 6 yet.

"Hey, it's not our fault you're one of the few girls!" PokeChamp exclaimed, grabbing a slice of pizza from the box.

"Well it's not my fault either!" I took a seat next to Staraptor. "Sooo, what do we really do here?"

Staraptor shrugged. "Nothing much. Chat. Eat pizza." He held up a pizza slice and continued to eat. 42 chocolate sat in the chair on the other side of me.

"TSL, looks like you bad mood is gone," he joked.

"Don't talk about it or it'll come back!" 42 laughed. I looked around the room.

"So when did you guys build a miny Chillax Zone." I chewed on a some pizza waiting for someone to answer.

"When we couldn't go all the way to the Gathering of the Miscellanea each time we wanted to eat pizza and have a laid-back day," Juliacoolo said, leaning back a cloing his eyes. A laid-back day eh? Hmm, I like it.

"Yeah, but I do miss being able to talk with people from other Squads," raichupika33 said with a slight sad look on his face. I see what they mean, quite a few of my friends aren't in Squad 6. To give one person, SotH, one of the few girls in PokeBeach and one of the people I call by their real name, is in Squad 3.

"You do know you can still chat with other Squads through PM raichupika33," explained Electimortar.

"Yes I know that! Everyone knows that! But mods can view other people's PMs and do stuff to em'," raichupika33 said.

"You're right..."

"So TSL, how ya liking Squad 6? Pretty awesome right? I think it's like Bleach." Staraptor started talking very quickly after the first few words. I think Staraptor intended that to a short question, and it turned into...well that.


"I guess so," I'm mumbled.

"What's with all this 'I guess so' TSL? Sheesh, make up your mind. Besides, this place must be a tiny bit better then living alone!" said 42 chocolate.

"It is! Though, besides the pizza, the food here is terrible." Yesterday, I had this foul soup that was...lumpy and brown...It was completely revolting. I shuddered at the thought. Everyone in the room laughed.

"Trust us, we know what it is like. We have been eating it for a whole lot longer then you!" PokeChamp laughed. The laughter died down as eveyone kept eating the pizza.

"So," I started, slowing a bit of pizza,"Does anyone know where dmaster and some other Squad members went?"

"They went to cheak on a problem with the mods. No big deal really, Dmaster just took Gliscor, Soul Seeker, and Daren," Juliacoolo explained. Hmph, figures. During the first few days here, the leader leaves.

I stood and streched. "Well, I'm heading back to my room. Thanks for the pizza guys!"

"No problem TSL!" everyone seemed to say. I could swear I herd a 'Sam' in there. No one has called me my real name in a long time. As I turned to leave, a PM wizzed past my head and stopped in the middle of the room. The PM was in a 3D shape letter. I stared at it as it slowly started to open, making a voice echo through the room.

Pm to Squad 6 Members from Charidude:
Hello Squad 6 members. This is a urgent Pm from Charidude of Squad 7. We require a few members to come and help us. Mods have attacked and we are low on supplies. And to make matters worse, the mods keeps coming back each day. Could you please come to the Game Corner as soon as posible. Thanks.

The PM closed and dropped to the floor but the members kept staring in shock. Finally people started talking, but all at once.

"A mod attack?! Who?!?!"

"Should we go and help?!"

"We can't do anything unless dmaster says so!"

"Hey!" I shouted trying to get people's attention. Everyone turned to look at me as I started to explain.

"I know you all want to help Squad 7, but we have to look at all sides of this. Raichupika33, you even said mods could change PMs. What if they change this PM to set a trap?" People let words sinking in, but before anyone could say anything, Juliacoolo stood up.

"We can't just sit here and think about it. If Squad 7 really is under attack by a mod, members could be dying as we speak. So I'm going to go help them." Juliacoolo headed towards the door.

"Juliacoolo! Wait!" I ran after him, but he was already gone. I guess this day wasn't 'laid-back' anymore at all, it was tense.

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Meh, I really don't like how this chapter turned out. Hope you enjoy it anyway! ^_^
Also, if you don't like these short chapters, tell me! If you wanna be in the story, tell me! If you want me to jump off a cliff, tell-Wait, don't tell me that one, lol.

 

[charidude]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 2 up!*

Great again. 21 grammar error in my pm though:

A mods has attacked... You need to get rid of the s in mods, or the A.'


But still great chapter. And btw,

Quote: As I turned to leave, a PM wizzed past my head and stopped in the middle of the room. I stared at it as it started to open.

I don't understand what happened right there. Could you really describe what happens? I mean, what would it look like if now it's a real 3D object?

 

[Sleepy]

RE: PokeBeach: Cold-blooded *Chapter 2 up!*

Great again. 21 grammar error in my pm though:

A mods has attacked... You need to get rid of the s in mods, or the A.'


But still great chapter. And btw,

Quote: As I turned to leave, a PM wizzed past my head and stopped in the middle of the room. I stared at it as it started to open.

I don't understand what happened right there. Could you really describe what happens? I mean, what would it look like if now it's a real 3D object?

Sorry about all the grammer mistakes in the PM. I was going to make it a single mod before, so I think my mind was still set on that XP.

Anyway, fixxed a few mistakes. As I told you, I really don't like this chapter...lol