Writing Pokemon Adventures

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This story has Ash and Dawn as a married couple and goes on the lines of the Pokemon Adventures, the Diamond and Pearl version​

Chapter 1-The Family Crest
Dawn stood, leaning over the porch overlooking the big orange sun rise over the Kanto hillside. She rubs her long flowing blue hair and sits down on a chair on the porch. Ash opens the door, two coffees in hand and sits down next to Dawn. Dawn was the Professor as she replaced Prof. Oak, who retired seven years ago this day. Sadly, Oak died the next day and never saw the results of his tutoring. Dawn and Ash had four kids, two boys, two girls. Their names were Mary, Will, Brandon and May. Ash, helped Dawn taking care of all the Pokemon in the Lab, including feeding the Pokemon

Dawn and Ash were rich as the Professor field generates an amazing amount of money. Dawn's family had a tradition. Each young lady, when reaching a certain age, they had to go through Sinnoh and complete their family crest. (Sort of like Confirmation at Church). May had reached the age that she needed to do her family crest, she walked up to Dawn and asked her all about the family crest

"Mom, what's the family crest again ?" May questioned
"Well dear, it comes a time in every girl's life in our family that they must compete their family crest. It's a symbol of your stuggle through life and when you complete it, it's a symbol that you're a mature young lady. I had to do one, I was lucky I had Ash with me to complete it" Dawn replied
"I have to do it ?" May questioned
"Yes, you're sister Mary had to do it, so do you !" Dawn replied, "Here's what you're going to do. You're fly to Sinnoh, where you'll meet Prof. Rowan. He'll give you three Pokeballs, three Poketch's and the three Sinnoh starters, Piplup, Chimchar and Turtwig. You'll meet two young men, one with a red scarf and one with a green scarf. They'll be your bodyguards. And, to keep our little secert safe, you'll be using a fake identity. You'll be Lady Berlitz, you must never speak your first name to your bodyguards, or your real name. You must whisper your first name to only the important people you'll meet. Like Gym Leaders for examples. Here take this Pokephone. Incase you want to talk to me press *1, if you want to talk your father, press * 2. If you need Prof. Rowan's help press * 3. Your bodyguards can put their important numbers in the remaining slots. But I need to fix you up" Dawn stated, taking May into the bedroom. She fixed her skirt, gave her a scarf and gave her two rings, one pearl, one diamond. And "Lady Berlitz" was off to Sinnoh

END Chapter 1
 
that was awesome i cant belive someone finally wrote a story about ash and dawn and not ash and may/misty great job try to add more charecters get some trainers like a rival for ash then a rival for dawn i would like to be in the story if u can fit me thanks if not fine but i think the story is great how old are the charecters?
 
aqua_jet, I should report you for mini-modding, it's very rude to me...

Anyway, you want to know their ages:

Ash is 29
Dawn in 27
"Lady Berlitz" is 12

I'll be posting more soon...
 
Chapter 2--Meeting the Bodyguards

Lady Berlitz did indeed do what her mother said. On the way out of the Lab, she bumped into two kids that fit the description her mother had explained

"Hello I'm" Lady Berlitz began befor she cut herself off
"Who are you ?" the kid in the red scarf asked
"I don't give my "name" to commoners" Lady Berlitz said, snobbishly
"Anyway, my name's Diamond and this is Pearl" Diamond replied
"Hello there. Anyway, I come from a wealthy family. Ever hear of Dawn and Ash Ketchum ? They're my parents" Lady Berlitz replied
"No way !" they both said shocked, "Dawn is the top-ranked Coordinator in the world and Ash was one of the best Trainers ever ! You're so lucky to have gifted parents like them !"
"I know, anyway I'm here beacuse I need to scale Mt. Coronet and get supplies needed to complete my family crest" Lady Berlitz stated
"Don't worry ! We'll take you there !" Pearl replied
"Thanks so much ! Off to Mt. Coronet !" Lady Berlitz replied
"But, we have to go through Hearthoem City and the Game Corner" Diamond replied
"No problem !" Berlitz replied

But, Berlitz would be wrong, very wrong. In fact, they have Dawn come in and knock some sense into her

END Chapter 2 !

Next Chapter: Gambling Doesn't Pay !
 
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