Pokemon: Character Reunion (Fan-fic)

[StarlightSearcher]

10 years after Ash had settled down, and married his wife, Dawn (Hey, I'm a Pearlshipper, so sue me). They all decided to come together and travel as one big pack through Kanto and remincis on there journeys.

Ash Age: 22
Pokemon: Pikachu, Torterra, Staraptor, Ambipom, Typholsion and Blastiose
Bio: Husband of Dawn, the Viridian City Gym Leader

Dawn Age: 20
Pokemon: Pikachu (female), Empoleon, Infernape, Drifblim, Lopunny AND Torterra (caught her own)
Bio: Viridian City Gym Leader

Misty Age: 27
Pokemon: Kingdra, Starmie, Gyarados, Milotic, Empoleon and Blastoise
Bio: Cerluean City Gym Leader

Brock Age: 30
Pokemon: Sudowoodo, Steelix, Crobat, Foretress, Golem and Rampardos
Bio: Pewter City Gym Leader

Tracey Age: 29
Pokemon: Venomoth, Azumarill, Scizor and Smeargle
Bio: Pokemon Sketcher/Painter

May Age: 20
Pokemon: Blaziken, Delcatty, Venasaur, Blastoise, Espeon and Pachirisu
Bio: Roving Coordinator

Max Age: 18
Pokemon: Gallade (was the Ralts he rescued), Pikachu, Secptile, Metagross, Magmar and Pidegot
Bio: Little brother of May

Okay, good, I'll post Chapter 1 up later, but please give me your opinions on what I should fix !

 

[StarlightSearcher]

Come on, ANYONE ?

 

[firemaster777]

interesting, 2 viridian city gym leaders?

 

[Freak :P]

Nice so far but aren't like Dawn 4 years apart from Ash?Anyways Ash and Dawn are double battles I guess!Keep on going write the story!

 

[Bubba235]

I just want to put my input but I think Dawn should keep Pasirichu and lose her Infernape. I just think having all of the starters is kind of weird.