Writing Pokemon Future

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Pokemon Future

Hey everybody if you want to be in this fanfic fill out the form below....please fill the form quickly so this thread doesnt get to page 2 and then nobody will see it!

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Prolouge:

The year is 2105. The world of pokemon has grown and evolved since the days of ash ketchum and his friends. A young hero is about to start his journey. We join him now on his way to the pokemon lab.

Chapter 1:

Kyle had been waiting for this day for weeks now. He already knew what pokemon were going to be in the lab but he had not made the choice of what pokemon he was going to take. Most of his friends already had their pokemon but since he was the youngest in his class he was only getting his pokemon now. Kyle went to the finest school money, or actually his rich parents money, could buy - the pokemon academy. Kyle stepped into the elevator and started his way toward the pokemon lab downstairs. On his way down he passed by the training room and saw his friends training. "After I have my pokemon I'll going to beat all of them" he thought to himself. The elevator stopped and he entered the lab. "Hey there Prof." kyle saud and waved to Prof. Pine. "Good morning Kyle, I assume you are here for your pokemon" the prof. said happily. "That's right" Kyle said. "Ok let me show you what the options are again". "There is Growlithe, Scyther, and Spheal"the Prof. said. "Ok I think I'll choose Scyther. "Nice choice" the Prof. said. "Thanks Prof." said Kyle. Kyle stepped out of the lab and started running towards the elevator to show his pokemon to his friends. He looked down for a second and bumped into somebody. When he looked up he saw Harry Princeton, the "king of his class". "Whatch where you're going, little guy" Harry said in an abnocsious way. "Hey Harry, you want to fight?" Kyle asked. "Watch you're mouth loser!, Let's go!". The two boys went into the elevator. the doors opened and they went into the training room. "Oh my god, rich boy is gonna cry after this" some kids in the corner of the room and looked at Kyle. Harry took out a pokeball that Kyle had never seen before that only an amount of money that Kyle's or Harry's familys had could buy since Harry's family was also rich. He looked at it in a jealous way. "Jealous?" Harry said. "My father bought it for me from the finest market in Italy". "You know I have more than enough money to get that ball too" Kyle said. "Yeah but you don't have it" Harry bloated. "All right let's start go Scyther!" Harry shouted and threw his pokeball. "Sy!" Kyle's Scyther said. "Let's finish this fast go Shiny Gible!" Harry said. "Ooooo" "Aaaaaa" the kids in the room said. "Scyther attack with Quick Attack and go into False Swipe!" Kyle shouted. Scyther attacked but Gible dodged. Scyther crashed into the floor. "Gible finish him off now!" Harry said. "Use Dragon Rush!". Scyther got hit and was knocked out. "Scyther return!" Kyle said and Scyther returned to the pokeball. "I told you to watch your mouth" Harry said and headed towards the elevator. "Wait!" Kyle said and ran to him. "How did you get it to learn Dragon Rush already?". "I take him to the best training gyms and give him the best food on Earth everyday" Harry said. "You could do it too if you knew how to use your money" he said and went into the elevator. "Next time we'll win, right Scyther?!" Kyle said and looked at his new pokeball. He put it into his pocket and entered the elevator.

Chapter 2:

Kyle left the academy and started walking. He took out his map and looked at it. "Looks like the next city is Luminium City" he said to himself. "But first I have to pass through Luminium Forest". Kyle went into the forest. Suddenly he heard a rustling sound in the tall grass. "Shaymin" said something from inside the grass. But what jumped at Kyle from the grass was no Shaymin. "Lotad" the pokemon said. Lotad hit Kyle and he fell back into a pond. “Oh man now now I’m wet!” Kyle shouted. Suddenly more and more Lotads came to the pond and came closer to Kyle. “All right let’s go Scyther!” Kyle shouted. “Scyther” Kyle’s Scyther said. “Now use False Swipe!” Kyle shouted. One of the Lotads got hit and fainted. “Now go pokeball!” Kyle shouted. Lotad entered the pokeball and was caught. “Yeah I caught my first pokemon!” Kyle shouted and frightened the other Lotads away. He left the woods and entered Luminium City. He looked around and kept walking. Kyle bumped into someone. “I’m so sorry” he said. “Never mind” the lady said. “Hey are you a pokemon trainer?” she asked. “Yes I am!” Kyle said proudly. “My name is Sarah and I’m the gym leader here”. “My name is Kyle and I can’t believe you’re a gym leader!” Kyle said in a surprised way. “Yeah I am why don’t you come by the gym sometime for a rest and a battle?” she said. “That sounds great let’s go now!” Kyle said. “All right!” she said. “I’m always ready for a challenge!” The two went to the gym and Kyle put his pokemon into a healing machine, an invention that his father had invented in 2102. “So you’re rich right?” Sarah asked him. “Yeah but I don’t like to showoff” he said. “All right are you ready for your battle?” she asked. “Let’s go!” They entered the arena and got ready for their battle. “This battle will be two on two!” the referee said. “Go!” “All right go Lotad!” Kyle shouted. “Go Buizel!” Sarah said. “Lotad use Mist!” Kyle said. The arena got filled with a heavy fog. “Buizel use Water Sport to blow the fog away!” Sarah shouted. The mist blew away but Lotad was gone. “Now surprise them and use Astonish! Buizel was hit and flew back. “Buizel get up and use Water Gun!” Sarah shouted. Lotad was hit hard and fainted. “The winner is Sarah!” the referee said. “Lotad return!” Kyle said. “Now go Scyther!” “Scyther” Kyle’s Scyther said. “Scyther use Slash to finish Buizel off!” Kyle shouted. Buizel was hit and fainted. “The winner is Kyle!” the referee said. “Oh man Buizel return!” Sarah said. “Now go Piplup use Bubblebeam!” “Scyther dodge it and use Quick Attack!” Kyle shouted. Piplup was hit and slammed against the wall. “Now finish it with Razor Wind!” Kyle said. Piplup was hit and the match was over. “The winner is Kyle!” “Well that was a nice battle and since you beat me you get the Luminium City Gym Badge” Sarah said. “Oh that’s awesome thanks!” Kyle said happily. “No problem and whenever you’re in town fell free to stop by for a little battle” Sarah said. “All right I will!” Kyle said and left the gym.
 
Making a fan-fic so soon after not even finishing one? I spent my time on that form for nothing?:( Poor Bagon...
 
Form:

Name: Harry Princeton
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Starter Pokemon (Must be basic but not to strong): Gible
Description: A rich, self-centered megalomaniac who thinks he can top anyone. His family fortune rivals that of Kyle's. He hires mercenaries to look for valuable pokemon, if he doesn't like what they find he fires them and releases the captured pokemon. This went on until he hired a mercenary for $100000000, and the mercenary caught him a new born shiny Gible. This was the happiest day of Harry's life. He decided to take care of Gible at an early stage. Gible was given tri-weekly massages and the best food on the planet. Harry always brought Gible to training gyms making it hold macho braces at all times. He even hired a virologist to give the Gible the pokerus. Harry wanted to train Gible to the highest extents.
 
=O Rivalry battle FTW!:D Can't wait 'til your Kyle goes on his adventure and meets Harry every now and then. If that's gonna happen.=F Good job with this one, you used the details I gave in the form very nicely. I'll be readiing the rest.=O

P.s: It's rather too short compared to other fan-fics though.:(
 
You should space the words out more. Look at how Max_Shade IV types his stories, or me or I Like Pokeymanz or James (I'm sorry If I left anyone out, oh ya, Gamercal). It hurts my eyes to see the big chunk of words stuck together.
 
Name: Ryan
Gender: Male
Age: 14
Starter Pokemon (Must be basic but not to strong): Pikachu
Description: A headstrong, independent teenager. He's very close to his Pikachu as Ash was to his.
 
I think that Kyle should have some more interaction with the Lotad.:p He should have said something like, "This is our first battle, so do your best!" or something.:p
 
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