Writing Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers Of Dimensions

[mickmon95]

I felt like I was falling deeper and deeper. Then I hit the ground hard,like a meteor!
I awoke to see a Torchic in front of me. "Hey you okay!" exclaimed Torchic. I awoke and pinched myself. (How can a pokemon talk?) I thought. "How can a pokemon talk to a human,like me?" I asked. "Your not a human! Your a Piplup!" Torchic laughed. I looked at my reflection in the water to see a Piplup. "What's your name?" Torchic asked. (My name.....I don't remember. What was my name?) I thought. "I'll just call you Piplup!" Torchic exclaimed. I felt a warm feeling with Torchic,yet I am confused. Well for now I'll hang out with Torchic.

 

[mickmon95]

Chapter 1: Disaster Strikes

After the introductions Torchic and I headed to a building shaped like a Clefable. We walked into the building and for some reason Torchic was trembling. "Sorry just a little nervous!" Torchic reassured me. "Wait,where are we?" I asked. "This is the Clefable Pokemon Savers Squad Tent,oh wait I forgot to tell you that-" Torchic was cut off by a massive shaking. We both fell and rolled down the hill to the spring where I met Torchic. I looked to see the big rock turned into a cave. "Whatever is going on its coming from inside the cave. Whatever it is It can't be good! Wanna go?" asked Torchic. For some reason I felt that I should go in,so I nodded.
We walked in to see a pokemon,Rhydon. He was drilling into the wall,it cracked open and a big rock fragment popped out. It had some strange symbols on it. "Hey,you two kids shouldn't be spying on a treasure hunter,it'll get dangerous!" Rhydon exclaimed. (What a bunch of babies,these pipsqueacks should be fun and easy to whomp!) Rhydon thought. Some how I could here Rhydon's thoughts,weird. He ran right passed us shoving us to the walls.
Torchic and I stood their in confusion.

 

[mickmon95]

RE: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers Of Dimensions Intro.

hello? Anyone outhere? Need two more team members!
Pokemon:
Personality:
Backround:
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