Writing Pokemon Reign of Team Rocket

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DogMaster40

HEEREE'S JOHNNY!
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Pease note that some parts are PG-13 material. Not all characters will survive.
Prologue
Chaos was unavoidable on Fang Island. Ever since Giovanni and Team Rocket set up base on the island, chaos had ruled. About a month ago, one of Giovanni's Admins found Cipher's Shadow Pokemon files. Giovanni decided to set up a base on a somewhat large island.
Fang Islanders were blind sided by the Rocket's attack. Control of the island was swiftly taken. It seemed Giovanni had already won.
Fang Islanders were not ready to give up thier homes without a fight. They assembled Team Fang, the direct opposition to Team Rocket. Other citizens helped to provide Team Fang with supplies, but didn't officially join the Fangs.
Throughout the conflict, Team Fang suffered many defeats. Members were often killed for resisting Team Rocket's control. Giovanni was a ruthless dictator.
The last hope for the islanders was a young trainer named Travis Wolfe. He is a native of Fang Island, and would give his life to save it.
 
RE: Pokemon XD 2: Giovanni Returns (my fic contest entry)

Good job. Can't wait till more comes.
 
I have had major writer's block lately, and school dosen't help much. I'll try to get the next chapter ASAP, but I can't promise any specific time.
 
well its good thats for sure but i say it has the right ideas but i think you need more descriptive words but otherthen that its OK put up some more chapters and ill check it out
 
muwhahaha, I already know how this story will go!

james will come and PWN everyone on the island!:p

Lol, nah, but I'm wondering how this'll go, I might check it out if it turns out good(if you couldn't tell, I'm a team rocket supporter)!:D
 
Wait a sec, I already posted here...? That's strange....ignore one of the parts in my message on my fanfic...ya...just do that and you'll understand...
 
Chapter 1.
"Arcanine, use Fire Blast!" Travis ordered his large friend. Travis is a fairly tall man, wearing a brown western style hat. His eyes are an icy blue, and his hair was about the same color as his hat. "Metagross, dodge and use Hyper Beam!" a young and enthusiastic trainer, Bob, yelled quickly. His command was futile. "Metagross is unable to battle! Travis and Arcanine win!" shouted a referee. "Great job, Arcanine!" Travis congratulated his partner, returning him to his unique, green Pokeball. " You did a great job out there. You got the better of us." Bob said, clearly dissapointed. "Keep training and you'll get better, kid." Travis replied.
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"Have we found Trav yet?" an older woman asked the leader of Team Fang. " He has been located near Mauvile City in the Hoenn region. I should be able to send a Dragonite out at about four in the morning." the leader responded. " Why can't we send one out now?" demanded the woman "You know my son is our only hope!" " I can't risk being discovered by the Rockets, Annie! You should know they are everywhere until midnight. We can't be too careful right now." he quickly responded. " I guess you're right, Tom." Annie said.
 
Good chapter. Sorry for the late reply.

What you have is a good start, just keep going like this and it'll turn out fine.
 
Okay, next Chapter!
Tom checked his watch, 3:46. Still need to wait, Travis is our only hope. Can't screw up.he thought to himself. "Tom!" a young man shouted, running toward the leader. "What is it?" Tom replied. "Sir, the Rockets attacked a base near Lake Lupis around 2 A.M. we lost five men in an explosion near the -" "FIVE MEN! What were they keeping in there!" Tom shouted as he shook his head in disbelief. "There was a gas leak, sir. A rocket apparently used a fire attack near the line." the man said quickly. "This is just wonderful! Now Giovonni is going to think we're making bombs! Jack, tell General Walsh to get some firearms ready." Tom said. "Sir, why do we need guns? They don't seem -" "Because the Rockets will likely start carring guns now!" Tom interrupted. "We need to make sure our men are protected." "As you wish sir." Jack turned and left. Tom checked his watch again. 4:17. "Dragonite," he said as he let the Dragonite out of it's Pokeball. "Deliver this letter to Travis, he's around Mauville in the Hoenn region." Dragonite nodded as it took the letter. "Be careful, he's our last hope" he said as the Dragonite took off.
 
Sorry for the long wait.
Chapter 3
"Giovanni, sir our raid on the Lake Lupis Science lab was successful, but we lost three men in an explosion." a grunt said. "An explosion? From what?" Giovanni asked. "We believe it was a bomb they were building sir, they lost five of their men, as well." the grunt replied "A bomb? Well, looks like they're getting serious about their freedom. From now on, all Rockets must carry a pistol with them, we'll make sure those pesky Fangs pay for their resistance." Giovanni ordered. "Yes, sir" the grunt said as he left. So, they think they can outsmart me!?! They've gotten themselves in deep trouble, now. Once they're out of my way, I'll spread my empire to Hoenn. They won't put up to much of a fight. "Giovanni, sir we've successfully transformed all the Pokemon captured at the lab into Shadow Pokemon." an Admin said. "Excellent, step up our sky patrols, Carlos, I have a feeling they'll try and send for help soon. They're getting desperate, if they get any help, I want them dealt with before they get to the island, got it?" Giovanni ordered. "Yes sir!" Carlos said. He quickly ran out of Giovanni's office. After we find the base it's over for them. Giovanni walked out of his office.
 
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