Writing Pokemon - The colours of the world - Rebun region [13+]

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Prolouge​

"There.....I wonder how the testing will go?", Said a scientist
"Well that's what we need to find out", Emitted a voice from the darkness
"Free it!", The man said, as the light only showed up to his weighst
"What!?, that's insane it'll kill us all!", Another scientist argues
"I am the owner of this territory now free it!"
The scientesit wearing the TR stitched lab coat turned around scowling at the man cloaked in darkness. He pressed some buttons upon the keyboard, every time the water in the tube reducing into smaller tubes below, the blacked out tube then gained visibility and the thing inside was a pokemon never seen before. As soon as the green liquid drained away the man walked out of the shadows towards the big container and placed his hand on it.
The pokemon opened it's 2 emerald shining eye's. The pokemon or supposably Bio weapon cried out, long ear screatching and weird. It opened it's mouth and the man's eyes suddenly grew larger as the pokemon drew energy towards it. The scientists screamed dropping what they have and running out of the room. The beaming sound that came from the circle of energy that sorrounded it was amazing, it's black body floating and punching against the glass, cracking it in the proccess. It's mouth opening as far as it can and the loudest but trongest Hyper beam came from it, from the lab that was located 3 miles underground was no match for the pokemon's golden hyper beam. It's body streaked Gold as it attacks.
After half an hour of destruction the pokemon says in a deep voice as he flew off
"To continue and defeat him"

 

[SixaxiS]

quite a few grammar and spelling errors, but good otherwise

 

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Yeah sorry about that my Grammar and spelling is pretty bad but I need to get used to my new keyboard....again

 

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Chapter 1
To begin with...​

Luke awoke in a daze looking at his Frigler, the unique pokemon of the Rebun region that he was lucky to catch myself, It was floating which it usually didn't do unless it was really excited. Luke lifted myself from his patterned bed and sat up rubbing his hazel brown hair. Luke smiled and wondered over to it. He rubbed it on his spiked yellow haired head. It turned and smiled at the 5 foot tall stature that was patting it on his head.
Luke smiled pleasently.
The Frigler creid out in joy and flew out of the room with contempt with it's white, purple stained arms trailing across the floor. Luke walked into the bathroom around 5 minutes later he came out looking fresher than ever. He took his black jacket and swung it over his black shirt hanging dead on his shoulders. Luke locked the door as he came out he turned around and suddenly stopped, Ashley who was the young girl that also lived cross the hall from Luke was standing right in front of him holding a teddiursa doll in a yellow dress.
"Ooops, hehehe, sorry Ashley, I have to get on my way, I will see ya when I get back", Luke explained as he kneeled down
"OOOOOoooooowwwwwwkaaaaayyyyy", Ashley said, in a childish voice.
Luke smiled, stood up and walked round Ashley. As Luke turned the corner he almost slipped on a pokeball which was just lying on the ground, seeing as though no-one would be around at about 7:00 O'clock in the morning.
"Hey ashley, Take this and give it to your parents, say Luke found it on the stairway", Luke said talking to Ashley, rolling the pokeball at her.
"Gotcha!", She replied
Luke quicky ran downstairs to catch up to his Frigler. Passing one of the Flats cleaner - a Drigionas, Like a Gastly but with black arms and white legs. Luke rolled his sleeves up and slid down the banister, which almost instantly caught him up with his Frigler. In no time they both reached the green door, which was only stained because of a Drigionas has a little fight over a drink. Both of them had an arguements of whether to sell drinks or not and they got into a little fight. There was no-one at the counter so Luke didn't have to mention that he was leaving so he just carried on. He opened the door to a fresh warm spring day, with a patch of grass in front of him. Drigionas were watering the plants near the huildas's which were skipping around them with there green, flower-like body and pink petals fluttering in the wind.
Luke took a deep breath and walked along the stone path across the front of the flats followed by his Frigler floating with it's white, purple stained head leaning forwards.