Chapter 1:
Once upon a time in the ancient kingdom of elya an ancient war roared across the lands, a war that has been on for over 300 years continuously. It was a time fists and blood, where pokemon would only be there for the cause of evil, for the cause of destruction. This war has many casualties and there were many more to be made.
The prophecy was made that one boy would rise out of all the other ordinary people to throw down the evil kings who fought over all the land and wealth they could possible own.
Our story starts in a village known as rodyl, a village on the edge of kingdom where people where already to familiar with the war. Because this village was so close to the border it was also a military outpost of the kings forces against the southern kingdom. The story goes on from here……
Mom: Dennis! Come get your diner, now that’s still hot.
Dennis: alright! I’m coming mother.
For the first in 3 weeks the village was pretty quiet and peaceful. The village has been under recent attacks but it could manage.
Dennis: mom, how long are the attacks going to continue?
Mom: I don’t know my son, but I hope it’s soon over so we can go back to the fields and get our crops off the fields before it is al wasted.
Dennis: I hope so to mom.
Mom: I hope dad comes home soon because it’s getting late.
Dennis: I’m going to search for him mom, ill find him.
Mom: no you won’t Dennis, it’s been past your bedtime so you’re going to bed and dad should be home any second.
Dennis: can you ask him if he could come by my bed if he’s home so he can give me a goodnight kiss mom?
Mom: sure I will Dennis, go wash yourself and then go the bed and I will be there in a second.
Dennis: okay mom, I love you.
Mom: I love you to Dennis, now go to bed and no more delays, we have a lot to do tomorrow.
Dennis: alright mom.
Mom: (whispers) what a delightful kid, but as stubborn as his father.
It was a silent night but I couldn’t sleep very well. I didn’t sleep very well at all last weeks, but I didn’t know why. Maybe it was because I was nervous because it was almost my 12th birthday and then I would get my very own pokemon, or maybe it was because of the raging war I didn’t have any idea. Suddenly…
Mom: Dennis, get out of bed immediately! We’re under heavy attack, and the enemy forces are coming!
Dennis: where’s dad, why isn’t dad with us mom?
Mom: you’re dad went out with all the other men to meet up with the attackers, my love. So we have to run into the forest so we are secure, we have to go to the secret hideout where we are safe.
Dennis: alright mom. Wait mom… where’s the necklace I got from dad for my 11th birthday?
Mom: no time to get that Dennis, we have to run I can see the torches of the attackers.
Dennis: I need my necklace mom, without it I’m nothing.
Dennis: O wait, can see it over there.
Mom: Dennis, take cover dear.
As soon as I dropped to the floor something came crashing through the wall. I couldn’t see what it, but I was frightened at the howl I heard from the beast standing before us.
Mom: Go Ivysaur! Use your razor leaf attack on that houndoom!
Houndoom got seriously hit with the razor leaf and got knocked down.
Mom: Dennis, get to the hideout I will out houndoom back as long as possible for you to get to safety.
Dennis: mom, come with me, please come with me!!!
Mom: you have to be a brave boy Dennis, run, just run!
I saw mom started to cry, as soon as I started running a Flamethrower came over my shoulder. It was the same houndoom, it somehow managed to recover from the razor leaf attack and came after me. It was suddenly jerked back by a vine whip, Mom: Dennis!!! Keep running !!!.
I reached the edge of the forest but I couldn’t see anybody in front of me or behind me, I just kept running through the night. Then I tripped over a stick and fell down to the floor, ouch! That hurts. I tried to stand up but I fell to the floor immediately, I broke my left foot when I fell down and now I couldn’t get up properly.
Aaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrroooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Oh no that was the houndoom that was fighting my mom, it’s coming after me,
But that means….
No I had to believe mom was alright, and started to crawl to an open spot in the forest so any villagers could see me and take me with them.
Then I saw it, just 90 feet away from where I was lying.
I started to get to that point but as soon as I neared it something crashed into me from the back, I smacked to the floor and almost lost conscious.
When I looked up I saw the houndoom standing right in front off me, his teeth clearly visible and blooded, and his eyes where as red as the blood that was on his teeth. I was frozen solid and couldn’t bare the strength to cry out.
I saw houndoom coming in at me and as soon as it was about 4 yards away from me it crouched, prepared to jump and take me down with his teeth.
This was it, the end of my life. Where was mom? Where was dad? Where were all the people I loved so much, would I see them soon…
I saw the houndoom jump towards me, a tear dropped on the floor and I shouted: Nooooooooooooo!
But after 5 seconds I looked up, I was still alive what happened?
I looked around and there was it standing. Just a male nidoran, but I never have seen this before, it was almost twice the size a normal male nidoran had, and it was standing between me and the evil houndoom. Why was this nidoran protecting me, was it feeling that I was in danger, that I needed protecting, I didn’t know but as soon as I felt that nidoran ran towards houndoom I fell face down in the dirt and lost my conscious. The last I heard was houndoom screaming.
Chapter 2: What happened?
Where am I? I woke up in a small cave I think on the eastern side of the forest.
How did I get here?
Nido!
In a sudden flash the big nidoran was standing in front of me.
I could see it was severely damaged by the fight it had with the houndoom.
He had lost an eye and there was a chunk out of his left ear. Furthermore there were some scratches and some open wounds around his body but nothing that would put him in real danger.
The nidoran was still shy and didn’t come very close to me at first, but I couldn’t stand properly and I have to get myself something to eat or at least a stick so I could get along with a little bit of ease. When I tried to stand nidoran came rushing in and dropped me down. Ouch, that hurt nidoran. Why did you do that?
Then I saw it, it had collected some sort of weird kind of fruits. And it had one in his mouth for me. That’s nice nidoran, thank you very much. The fruit was delicious and it was enough for me to at least last till diner.
But I had to get up and search for my mom and dad. So I looked at nidoran and then went searching for a good stick that could support my weight because of my broken foot.
After almost an half hour searching I found a good stick just outside the cave were nidoran and I were in.
I looked at nidoran and I could see that it was a sleep, healing his wounds with rest, but I couldn’t rest. My mom and dad could have been captive or could have been in danger even now. Or maybe they were …………
I didn’t want to think about it, I started walking towards the village and I could see big clouds of smoke coming over the trees as soon as I got closer to the village. I started to cry, and shouted: Mom, Dad, I’m coming mom, Dad. I won’t leave you behind mom and neither you dad. Then my body froze. The entire village was burned and some buildings were burning still. I looked around and our once so lively village was now nothing more than ash and blood. I slowly started to walk around the village and was searching for my parents. As soon as I came close to my house I saw it, the pain that came from my broken foot didn’t even reach me at this moment. There she was, lying face down in a puddle of water that was coloured red. I walked to the body and fell down on my knees.
I turned her around and there was she, my mom.
I just sat there for more than 3 hours just crying and telling myself she could wake up.
Dennis: wake up mom, please wake up.
Why don’t you wake up. They’re gone now, you can stop acting.
You can take care of my now and we can go search for dad.
But she didn’t respond, and I held her closer then I ever did. A few feet away I saw ivysaur.
Dennis: ivysaur come help me. Ivysaur come over here.
But even ivysaur didn’t respond.
Dennis: mom, help me.
Please help me.
I kept crying and then I felt an arm on my shoulder and I turned around.
Dennis: who … snik…snik… who are you?
My name is Tyler.
Tyler: what’s your name boy?
Dennis: my name is Dennis, sir.
Tyler: alright Dennis, let’s go.
Dennis: where are we going to sir?
Tyler: we’re going to Mirda Dennis, that’s a village about 20 miles from here.
I heard from the attack and we came as soon as possible but it was already too late. The entire village was burning when we arrived and no survivors were found.
Dennis: no survivors were found?
That means,… that my, my dad didn’t survive either.
Tyler: I’m sorry Dennis, there was nothing we could do about it.
I started to cry once more, and Tyler picked me up and put me on his back.
We walked towards the group that was waiting for us.
Dennis: Tyler, can you do me a favour?
Tyler: tell me Dennis what is it?
Dennis: can you bury my mom and her ivysaur so I know she will rest peacefully?
Tyler: that’s okay Dennis, I will do that, you just wait here.
Tyler put me down on a wagon.
Tyler: Go Onix! Dig a good and decent hole for this woman and her ivysaur, so we can bury them and give them finely some rest.
Roooaaaarrrr. Onix made a nice and decent hole in the ground and tyler picked up my mom and her ivysaur and put them in the hole.
She looked so peaceful when she was lying there and I thought I saw her smile for a moment.
A tear dropped down my cheek as Tyler filled back up the hole and put a stone on top of it and wrote on it.
Here lies Brenda and her ivysaur. May she find some rest.
We then leaved towards Mirda, the hometown of Tyler.
Dennis: how long till we are there Tyler?
Tyler: almost a half day travel with this speed Dennis.
Nido!!!!
We all stopped and looked behind us, there came that nidoran that saved me from the houndoom, and it jumped up the wagon and rushed towards me and hugged me tight. Nido! Nido! Nido! Nido!
Tyler: It is happy to see you again Dennis.
Is this your pokemon?
Dennis: I don’t have a pokemon yet Tyler, I have to become twelve in a week, so I couldn’t have a pokemon. But this one saved me from an houndoom yesterday the same houndoom that killed my mother, and I still don’t know why but it will be my friend forever isn’t that right nidoran?
Nido! Nido!
That’s right. You and me forever.
Friends forever.
And as soon as I said that, nidoran turned all white and started to evolve.
We all looked in amazement as nidoran turned into nidorino.
Nidorino!
It still kept his extraordinary size, because it was almost still half times bigger than the most nidorino’s I ever saw. It’s eye wasn’t back and that piece out of his ear wasn’t back either. It would all be a scar for life, but also a scar that would prove our most valuable friendship we would build in our lives.
hope you guys liked it so far,
i will give you another chapter if i can tomorrow please comment on ym story so i can see what i can improve.
greetz,
davincio
Once upon a time in the ancient kingdom of elya an ancient war roared across the lands, a war that has been on for over 300 years continuously. It was a time fists and blood, where pokemon would only be there for the cause of evil, for the cause of destruction. This war has many casualties and there were many more to be made.
The prophecy was made that one boy would rise out of all the other ordinary people to throw down the evil kings who fought over all the land and wealth they could possible own.
Our story starts in a village known as rodyl, a village on the edge of kingdom where people where already to familiar with the war. Because this village was so close to the border it was also a military outpost of the kings forces against the southern kingdom. The story goes on from here……
Mom: Dennis! Come get your diner, now that’s still hot.
Dennis: alright! I’m coming mother.
For the first in 3 weeks the village was pretty quiet and peaceful. The village has been under recent attacks but it could manage.
Dennis: mom, how long are the attacks going to continue?
Mom: I don’t know my son, but I hope it’s soon over so we can go back to the fields and get our crops off the fields before it is al wasted.
Dennis: I hope so to mom.
Mom: I hope dad comes home soon because it’s getting late.
Dennis: I’m going to search for him mom, ill find him.
Mom: no you won’t Dennis, it’s been past your bedtime so you’re going to bed and dad should be home any second.
Dennis: can you ask him if he could come by my bed if he’s home so he can give me a goodnight kiss mom?
Mom: sure I will Dennis, go wash yourself and then go the bed and I will be there in a second.
Dennis: okay mom, I love you.
Mom: I love you to Dennis, now go to bed and no more delays, we have a lot to do tomorrow.
Dennis: alright mom.
Mom: (whispers) what a delightful kid, but as stubborn as his father.
It was a silent night but I couldn’t sleep very well. I didn’t sleep very well at all last weeks, but I didn’t know why. Maybe it was because I was nervous because it was almost my 12th birthday and then I would get my very own pokemon, or maybe it was because of the raging war I didn’t have any idea. Suddenly…
Mom: Dennis, get out of bed immediately! We’re under heavy attack, and the enemy forces are coming!
Dennis: where’s dad, why isn’t dad with us mom?
Mom: you’re dad went out with all the other men to meet up with the attackers, my love. So we have to run into the forest so we are secure, we have to go to the secret hideout where we are safe.
Dennis: alright mom. Wait mom… where’s the necklace I got from dad for my 11th birthday?
Mom: no time to get that Dennis, we have to run I can see the torches of the attackers.
Dennis: I need my necklace mom, without it I’m nothing.
Dennis: O wait, can see it over there.
Mom: Dennis, take cover dear.
As soon as I dropped to the floor something came crashing through the wall. I couldn’t see what it, but I was frightened at the howl I heard from the beast standing before us.
Mom: Go Ivysaur! Use your razor leaf attack on that houndoom!
Houndoom got seriously hit with the razor leaf and got knocked down.
Mom: Dennis, get to the hideout I will out houndoom back as long as possible for you to get to safety.
Dennis: mom, come with me, please come with me!!!
Mom: you have to be a brave boy Dennis, run, just run!
I saw mom started to cry, as soon as I started running a Flamethrower came over my shoulder. It was the same houndoom, it somehow managed to recover from the razor leaf attack and came after me. It was suddenly jerked back by a vine whip, Mom: Dennis!!! Keep running !!!.
I reached the edge of the forest but I couldn’t see anybody in front of me or behind me, I just kept running through the night. Then I tripped over a stick and fell down to the floor, ouch! That hurts. I tried to stand up but I fell to the floor immediately, I broke my left foot when I fell down and now I couldn’t get up properly.
Aaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrroooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
Oh no that was the houndoom that was fighting my mom, it’s coming after me,
But that means….
No I had to believe mom was alright, and started to crawl to an open spot in the forest so any villagers could see me and take me with them.
Then I saw it, just 90 feet away from where I was lying.
I started to get to that point but as soon as I neared it something crashed into me from the back, I smacked to the floor and almost lost conscious.
When I looked up I saw the houndoom standing right in front off me, his teeth clearly visible and blooded, and his eyes where as red as the blood that was on his teeth. I was frozen solid and couldn’t bare the strength to cry out.
I saw houndoom coming in at me and as soon as it was about 4 yards away from me it crouched, prepared to jump and take me down with his teeth.
This was it, the end of my life. Where was mom? Where was dad? Where were all the people I loved so much, would I see them soon…
I saw the houndoom jump towards me, a tear dropped on the floor and I shouted: Nooooooooooooo!
But after 5 seconds I looked up, I was still alive what happened?
I looked around and there was it standing. Just a male nidoran, but I never have seen this before, it was almost twice the size a normal male nidoran had, and it was standing between me and the evil houndoom. Why was this nidoran protecting me, was it feeling that I was in danger, that I needed protecting, I didn’t know but as soon as I felt that nidoran ran towards houndoom I fell face down in the dirt and lost my conscious. The last I heard was houndoom screaming.
Chapter 2: What happened?
Where am I? I woke up in a small cave I think on the eastern side of the forest.
How did I get here?
Nido!
In a sudden flash the big nidoran was standing in front of me.
I could see it was severely damaged by the fight it had with the houndoom.
He had lost an eye and there was a chunk out of his left ear. Furthermore there were some scratches and some open wounds around his body but nothing that would put him in real danger.
The nidoran was still shy and didn’t come very close to me at first, but I couldn’t stand properly and I have to get myself something to eat or at least a stick so I could get along with a little bit of ease. When I tried to stand nidoran came rushing in and dropped me down. Ouch, that hurt nidoran. Why did you do that?
Then I saw it, it had collected some sort of weird kind of fruits. And it had one in his mouth for me. That’s nice nidoran, thank you very much. The fruit was delicious and it was enough for me to at least last till diner.
But I had to get up and search for my mom and dad. So I looked at nidoran and then went searching for a good stick that could support my weight because of my broken foot.
After almost an half hour searching I found a good stick just outside the cave were nidoran and I were in.
I looked at nidoran and I could see that it was a sleep, healing his wounds with rest, but I couldn’t rest. My mom and dad could have been captive or could have been in danger even now. Or maybe they were …………
I didn’t want to think about it, I started walking towards the village and I could see big clouds of smoke coming over the trees as soon as I got closer to the village. I started to cry, and shouted: Mom, Dad, I’m coming mom, Dad. I won’t leave you behind mom and neither you dad. Then my body froze. The entire village was burned and some buildings were burning still. I looked around and our once so lively village was now nothing more than ash and blood. I slowly started to walk around the village and was searching for my parents. As soon as I came close to my house I saw it, the pain that came from my broken foot didn’t even reach me at this moment. There she was, lying face down in a puddle of water that was coloured red. I walked to the body and fell down on my knees.
I turned her around and there was she, my mom.
I just sat there for more than 3 hours just crying and telling myself she could wake up.
Dennis: wake up mom, please wake up.
Why don’t you wake up. They’re gone now, you can stop acting.
You can take care of my now and we can go search for dad.
But she didn’t respond, and I held her closer then I ever did. A few feet away I saw ivysaur.
Dennis: ivysaur come help me. Ivysaur come over here.
But even ivysaur didn’t respond.
Dennis: mom, help me.
Please help me.
I kept crying and then I felt an arm on my shoulder and I turned around.
Dennis: who … snik…snik… who are you?
My name is Tyler.
Tyler: what’s your name boy?
Dennis: my name is Dennis, sir.
Tyler: alright Dennis, let’s go.
Dennis: where are we going to sir?
Tyler: we’re going to Mirda Dennis, that’s a village about 20 miles from here.
I heard from the attack and we came as soon as possible but it was already too late. The entire village was burning when we arrived and no survivors were found.
Dennis: no survivors were found?
That means,… that my, my dad didn’t survive either.
Tyler: I’m sorry Dennis, there was nothing we could do about it.
I started to cry once more, and Tyler picked me up and put me on his back.
We walked towards the group that was waiting for us.
Dennis: Tyler, can you do me a favour?
Tyler: tell me Dennis what is it?
Dennis: can you bury my mom and her ivysaur so I know she will rest peacefully?
Tyler: that’s okay Dennis, I will do that, you just wait here.
Tyler put me down on a wagon.
Tyler: Go Onix! Dig a good and decent hole for this woman and her ivysaur, so we can bury them and give them finely some rest.
Roooaaaarrrr. Onix made a nice and decent hole in the ground and tyler picked up my mom and her ivysaur and put them in the hole.
She looked so peaceful when she was lying there and I thought I saw her smile for a moment.
A tear dropped down my cheek as Tyler filled back up the hole and put a stone on top of it and wrote on it.
Here lies Brenda and her ivysaur. May she find some rest.
We then leaved towards Mirda, the hometown of Tyler.
Dennis: how long till we are there Tyler?
Tyler: almost a half day travel with this speed Dennis.
Nido!!!!
We all stopped and looked behind us, there came that nidoran that saved me from the houndoom, and it jumped up the wagon and rushed towards me and hugged me tight. Nido! Nido! Nido! Nido!
Tyler: It is happy to see you again Dennis.
Is this your pokemon?
Dennis: I don’t have a pokemon yet Tyler, I have to become twelve in a week, so I couldn’t have a pokemon. But this one saved me from an houndoom yesterday the same houndoom that killed my mother, and I still don’t know why but it will be my friend forever isn’t that right nidoran?
Nido! Nido!
That’s right. You and me forever.
Friends forever.
And as soon as I said that, nidoran turned all white and started to evolve.
We all looked in amazement as nidoran turned into nidorino.
Nidorino!
It still kept his extraordinary size, because it was almost still half times bigger than the most nidorino’s I ever saw. It’s eye wasn’t back and that piece out of his ear wasn’t back either. It would all be a scar for life, but also a scar that would prove our most valuable friendship we would build in our lives.
hope you guys liked it so far,
i will give you another chapter if i can tomorrow please comment on ym story so i can see what i can improve.
greetz,
davincio
